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| Emilee | I'm Not Crazy | 07/18/2006 11:26 am |
| I'm impressed with this story. You've certainly made Spike/William an enigma. I wouldn't be surprised if there was something nasty in his past priod to Angelus. Giles is a rat bastard. And he has the audacity to call vampires souless. I can't wait to see where you'll go from here with this. As much as I find the split personality interesting, I'm kinda hoping for an eventual merge. AND I can't wait to see how the spuffy fits in, b/c Will seems way too childlike to develop much beyond puppy love, I could see Spike developing the adult feelings. I'm interested in the apparent difference in emotional maturity as well. I'd put Will at about 10-12, definitely pre-pubescent whereas Spike seems to be the more adult. Excellent start, can't wait for more. |
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| deedo | I'm Not Crazy | 06/30/2006 03:34 pm |
I'm glad you decided to continue this story as well, I couldn't really choose which I liked more
I totally love Will
looking forward to read more |
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| Robyn | I'm Not Crazy | 06/30/2006 12:00 am |
I love the protectiveness of Willow and Buffy for Will and Buffy chewing out Giles for his unapologetic demands. I really like the innocent sweetness of Will and Spike’s reason for Will being out most of the time. Thank you for the update. I am so glad that you are also continuing this story, I love the possibilities that the dual personalities provides and I am eager to see where you go with this.  |
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| julia | I'm Not Crazy | 06/29/2006 06:04 pm |
| Well, here you have the most reviews for this story, on spuffyrealm its "carefully everywhere descending". which one are you going to continue? Personally, i think this one is the best. i hope you decide to pick this one and update soon! its a great story with a ton of potential |
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| madforspike | I'm Not Crazy | 06/29/2006 05:12 pm |
| Hello! I just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this fic. I keep checking every day for updates! I can't wait to see what happens with the whole Buffy/Spike/Will issue. |
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| Pulchra | I'm Not Crazy | 06/28/2006 06:11 am |
| awwwwwwwwwww! this is sooo sweet! love William/spike! ;-) *hugs* You do the william/spike thing really well! |
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| fallen_angel | I'm Not Crazy | 06/28/2006 04:52 am |
| I've been waiting for this update! Now if I could have some Carefully Everywhere Descending too, it'd make my day! |
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| Harry 4Eyes | I'm Not Crazy | 06/28/2006 04:05 am |
Whoa William could give Andrew a run for money on the nerd factor, only not nearly as annoying, almost childlike really. but I guess that's the point.
Xander and William defintely going to be good friends, Very similar in nature, Also he sounds like he'll get along with Willow with her brainiac, and Buffy's inner Slayer need to protect will probably want to coddle him to death.
I can't wait for Joyce's reaction, she'll probably mother him. Wonder if Dawn will be around.
Well still loving it
Update soon
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 10:37 pm |
| William is so sweet! I always love William ^.^ |
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| Dar | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 06:43 pm |
| Spike's inner child is out to play in Will. Can't wait for Joyce's reaction to everything. Good Chapter |
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| RJ | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 06:38 pm |
| Will's really cute, you've created an interesting character. I'm a little squicked at the idea of him being involved in any Spuffy though, since he seems mentally a little younger than the rest of the scoobies. |
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| jl1980 | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 06:30 pm |
| awwww...i just love will..hate giles, though...and like buffy, hating angel a bit less now another excellent chapter, i very much enjoyed it...now that will is staying with buffy things should get *really* interesting!! |
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| SpaceLord | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 04:16 pm |
| Gotta love the Spike/Will character. I'm a little confused aobut how old Will is? I mean the way he acts and his interest I would peg him as being 14-15 tops if even that. How old was he when he was turned? I know he's suposed to be innocent but he's acting real young is that cause of Angelus torture or was he like that before? |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | I'm Not Crazy | 06/27/2006 03:43 pm |
| Good chapter.Update soon.Will is still so sweet and childlike.He's so cute. |
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| fallen_angel | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/25/2006 02:22 pm |
| hope you'll continue this |
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| Tina | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/23/2006 11:27 pm |
| It's cruel and unusual punishment that you are making us choose. I desperately want to read to the end of all three! Since you are asking us to choose though, this is my first choice, though Story of the World is a very close second. Not that Carefully Everywhere Decending is all that far behind. Would begging for all three help? What would it take to get all three? I don't mind waiting! |
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| Ravenor | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/23/2006 12:25 am |
Oh definitely loving this story :-) Angel should be ashamed of himself for doing that to Will and I don't think the others are going to look at Angel the same way anymore. Bad Giles too! Two seperate personalities... will they stay seperate or will they merge into one at some point.... have to say that the idea of both staying around is really appealing :-)Of course it would be very sad if one of them had to go away :-(
Can't wait to see where this one goes from here :-)
As for the voting for a favourite... too difficult to pick just one :-) |
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| samson28 | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/20/2006 11:50 am |
I'm really enjoying this split of Spike/William. Something I would normally avoid!
More please. *g* |
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| Harry 4Eyes | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/20/2006 10:48 am |
I don't think Angel will be as popular as he was before, and goes towards explaining how ended up so f**ked up after he was turned and Williams words probably gives an idea of why he was f**ked up before he was turned.
I like William, he's kinda like a regular teenager who is a complete nerd...like Andrew is, only not anyway near annoying and Spike is...well Spike only more intense version of him.
Wonder which version Buffy will be more attracted to? probably Spike but she'll get along better with Will.
Loving it
Update soon
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| Pulchra | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/20/2006 01:12 am |
*blink-blink* wow! I love this! It's a whole new look on things! it's great!
please update again soon? |
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| Dreylin | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/20/2006 12:41 am |
| I'm loving every word of this fic, especially Spike's perspective on his battles with Slayers. |
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| LeeAnne | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 07:06 pm |
This just keeps getting better and better...i am so intrigued by both spike and william...will is just so cute and loveable and spike is still the "big bad" just with the soul...i love it...
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Keep up the good work! |
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| carole | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 06:59 pm |
great chapter. i really felt bad for william. great spike responce. hope you write more of this one. actually i love of them so im not sure which to vote for. lol couldnt we just vote for all of them  |
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| Cewcew | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 06:10 pm |
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| jl1980 | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 05:35 pm |
| i love this so much...i'm drawn to both personalities, and longing for more right now!! the horror of the moment when angel tried to bring spike out was so real, so harrowing...an excellent job on this chapter (and this story still gets my vote ) |
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| selyne | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 05:30 pm |
| This is interesting. I'd like to read more. |
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| redwulf50 | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 05:15 pm |
LOL, I like soike  |
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| Dar | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 04:32 pm |
| I'm liking both Spike's more and more but Angel and Giles less and less. Good Chapter. |
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| SpaceLord | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 04:08 pm |
Well this is rocketing up to my fav of your 3 stories from the first three chapters I've read. I like the way he's 2 personas my only concern is that Will seems a little young.
I still would like you to do the "world" story cause I think that it too has a lot of potential but I would also love to see this get finished |
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| ahigh | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 04:06 pm |
| Really liking this story so far. I haven't read anything like it before. Can't wait to read more. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 03:44 pm |
| Good chapter.Poor Will/Spike.Bad Angel!Update soon. |
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| Sarah | You're Just Jealous Because The Voices Talk to Me | 06/19/2006 02:59 pm |
| This si such an interesting take on the 'Souled Spike' persona, and I really enjoy the unique premise. Keep up the good work! |
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| fallen_angel | Please Have Exact Change | 06/25/2006 02:16 pm |
| ok split personalities it is then. Oh and horrible Angel for doing all those things to Will. |
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| Maddy | Please Have Exact Change | 06/16/2006 08:55 am |
That's something different from every spuffy fanfiction i ever read. Refreshing ;)
I'm really intrigued what will happen next.
Though i must say Will is distrubing... seems kinda mentaly retarded.
Hope Will and Spike will melt into one personality eventualy.
But still I love the story, waiting for more! |
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| Anona | Please Have Exact Change | 06/15/2006 04:26 pm |
| Very interesting. I'm interested in reading more. |
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| carole | Please Have Exact Change | 06/15/2006 03:45 pm |
| wow i really like this and would like to see more of it. great work. |
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| VWalk | Please Have Exact Change | 06/15/2006 07:18 am |
This is interesting... intriguing even.
I think I like the actual twins premise better than this one - though there are of course similarities. (The two distinct personalities for example in one package here and two there.)
I'm assuming at some point you're planning to merge the two personalities into one 'sane' person.
Right now I prefer 'Descending' but I can see I'm in the minority.
On to number three. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Please Have Exact Change | 06/15/2006 05:55 am |
| Good chapter.Poor Will/Spike. Update soon. |
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| Ravenor | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 11:21 pm |
| Okay and it just keeps on getting better and better!! Love both Will and Spike and Angel's reason for keeping him away from the Scoobies.... he didn't know if he could trust them not to hurt Will and Spike :-)This is going to be really good !! |
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| Dreylin | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 08:53 pm |
| This is one of the most interesting lead-ins for a story I've read in a while. I really hope this one gets more than three chapters. This one was a wee bit heavy on exposition, but that was probably unavoidable with the three chapter intro. I can't wait to see more interaction between William/Spike and the Scoobies. |
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| Typerbabe | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 07:07 pm |
| This is a great story, really interesting and different! More soon please! |
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| dAR | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 05:40 pm |
| I love both side of this Spike coin ( twins are nice too). Scoobies better handle him very carefully. Sweet and Spicy perfect combo |
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| jl1980 | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 05:39 pm |
| awww....i love will...this story is still awesome, i'm loving it!! my vote still stays with this one, please please continue |
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| redwulf50 | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 05:01 pm |
grrrr, great chappie  but need more |
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| Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 04:30 pm |
oh, i *love* this! :-)
i love angel caring such good care of will, i love spike-the-great-warrior, and i just love will all to (reese's) pieces! i want to hug him and cuddle him and baby him, and go "bad scoobies!" if they upset him.
*please* keep this story going -- please please pretty please? with whipped cream and a cherry on top :-) |
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| Harry 4Eyes | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 04:10 pm |
Hmmm....so Spike is a by product of Angelus torture, and William is an innocent by product of something that happened before he was turned....interesting.
So both parites somehow have to merge, I think William needs acceptence for who he is and Spike needs...um...something. So Angel needs to bring him more often, a century of isolation with only Angel for company is never good...even for the sane..lol
This one is a very close second, only because the other one has a cute little girl, and I want to see Buffy attempting to win the little girl over so she can drool over her pops.
Well update soon
Harry
P.S are you ure you can't continue all 3? how about 2 out of 3? |
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| SpaceLord | Please Have Exact Change | 06/14/2006 03:36 pm |
Well this is my second favourite of the three stories you have out at the moment. This is different enough to make it interesting and I really like it when Spike/William have an interesting and complex relationship with Angel.
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| fallen_angel | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/25/2006 02:09 pm |
| split personalities? i love all three of the stories you've put up. They've all got me hooked. Write all of them, please!! |
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| Elizabeth Anne Summers | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/20/2006 12:37 am |
Ooo, garbage! *bounces* My daddy's met one of them too
Still like the other story, though... two spikes... yummyness |
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| vladt | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/15/2006 09:17 pm |
| will would drive you up the wall after a very short period of time. but spike, is spike. thanks for the read. |
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| Spuffyshipper | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 01:56 pm |
| This is a really good story.Do this one. |
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| Slayergirl | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 07:43 am |
This is a good story.Do this one.
Update soon. |
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| yangchencen | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 02:20 am |
This one! This one! THIS ONE! PLEEEAAAASE!
Souled-Angelus-went-to-Dru-and-Spike? Split-personality? Yummy-yummy-scared-William? Punk-crazy-Spike? And all that in Season One?
Please please write this one! |
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| Dreylin | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 01:39 am |
| Oh wow. I *like* this. Now I've really gotta find the other two possibilities. |
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| Sharon | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 01:16 am |
Okay, you're really heartless, making us choose which of these three for you to continue.
But, if I must choose, I choose this one. I'd love to see where you take it.
Thanks for the agonizing choice! |
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| Cewcew | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/14/2006 12:21 am |
| Cant you just writw all of em? There all so good! |
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| Max | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 11:19 pm |
| Oooh I like this. |
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| neo_trinityknot | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 08:44 pm |
| Okat, this one is madness. I love the plotline so far, and I have to make this and the twins a tie. I wont choose, so there! *pouts* |
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| Ravenor | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 08:41 pm |
| Okay this is just so hard choosing the best as all three are great beginnings.... but I can't help but love this one! What did Angel do to Will and Spike and how did they become seperate so to speak? Wonder what Angel will do for an explaination. |
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| LeeAnne | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 08:27 pm |
I love this one...it definitely has my vote..anything that has helpless Spike in it is an automatic fave...add to it bad boy Spike...gold!
I hope you continue it...I will anxiously await new chapters....
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| Tonia | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 08:03 pm |
Bad Angel! I hope someone kicks his ass for treating William badly.
If the other two are as good as this one, I just might beg you to write all three. |
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| jl1980 | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 06:55 pm |
| wow...i have no words...give me a second...okay, here they are...this is INCREDIBLE!!! i love this story!! please continue, i am fascinated already |
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| Kawaki | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 06:54 pm |
| This has me very intrigued. Can't wait for the next chapter. |
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| cee | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 06:20 pm |
Awww. Now you've gone and done it! You've written three very intriguing stories!
However, I love them all. Consider each of my reviews a vote for that particular story! That said, you choose which one you would like to continue with. It's your muse
::squishes your brain:: |
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| samson28 | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 05:16 pm |
| Oooh, interesting. |
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| L | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 05:15 pm |
| All three are intriguing, but "Madness..." would be my first choice to follow along with. |
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| Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 05:03 pm |
| i definitely vote for this first choice -- and 'story of the world' also please :-) |
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| redwulf50 | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 04:33 pm |
| Oh shit, this is all Angel's fault I bet, can we kill the poofter yet?? |
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| Maggie | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 04:22 pm |
| Which one should you continue? I'm a greedy bastard and want all three!! I know that's no help -- so I guess I vote for this one. But am looking forward to whichever one you end up doing! |
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| Dar | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 04:06 pm |
| Oh this sounds like a fascinating would look forward to more of this. |
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| DeamSamWinchesterfan | Madness Takes Its Toll | 06/13/2006 03:26 pm |
Good story so far.I love it so much!Continue this story!I love "Will".He seems traumatized.
Update really really soon. |
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