The Story of the World by Dark Eyed Seer
 
Through the Looking Glass07/19/2006 12:29 am
Ooo, you are an excellent writer. Please update your stories as soon as you possibly can.
 
VWalkThrough the Looking Glass06/29/2006 01:29 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY. To bad my vote only counts for one. Why are readers more interested in Spike twincest that Spike Daddy.

I would love for you to continue this story now. But if you decide not - please keep it in mind for the future.

I am totally smitten with it.
 
vladtThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 02:17 pm
fun chapter. thanks. this is my favorite of the three. thanks for starting all three. all the storylines have great potential (and all should be written) but, if only one, then this one. thanks again.
 
duke6665Through the Looking Glass06/23/2006 01:27 pm
another great chapter. but can't we please have all 3? lol
 
TiaThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 01:13 pm
this one's got my vote
 
KawakiThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 10:30 am
I'm seriously torn. You're counting reviews over all 3 chapters right? I've got some reviews to do.
 
MaggieThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 07:51 am
I still really, really wish there was a world where you would write all three of these. But if I have to choose, this would be my THIRD choice. I love Daddy!Spike fics, but it would take a bit of disbelief to think that a 3,000 year old person could be recognizable as our Spike. Don't get me wrong, though! I'd totally read this if you decided to write it. But schizo Spike seems to have more interesting possibilities to me -- and ones that don't take quite the same suspension of disbelief.

Thanks in advance for whatever you decide to do!
 
cheekybintThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 07:31 am
oh please continue this one...the plot seems fresher and while there is always room for angst it doesn't seem like it would be too terribly heavy...i like the way it reads so far and i really want to see the character of lyra develope and learn more about spike's past
 
jl1980Through the Looking Glass06/23/2006 07:14 am
awwww...that was heartwarming, very sweet...i like lyra...and apparently she likes buffy, so that's of the good great chapter, my final vote is still for "madness" though
 
fallen_angelThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 07:04 am
continue this, this is really good.
 
Dracon05Through the Looking Glass06/23/2006 04:38 am
If it wasn't obvious the first time i definitely vote for this one to be continued, for much like someone else said the twin one isn't really all that interesting and the whole concept doesn't mesh so well with me.

As for the one with schizo Spike that one has possibilites and if you want to run with that one at another time then go for it but by far this one i like the most.
 
MorriganThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 03:56 am
Oh wow...  This is really different from anything else out there I have read!  Loving this!  I want this one! *kicks and throws mini tantrum* hehe
 
Harry 4EyesThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 02:15 am
Poor Spike, has his hands full with that one...and Lyra as well...lol

Lyra definitely has her daddy wrapped around her little finger....Every bloody Disney movie? *shudder* that's allot of movies...even if we are talking just the animation movies.

Well Spike sounds like a good father but I guess he's had practice right? Wonder if he keeps tabs on all his family.

Lyra sounds like such a cutie, Buffy won't know what hit her .

Though it might be a problem getting the two together, what with Buffy only being a teenager herself um...12 years older than Lyra.

Well defintely still my favourite.
Update soon
Harry
 
Spikes Slayer2Through the Looking Glass06/23/2006 01:16 am
awww i like them all..
 
SpaceLordThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 01:09 am
Well this is definetly up there as a contender for which of the three stories I like the best. This one sure has potential and with Spike being alive (undead) for so long sure is going to be interesting with background stories and such.

The story with schizo Spike/William is also very interesting at least judging by the start and I would love to read that too.

The one with the twins is the one that interests me the least, just an excuse for smut IMO and not really that interesting.

So this story and the one with schizo Spike are my top choices, I would really like it if you wrote both of them.
 
ToniaThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 12:40 am
Please finish this one! Please!!!
 
golddrakeThrough the Looking Glass06/23/2006 12:01 am
great chapter. I love this story, I don't know that I have a favorite of the 3 stories, but I think I'm just slightly more interested in the twins then this story, then Intolerable Beauty. But it really is almost to close to call. They all rock.
 
fallen_angelFalling Up06/23/2006 03:05 am
So what was Spike's name then?
 
VWalkFalling Up06/19/2006 04:55 pm
THIS IS BY FAR MY MOST FAVORITE STORY. PLEASE FINISH THIS ONE. Or if you're inclined - all three. STARTING WITH THIS ONE.

I'm soooo curious about Spike's back story.
 
caroleFalling Up06/18/2006 02:28 pm
WOW you have to write more of this. very very interesting and unique. pleaseee? lol ...one of the best beginnings to a fic i have read in a long time.
 
caroleFalling Up06/18/2006 02:27 pm
WOW you have to write more of this. very very interesting and unique. pleaseee? lol ...one of the best beginnings to a fic i have read in a long time.
 
Spikes Slayer2Falling Up06/17/2006 10:16 pm
LOL thats hilarious! i LOVE the new chapter!!
 
vladtFalling Up06/17/2006 09:30 pm
love the update, love the tale. thanks for the read. please do not stop with three chapters. there is the potenteial for so many stories here, not only one great tale.
 
samson28Falling Up06/17/2006 09:27 am
Enjoying this ficcy, too!

Why must I choose.
 
jl1980Falling Up06/17/2006 08:04 am
very intriguing...like this version of spike and maybe he'd actually get a bit more respect this time around excellent chapter though i'm still voting for "madness"
 
yangchencenFalling Up06/17/2006 12:27 am
Thought I'd love Intolerable Beauty most no matter what, but this chapter made me waving...

Please please promise us don't fall out of this fandom any time soon, that would break my heart.
 
ShadowFalling Up06/16/2006 07:39 pm
Xander's a little slow
now thats an understatement if I ever heard one...

*grin* Sir Spike... mmm I'm gonna guess... Lancelot
 
CatFalling Up06/16/2006 07:20 pm
Ohh!! Now this is starting out to be a good one!
 
CewcewFalling Up06/16/2006 07:11 pm
 
ToniaFalling Up06/16/2006 06:08 pm
You did not make this easy. I wouldn't mind seeing all of them done. Tough if you really have to pick one, then please finish this one.
 
SpaceLordFalling Up06/16/2006 04:48 pm
I like this story the best I think. Just such nice potential with all the history and lore you could put in it with your own twist.

As the King Arthur thing I'm more inclined to think that it's more like the recent movie than the old knights of the crusade times kind of thing. And Spike isn't really British in this story either I would imagine. Just so much to be told.
 
Dracon05Falling Up06/16/2006 02:41 pm
I definitely like this one alot and the whole living centuries thing is very interesting. Would be cool to find out how many children hes had over the ages and how many of them were with Slayers but yea this should definitely go past the original 3 chapters you were gonna put up.
 
Harrry 4EyesFalling Up06/16/2006 01:23 pm
Oooooh who was he known as? I doubt he was Merlin...ofcourse the age might match but he doesn't actually look his age, and Sir Lancelot might be a good guess, except he was French wasn't he? I wonder why he was there though maybe Guinevire was the Sleyer.

Forged in the fires of hell, Lord of the Rings right?

Cool defintely my favourite from the three. Would be specially funny if one of his sons hit on Buffy...lol

Great Update
Update Soon
Harry
 
fallen_angelWhere the Wild Things Are06/23/2006 02:56 am
I was hoping you would write this fic ever since you sugested it at the end of TITWTWE and you did. Hurray!
 
vladtWhere the Wild Things Are06/15/2006 07:30 pm
love the concept. the three thousand plus history of spike to mine for story. his young daughter. and the teenage slayer. this could be fantastic. the first chapter is a gigantic tease, making you crave more. i will not vote because that will mean that two great tales will not be finished. but i will read and enjoy which ever you continue. if you don't choose to finish this concept, why not form it into a challenge? thanks for the great read.
 
HEEWhere the Wild Things Are06/15/2006 12:36 pm
If I have to pick one I DEFINITELY PICK THIS ONE.

The twincest is a real turnoff for me (call me a prude but it does). I like the multiple personality one but I always tend to cringe when reading something that makes Spike (in any incarnation) weak and subserviant to Angel.

Not only is this one refreshingly fresh - premise wise - but its got an adorable little girl so we get to see the RARELY seen 'daddy' side of Spike.

C'mon folks - vote here.

Of course I'd still read all three if you did them.
 
VWalkWhere the Wild Things Are06/15/2006 12:31 pm
I like this one too. I think this one has the least reviews but strangley I like it best.

Here's a novel idea (lightbulb) do all three stories.

Your public would love you (more) for it.
 
Willia S CrashWhere the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 03:21 pm
Can't you write all three pieces?! Just because I think this is the best one out of three doesn't mean that the others are crappy... Please update soon.
 
Harry 4EyesWhere the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 11:22 am
Tough choice, the double Spike one, or the multiple personality Spike, or immortal Spike with a lil girl, who sounds like the cutest thing. ARGH tough choice.

Right lets see the Twins idea is quite original but sounds like it's a threesome fic with twincest or atleast borderline so i'm going to vote against that...not something I would really read.

I like the idea of the multiple personality one as well but with how screwed William/Spike is no doubt they will be some squeek points here too...but I would definitely read it.

and this one, kinda similar to your first fic...but it has a cute little girl in it, and I love fics with little kids i for some reason and I can certainly see some good ideas coming from this one.

Argh...so all I can say is I would probably read all but only one i'd vote off the show is one with the possible twincest storyline.

Shame you can't write them all.
Well look forward to which one you decide.
Harry
 
Spikes Slayer2Where the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 06:20 am
aww.. so cute! cant wait to see what the other ones turn out to be like..
 
hotlipedjenWhere the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 03:45 am
Ok I like this one too! Damn! I needed one of these stories not to like too!
 
DreylinWhere the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 01:59 am
Cool premise. It's made me think of a 'What-If?'. Suppose 'The Immortal' was Spike, a Spike who'd been sent (way) back in time. That premise would have some baggage you've avoided here. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
 
CewcewWhere the Wild Things Are06/14/2006 12:34 am
Yap! Thats it. Im guna throw a tantum, cuse I like am all! I want all 3. Stomp! I want all 3. Bang! Waa, All 3. Boom! Waa, All 3. bang! Waa, All 3. Smash!

Do I get my way?
 
RavenorWhere the Wild Things Are06/13/2006 08:44 pm
Okay I know I left feedback at the other one but Spike with a child, a little girl that probably has him wrapped around her little finger this definitely has possibilities! And such a unique way in redoing his history... three centuries... oh definite possibilities here too
 
ToniaWhere the Wild Things Are06/13/2006 08:15 pm
You are evil. I would love to see this one contiued as well.
 
SarahWhere the Wild Things Are06/13/2006 07:31 pm
I really like this one...Of course, I like everything else you've written, so I'm biased. Keep going!
 
jl1980Where the Wild Things Are06/13/2006 06:58 pm
awww...this is lovely, excellent start...i'd like to see where it goes, but this is *not* a vote for this fic! i like it lots, but if i have to pick, i pick "madness"...this is just too good to not tell you how good it is
 
redwulf50Where the Wild Things Are06/13/2006 04:28 pm
See Daughters are like the worst