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| Toe the Line by madforspike |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Reunions....and New Faces | 07/16/2006 05:16 pm |
Oh man ... that is not good if Aurelius is able to turn Spike and Angel into lap dogs by just looking at them. Dang, that is going to be a problem.
I loved this chapter, and I really hope that you continue this story. I look forward to seeing what you have for us next!! |
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| jl1980 | Reunions....and New Faces | 06/18/2006 08:19 pm |
wow...i wonder why she wants to kill buffy *now* -- or even if that is really what she wants...very intriguing idea..waiting anxiously for more  |
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| Robyn | Reunions....and New Faces | 06/17/2006 03:37 am |
| I really enjoyed this chapter and I loved that once Buffy recovered from her shock and Aurelius left she became the logical one. |
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| vladt | Reunions....and New Faces | 06/15/2006 08:06 pm |
| it is somehow fitting to have the source of the aurelian line be female. good read, thanks |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Reunions....and New Faces | 06/15/2006 05:59 am |
| Good chapter.Update soon. |
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| golddrake | Reunions....and New Faces | 06/14/2006 11:22 pm |
| Great chapter. I'm really looking forward to more of this story. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Another Prophecy? | 07/16/2006 05:12 pm |
I don't know about everyone else, but I LOVE how this one started. There is only one more chapter posted, but I have a feeling that I will LOVE that one too.
I like that Cordy is awake and still alive. I was kind of sad when she died. I think that Cordy is good for Angel and can keep him in line at times. {Smiles}
I liked how Giles wasn't all Spike is evil but was telling Angel that Buffy was going to kill Angel for hiding Spike from her. He seemed supportive of Buffy's love for Spike n ow, and that made me very happy.
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| Robyn | Another Prophecy? | 06/17/2006 03:30 am |
| This shows a lot of promise and I like that there doesn't seem to be blind hatred on the part of the Scoobies towards Spike, that they seem to have matured a bit. |
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| Steanne | Another Prophecy? | 06/14/2006 09:46 am |
Neither Buffy nor Willow are the fainting type. I think in the history of the show, other than being knocked unconcious, Buffy might have fainted the time she had the flu, but never from an emotional shock.
...and you might wanna have Buffy wake up before Dawn dances her around.
The writing isn't at all bad, you just might wanna think through the action a bit more. |
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| DeanSamWinchesterfan | Another Prophecy? | 06/14/2006 07:45 am |
| Good story so far.I'm so glad Cordy woke up from her coma,and she and Angel are together. They're my favorite couple,next to Buffy and Spike.Update soon. |
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| Tonia | Another Prophecy? | 06/14/2006 12:34 am |
| This shows some promise. I would love to read the rest of your story. Please continue. |
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| jl1980 | Another Prophecy? | 06/13/2006 11:01 pm |
| very interesting start...can't wait to see where you take this |
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| Syl | Another Prophecy? | 06/13/2006 10:50 pm |
| Sounds promising...so Spike is going to be the one to kill Buffy? Or someone else? |
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