When a Slayer Cries by Jackofspikes
 
LisFayteOn With the Show07/29/2006 03:39 pm
I seriously love all of your work, I hope your muse is working overtime, cause I can't wait to read the sequel to this!
Thank you, and I will get to it...eventually
 
AthenewolfeOn With the Show07/28/2006 01:00 pm
wonderful - happy sigh*
Thank you soooo much
 
~*~Tasha~*~On With the Show07/22/2006 08:44 pm
{giggles happily and dances around with joy} Yeppers ... that was a wonderful ficcie. I will be happy to see any kind of sequel you do. Heck I'm happy for anything you write. You know I love your writing, and I'll be here to support you, even if I don't write much myself.
You will write more, be kinder to yourself
 
CordykittenOn With the Show07/21/2006 04:29 pm
If you really think, the solution (the poem) was clear to read. But if you're stuck in such a situation, it is not easy to think straight.
Buffy's tears are the solution. Hehe... loved the others talking about Buffy and after mentioning that Spike was in the shower she was running like a flash *gg* Oh, and Spike is different now? But still strong and still with game face if needed. ~ Awe, that was the end. Loved reading the story. And even better, to know that there will be a sequel :-D Thanks for writing!
Thank you for reviewing
 
RobynOn With the Show07/19/2006 10:15 am
I loved this entire story and the ending was nothing but cute and fun. Although this story is perfect as it is, even with the unresolved situations, I am looking forward to when you have time for more.
So am I...so am I
 
NikkoleOn With the Show07/18/2006 12:30 pm
Very nice ending! I can't wait to see the sequal!
Sequel?...oh yeah, I forgot about that! lol
 
PulchraOn With the Show07/17/2006 09:15 am
Okay, you do know that you're performing magic here? You're busy with so many stories and still they're all brilliant... How do you do that?... seriously I want to know...
I would blame wulfie, but he'll take it as a compliment
 
DolauOn With the Show07/16/2006 12:47 pm
Loved it loved it and loved it some more :-)
thank you so much, you are much too kind
 
sircOn With the Show07/16/2006 11:33 am
I totally forgot to think about what the stories title meant. If I had, I would have had an idea about the cure earlier than the end of last chapter

I really loved all of this and am waiting for the time when you'll post the sequel
I hope that youwon't have to long to wait
 
EstherOn With the Show07/15/2006 12:58 am
Oh wow, this was gorgeous! Tasha told me I had to read this--quickly--so I took her advice and she was right. WOW!! What a wonderful twist of one of my fave eps. Brilliant, completely brilliant!!
Thank you so much, I will have o remembe to thank Tasha
 
letitiaOn With the Show07/14/2006 06:55 pm
Just loved this story from beginning to end. It is too funny the way Giles and Willow are acting with the knowledge that Buffy was in love with Spike. And to have Giles picking at them in the bathroom was too funny as well.
I do love Giles
 
LouOn With the Show07/14/2006 02:56 pm
Lovely outcome - at least they have the chance of a future now.
and what an interesting future it will be
 
spikes_lizardOn With the Show07/14/2006 01:58 pm
oops wrong button just then. But the story was awesome now finish paradox and penny and on with this sequel you rock. no rush
No Rush she says! lol
 
spikes_lizardOn With the Show07/14/2006 01:57 pm
lol
 
Spikes Slayer2On With the Show07/14/2006 07:21 am
i want more!!!! lol any one else want more!? *raises hand* lol great chapter!!!!!!
There will be more, but not straight away
 
DeliciaOn With the Show07/14/2006 05:48 am
Whew, I knew you would make everything better!! Thank you for the wonderful story. I will eagerly await the sequel *hugs*.
Thank you sweetie, I will try to make sure the wait isn't too long
 
vladtOn With the Show07/14/2006 01:43 am
fantastic tale, jack. thank you for the wonderful read. hope the time comes when you can continue this verse. thanks, again.
I will...I promise
 
IrinaOn With the Show07/14/2006 12:38 am
Yay! A happy ending! :cheer: Fantastic story, I really enjoyed reading it. Nice work Jack!
Thank you
 
Jace NoxOn With the Show07/13/2006 10:27 pm
I loved it! I cannot wait to see your other WIPs and the sequel to this one. Please don't feel harried because a rushed writer does a rushed job.
Keep up the great work!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you...I have to clear the plate a little before I start the sequel
 
StephanieOn With the Show07/13/2006 09:57 pm
Very enjoyable story. Can't wait for the sequel. I need to what happens between everybody. More please!
As soon as I have time...I promise
 
kimOn With the Show07/13/2006 09:49 pm
Okay...I guess I can wait...

And yay!!!!!!!!!!

Tremendously funny, that everyone already knew, but the two in question.
Thank you
 
ShadyOn With the Show07/13/2006 09:33 pm
Loved LOVED this one.

Found myself constantly refreshing at the BSV, hoping for updates...sad sad...look forward to sequel
Thank you so much, you really have made my day
 
HPfanOn With the Show07/13/2006 09:13 pm
Loved it. Thanks for such a sweet story AND the happy ending.
You are most welcome. D
 
TammyDevil666On With the Show07/13/2006 08:59 pm
Well, I wasn't expecting it to end already, but I was definitely not disappointed by the outcome. This chapter made me all kinds of happy and I can't wait for the sequel. Great work=)
Thank you...I will try and make sure the wait is not too long
 
BridgetOn With the Show07/13/2006 08:24 pm
I loved the ending and your story. Great job.
Thank you, you are too kind
 
KarynOn With the Show07/13/2006 08:02 pm
awesome ending jack!! loved it!!!
Thank you sweetie
 
golddrakeOn With the Show07/13/2006 07:37 pm
great story
thank you
 
kimbclarOn With the Show07/13/2006 07:12 pm
This was a fabulous story. Though I'm sad to see it end I think you wrapped it up very well. Looking forward to the sequel.
Thank you...I hope you won't have t wait too long for it
 
AzelmaOn With the Show07/13/2006 07:08 pm
Oh, this was a perfect ending. And I will definitely be looking forwards to the sequel. I want to see what happens!
me too
 
ToniaOn With the Show07/13/2006 07:07 pm
There will be a sequel? YEAH! ::cheers::
O.k I can wait.
Great story! =)
I will try to make sure you don't have too long to wait
 
dragontiffOn With the Show07/13/2006 07:05 pm
i absolutely loved this fic...
cant wait to see a sequel.
Thank you so much
 
duke6665On With the Show07/13/2006 06:58 pm
i really hate to see this one end. i hope you do get around to a sequel. great work
carole
I will be doing the sequel, just need a little time to do it
 
ShellyOn With the Show07/13/2006 06:45 pm
I hated to see this one end. I loved it. But I want to see Xander get smacked down. I want to see Angel get bashed by Spike, "his boy". But that was a great ending. Glad to hear there is going to be a sequel!!!!!!!!!
There is so much more to say with this fic, but alas I have to wait a bit to finish it
 
MarzBarOn With the Show07/13/2006 06:42 pm
Wow! Thank you for the terrific story. I look forward to more of your tales and to the sequel for this one.
I will try to make sue ou don't have long to wait
 
jl1980On With the Show07/13/2006 06:34 pm
this was an excellent fic..beautifully done and i would love to see a sequel, personally, i like a few minor loose ends great job, i was in tears several times, which is saying a lot...thanx for this story
I'm anal...loose ends drive me nuts! lol
 
VerdaOn With the Show07/13/2006 05:59 pm
Wonderful ending to this amazing tale. Glad that there will be a sequel at some point, so many possibilities. Thank you from the bottom of my heart, this was great! Looking forward to your next fic.
Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews
 
anon462On With the Show07/13/2006 05:47 pm
Wanted to say that this was a fabulous story!!! I totally enjoyed it from beginning to end. I, like many others, will be looking forward to any sequels in the future.

(Can't wait to see how you deal with the beastyboys, Angel and Xander, when Spike and Buffy finally emerge from Giles apartment. Also, powerful witch Anya in super protective mode should be very interesting too.)
I hope you will enjoy what Ive planned for all of them
 
willowmouseOn With the Show07/13/2006 05:17 pm
THis was a wonderful story, thankyou for writing it - full of love and passion, beautifully written!
Thank you for taking the time to read and review, I appreciate it
 
Harry 4EyesOn With the Show07/13/2006 05:09 pm
See this fic is just too short, there are like dozens of unfinished business we got going here, A) Riley, B) Initiative) C) Adam, D) Xander E)Forehead. F) Immortal Slayer part. G) Imortal Spike part. H) Progression of relationship. and whole bunch of other things that I can't think of.

I was half expecting Buffy to jump Spike in the shower water running and dripping clothes and all...dissapointed she had so much restrain...lol

Well loved it, even if a bit short, specially compared to Jackers Average.
Harry
Harry, Harry, Harry...you have to learn to trust me sweetie!
 
DarkBloodyMistressOn With the Show07/13/2006 05:06 pm
Gawd Buffy can be so dense....
so can Spike! lol
 
IsabelOn With the Show07/13/2006 04:44 pm
Sad to see the story come to an end. It's was fabulous. I really loved it and I can't wait for a sequel.
I hope to begin it soon
 
TamaraOn With the Show07/13/2006 04:42 pm
I guess it wouyld've been a little early in thier relationship for her to just jump in the shower with him.

Great ending. I'm glad to hear about a eventual sequel.
just a tad! lol
 
AthenewolfeWhen a Slayer Cries07/28/2006 12:58 pm
sniff nooo no dying on me
But....
 
~*~Tasha~*~When a Slayer Cries07/22/2006 08:38 pm
I liked your cryptic riddle answer to Spike/William's healing. It made sense (Course made even more after the fact, but still LOL), and it flowed. Nicely written.

Gut wrenching last few chapters. Poor Spike and Slayer. Dang.
All compliments on the poem should go to Karyn
 
CordykittenWhen a Slayer Cries07/21/2006 04:00 pm
A poem huh? Too bad they didn't see at once what it means. Good to see that Giles isn't against Buffy being with Spike. But for now Spike is still ill. ~ Oh I loved that scene! Buffy telling Spike he is his what means claiming for the demon, then William getting fearful because he thinks he'll get rejected and that pisses of the Slayer in Buffy who gets VERY possessive :-D ~ But oh no.. this cliffhanger. It gives me almost a heart attack but I checked the end of the story out *g* And I can read on now :-D
lol...do you open Christmas presents early too?
 
sircWhen a Slayer Cries07/16/2006 11:18 am
I'm getting a feeling that the Bringer of Death might actually be the Slayer. She is killing them. And since there is only one more chapter to read, there needs to be a quick solution to all this - all that I can think up is that the bringer is Buffy. With such a sad ending to this chapter it is clear that Buffy is going to shed some tears.

Well done
Thank you, I wish I could answer your question, but see...that would be telling
 
DeliciaWhen a Slayer Cries07/14/2006 05:38 am
No, no! Say it isn't so Jack! Heartbreaking, I tell ya! Wonderful chappy!
Thank you so much
 
vladtWhen a Slayer Cries07/14/2006 01:31 am
wonderful read, thank you. isn't the slayer a bringer of death?
Sorry, I didn't hear you...what was the question again?
 
MorriganWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 08:27 pm
ACK!  No! *rushing to read more*
um...sorry
 
CassieWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 07:08 am
great story
Thank you
 
LouWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 07:00 am
NO!! That can't be the final final breath!!! and just when he's admitted his feelings! Fix it -- please.
lol...fix it? rofl...bless you
 
IrinaWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 05:45 am
Oh no! The Queen of the evil cliffhangers stikes again... lol. I'll be the edge of my seat here waiting for the next update. Great chapter Jack!
Thank you...I do love that title
 
kimWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 05:02 am
No! Not his final breath. No!

I know the cure: Buffy's tears. She's the natural enemy of the vampire. And healing will begin once the demon sleeps, as long as he gets enough tears. Cry, Buffy, cry!

Anya, dear, always follow your intuition. That's what it's there for.
Thank you for your delightful review
 
Harry 4EyesWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 01:59 am
I'm disapointed, we have one wizkid, one highly intelectual Watcher, one 1000 year old ex-demon and not even one of them were remotely close to cracking the poem. You need to read the last word in the poem...she, the bringer of death is a female, there is only one bringer of death that is always female, she is the assigned Vampire Slayer so for them she is th bringer of death, and she feels no remorse because as far as she is concerned they are all evil. really quite simple. So slayer crying over v\mp is cure, not Buffy but slayer right?

So um...does this mean Spike is cured now because Slayer crying over fading Vampire. Besides how the bloody hell are they going to find the female liliac demon, look at the crotch and decide one by one?

So they finally are open with their feelings, amazing how it's always over one or the others deathbed.

Well Jackers loving it.
Update soon
Harry
Emotions are strange things Harry
 
VerdaWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 01:34 am
You little devil you, what are you trying to do to us! give us heart failure! His demon doesn't need to breath, only William does. Pleeeeeese update soon, can't stand for to long not knowing what's happening. Bad Jack's. Scary but great read.
Well I've never hidden the fact that I'm evil
 
RobynWhen a Slayer Cries07/13/2006 01:31 am
Their little trip down memory lane had me laughing and crying, but at the end when Spike told Buffy he loved her left me with tears. This chapter really had a nice emotional impact. I am really looking forward to the next update, thanks for such a great story.
You are most welcome, thank you for the lovely reviews
 
Spikes Slayer2When a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 11:47 pm
oh no.. noooooooo!! you cant!!!!!! you cant be that evil jack!! *pleads*
of course I'm that evil!
 
sourWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:56 pm
oh come on! you can not leave it here! evil is what you are! update soon! (please pretty please)
I will try
 
YzbaWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:38 pm
that's a hell of a cliffie!!!!!! grrrr, now I need an update and it means I will probably check for updates every 5 minutes....no fair!
um...sorry
 
Mr_ChaosWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:31 pm
Interesting Chapter, and I have a theory about it: The Bringer of Death isn't the demon, but buffy's slayer side. The Bring of Death does what? Slay.

The healing begins when the fading one sleep refers to the nice little 'nap' the demon took...and considering that death and sleep are brother and sister in almost all myths and legends....

And it's rare for a slayer to love a vamp.


In other words, for Spike to be cure,Buffy must cry over his body. But not buffy Buffy. The SLayer demon that makes up part of her mustdo it.
Nice theory...but you know I'm not gonna say if you are right
 
missus_graceWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:30 pm
I think I know what's gonna happen, but I don't wanna spoil for everyone. Suffice it so say, I have a different interpretation on who the 'Bringer of Death' is!

Can't wait for the next chappie.
...not saying a word.
 
MarzBarWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:26 pm
ARRRGH! Surely, Spike cannot be dead(er). William could not survive on the hellmouth without Spike to guide him. More story please.
As soon as I can
 
EmileeWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 10:12 pm
Slayer tears!! So does that mean that since she was crying, he's saved? Or do the tears literally have to fall on him? Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.
Well I hope you don't have to wait too long.
 
duke6665When a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 09:48 pm
lol
It’s a funky poem!” Turning to her Watcher, she demanded, “Tell her it’s a poem, Giles.”
I love you,” he whispered as his demon took its final breath
wow from laughing to crying in one chapter. you blew me away yet again
Thank you so much, you just made my day
 
CassandraWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 09:36 pm
Please write more. I have a feeling the tears of the bringer of death are supposed to come from Buffy. I hope you write more tomorrow. Please?? Hope to see more soon. The Slayer coming out was cool. can't wait to see what the unauthorized books have in them about the slayer.
I promise to write more...though more of what I can't say
 
ShannaWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 09:09 pm
I'm not afraid about the demon dying because I think that the Bringer of Death is Buffy and HER tears are the cure. If I'm right, then I sooooooooo deserve to be a Scooby!! No, better still...I deserve Spike. I can't lie, I want him. Yep, I sure do.
you still have to join the queue
 
ShannaWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 09:06 pm
I'm not afraid about the demon dying because I think that the Bringer of Death is Buffy and HER tears are the cure. If I'm right, then I sooooooooo deserve to be a Scooby!! No, better still...I deserve Spike. I can't lie, I want him. Yep, I sure do.
LOL...join the queue
 
HPfanWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 08:56 pm
I'm thinking that maybe Buffy's tears are the cure. Really hoping I'm not wrong here 'cos I'd really, really, seriously would hate to see Spike die. Great chapter. Waiting on pins and needles for the next one.
Would I make another HPfan suffer?...you do know that I'm evil...right?
 
slaymesoftlyWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 07:30 pm
The demon has died??? where's Spike? Gah!
Um...you like...didn't expect an actual answer...right?
 
golddrakeWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 07:14 pm
great chapter
Thank you
 
KarynWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 07:11 pm
*sniffs and busts out in tears* waaaaaa!!! just when he says he loves her!!!
Cheeky bint...you and I will have words! LOL
 
TammyDevil666When a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 07:00 pm
Okay, you managed to make me cry. That's not something that happens often, but in my defense, I have crappy things going on in my life right now. This chapter just seemed to push the tears out that I've been holding back. It was just his whole declaration and everything really. And I think I understand more about the title. You're doing an amazing job with this story, but I hope he can be saved.
I'm sorry made you cry...um...do you have more tissues?
 
kimbclarWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 06:35 pm
Amazing chapter!
Thank you so much
 
NikkoleWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 06:21 pm
I KNOW WHERE THE TEARS NEED TO COME FROM!! I am sure everyone else does too, but hey, I wanted to feel smart for a second, lol! This was a VERY good chapter. I really like to hear about certain perspectives on when they had different meetings throughout the years.
Thank you so much.
 
spikes_lizardWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:59 pm
NOW THAT IS PURE EVIL JACKS!! YOU SO CAN NOT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT!
Lizard I have tried to tell you I'm evil
 
TamaraWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:35 pm
Ack! *whimper*
There is a J in front of that *ack*
 
AraedhelWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:30 pm
Please, Please update really really soon! I love your story.
Thank you so much
 
IsabelWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:18 pm
I can't believe you! How very evil to leave it like that. Last chapter, you had me tearing up at "William said his goodbye to his demon" and now the demon took its final breath. Very cruel. Thank goodness you update every day or I might just go crazy. I could just kiss your feet for updating so often lol. Yeah, that would be an embarrassing scene =)
I know I said it already, but I'll say it again--love Anya and how she's 'in charge' girl in this story. I also loved the scene between Spike and Buffy, and the Slayer claiming the demon. Great chapter.
Thank you...but the evil thing? I've been trying to tell people that from the start
 
BadiaWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:18 pm
OMG your evil! Plz update soon. The suspense of the cure staring them in the face while their to emotional to pick up on the clues is killing me!
Yes...I am evil
 
Pin1When a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:14 pm
Gahh - excellent chapter, and I really hope you update soon!
I'm evil..I might have to hold off for a bit
 
DarkBloodyMistressWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:12 pm
*screams and runs to hide under her bed* You're so evil!
I've been trying to get somebody to notice that!
 
jl1980When a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:07 pm
and he's just got his cure, hasn't he? wow...this is breathtakingly beautiful...my heart has been in my throat since i read the cure at the beginning of the chapter and realized what it was...and while they struggle to research it out, buffy and spike have already found it, just spending his last moments with each other...how incredibly romantic and lovely...can't wait to read more
Nope...no cure, not yet
 
maryperkWhen a Slayer Cries07/12/2006 05:05 pm
ahhhhhhhh
yup...I'm evil
 
AthenewolfeWhich Witch is Which?07/28/2006 12:57 pm
good story I am liking this very cute ficcie!
You are too kind, Stephie.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Which Witch is Which?07/22/2006 08:33 pm
Emotional chapter. Very good and well written.
Thank you so much
 
CordykittenWhich Witch is Which?07/21/2006 03:49 pm
Uh-huh... William feels bad, that is not good. Especially because he has no contact with Spike. ~ Mmm Tara. I love how protective they all are of her. We all know how good she'll fit into Buffy's group. I do hope the book waits for Giles at the post office. They are running out of time now.
Yes, they really are
 
sircWhich Witch is Which?07/16/2006 11:05 am
well done
thank you
 
DeliciaWhich Witch is Which?07/14/2006 05:28 am
Nice chapter! I'm glad Tara's there to help out! I hope Spike's gonna be okay *whimpers*. Thanks!
me too
 
vladtWhich Witch is Which?07/14/2006 01:16 am
loved the update. tara and anya are killed off in canon and we get to keep xander and andrew. how is that for creative genius.morally bankrupt comic relief. sorry for the rant. thanks for the great read.
I agree with the rant! lol
 
CassieWhich Witch is Which?07/13/2006 07:08 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
AraedhelWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 10:49 am
Update soon, please.
Daily
 
NikkoleWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 09:38 am
I am glad that Willow has seen the error of her ways. I hope she stays that was. I really like this story, and I can't wait to see where the next chapter takes us!
You won't have long to wait
 
MorriganWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 05:16 am
Ahh!  Poor Spike!  So glad that Willow saw the error of her ways.  Nice twist on how to bring Tara into the group.
Thank you so much
 
IrinaWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 05:07 am
I liked how welcoming the new and improved Scoobie gang was with Tara. I'm so glad Willow learned her lesson and has made peace with everyone. Reading the girls POV's about the book was really interesting, and William's was just plain sad. I can't wait to find out if the book will be helpful in curing Spike. Great chapter!
Thank you very much
 
Harry 4EyesWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 04:32 am
Yeah...Tara is in the picture, someone who can appeal to his gentler human poet side and someone to appeal to the fierce protective side of the demon.

Poor William and Giles, outnumbered 2-1 with the women folk, and they can't even watch the footy unless they stay awake at night. Oooh there's an idea, write a fic about Spike's reaction to the England Vs Portugal game, he's a ManU fan so he'll be mega pissed like many other ManU fans about Ronaldo and Rooney situation. Maybe i'll issue a challenge.

Maybe should have kept Willow a statue for longer, surely fixing William problem is more important. Plus i'm sure she made a cute ornamant..lol

Well jackers loving it
update soon
Harry
Always a pleasure to hear from you Harry
 
missus_graceWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 01:34 am
What an interesting way to bring Tara into the story. Glad to see her on board!
Thank you, I really like the character.
 
RobynWhich Witch is Which?07/12/2006 12:09 am
I love the sweetness and kindness that Tara brings to the group and how you already addressed her fear of being half demon. This is really a great story and I am looking forward to the next update.
Thank you, Robyn. You are too kind
 
duke6665Which Witch is Which?07/11/2006 10:17 pm
wanother great chapter. i love the addition of tara.
Thank you, I always like Tara
 
HPfanWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 08:25 pm
Nice chapter. Glad to see Tara and am so happy that you rehabilitated Willow. But, really, these people need to be concentrating on curing Spike. They need to hurry! This is getting down close to the wire. Looking forward to the next update.
I hope you enjoy it
 
Jace NoxWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 08:09 pm
whaa? William is saying good bye? *tears*
I believe that is what I wrote..yes
 
jl1980Which Witch is Which?07/11/2006 08:01 pm
very intense chapter here, emotionally...love willow's healing, and tara's connection to her and the others...hope they can help spike soon great update
Thank you so much.
 
kimWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 07:57 pm
Eeeep! No! Hold on, Spike!

Hopefully, Willow is on the right path now, with the others to support good decisions.

Hurry back, guys! It's early Dec. in the Season timeline, so a vamp could be out as early as 5pm in CA. Hopefully, Anya can defend them, should Angel and Xander make another attempt.
Anya can handle those two
 
Spikes Slayer2Which Witch is Which?07/11/2006 06:46 pm
aww dont let him die jack.. please..
Thank you for reviewing
 
MarzBarWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 06:10 pm
Eeeek! Don't let Spike die. I'm glad to see they found the beautiful Tara.
I was really happy to work Tara in to this fic
 
golddrakeWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 05:37 pm
great chapter
thank you
 
deedoWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 05:01 pm
Jack, you're sooo evil to end the chapter like that!!!
You better update soon!!
lol...you think I'm evil now?
 
VerdaWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:46 pm
Yup, you lose one scoobie...gain another. Always loved Tara, hated when she was gone. That was amazingly sweet gentle chapter. Love this story so much. Update soon. Thank you.
As soon as possible
 
DarkBloodyMistressWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:34 pm
Don't die William!!
 
BadiaWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:31 pm
Thanks for the quick updates. Ah new friends new loves, and where are the dastardly dou?
You're welcome
 
pretty_in_fangsWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:20 pm
::whimper:: And you just know that Angel or Xander is going to interrupt at the worst possible moment.
You might know that! I'm evil.
 
IsabelWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:20 pm
Glad Willow apologized and realized she made a big mistake. I'm really worried about William/Spike now. Can't wait for next chapter.
It wil be here before you know it
 
KarynWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:15 pm
awwwwww *sniff* got tears on that one....very nice jack!!!
Thanks sweetie..but I'm saying this now...It's Wofie's fault!
 
LouWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:10 pm
Stop fretting and get working!
Yes...time is running out
 
Spikes_lizardWhich Witch is Which?07/11/2006 04:06 pm
oh come on don't leave me hanging
OK...but you have to promise not to kill me
 
AthenewolfeThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/28/2006 12:55 pm
I loved the scene where Anya told off xander very funny
thank you
 
~*~Tasha~*~The Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/22/2006 08:22 pm
{cheers} Go ANYA! Go BUFFY!!!

Anya telling Angel off in the first place was great.

{in a clear annoucer's voice} Duffle bag to carry Willow statue $10. Magic Supplies to protect and heal their crew $100. Buffy putting Xander and Angel in their places, PRICELESS! For everything else ... there's mastercard.

{winks} It's an american commercial for Master Card, but I'm hoping it is shown worldwide. My favorite it the latest one with MacGyver (Richard Dean Anderson)
sadly I haven't seen it
 
CordykittenThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/21/2006 09:00 am
Mmm seems as if Angelus has pissed off Anya now. ;-) It's never good to piss off a vengeance demon, even if it is an Ex-demon. :-D And the spell showed not only Spike's chip, it showed too that Buffy is immortal. That really come in handy when you're in love with a vampire (even if Buffy doesn't know it yet). :-D Loved the end of this chapter. Sadly I have to go. But I'll come back for the rest of it :-D
Thanks for the wonderful reviews
 
sircThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/16/2006 10:57 am
well done
Thank you
 
vladtThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/14/2006 12:30 am
wonderful update. anya growing more assertive. xander being held out by a spell. buffy dumping on both xander and angel. heaven. thanks for the read.
You are more than welcome
 
CassieThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/13/2006 07:07 am
great story
Thank you
 
missus_graceThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/12/2006 01:30 am
Guess Angel and Xander can't hide in denial-land anymore, can they?

Lovely chapter.
nope...they really can't
 
RobynThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/12/2006 12:00 am
Buffy's comments to Angel and Xander were perfectly short and to the point. I am really enjoying how well Anya and Giles play off each other, they really are quite cute together. First Anya, then Anya and Giles, and finally Buffy all making fun of or telling off Angel, and it never gets old. Thanks.
Thank you, and I must agree, it never gets old
 
pretty_in_fangsThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/11/2006 03:54 pm
I just picked up this story. I'm really enjoying it and looking forward to future chapters.
Well you won't havelong to wait
 
Harry 4EyesThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/11/2006 05:39 am
OK so we have two immortals in the mix now as well....seriously don't see the advantage of that, personally i'd rather be dead when it's my time...though if I didn't have to get old that would be cool to..but we all know the only reaso a person gets old and wrinkley so you don't end up dating someone who is 80 thinking they are 25 and then the pop their clog in the middle of intercourse...lol

Anyway, so what's going to happen once the whole spells have been done and the chip is out and the demon is cured? I'm still wondering the reason behind the title of the fic...'when a slayer cries' and isn't Faith technically the slayer now, so maybe she needs to cry and Buffy is just a supercharged human.

well either way
Loved it
Update soon
Harry
Answers are coming your way Harry ...remember, I'm evil!
 
sourThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/11/2006 03:42 am
Great chapter, the story is getting better&better.Can't wait for the update
Not long to wait
 
MorriganThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/11/2006 02:59 am
Heehee!  It's wonderful to see them put in thier places.
I agree
 
DeliciaThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/11/2006 02:27 am
Nicely done! Angel and Xander really did deserve that! I'm so eager to see what happens with Buffy's immortality! Btw, I always loved the "rotate many foodstuffs" line! Cracks me up everytime!!
Thank you, all thanks to the use of French must go to AtheneWolfe and her fish
 
fanxstitchThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 11:35 pm
This was wonderful. I like Angel and Xander get theirs finally. I look forward to more of this.
Coming right up
 
MarzBarThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 10:28 pm
OMG! Spike's immortality must be threatened now. They need to find something to bring him back quickly. Nice job on shutting out the Whelp and Angelus together. More story please.
Vampires can die/dust so they don't actually have true imortality
 
NikkoleThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 10:28 pm
They are such a couple of bastards! I am glad they are both forced to stay out. I love this story! Can't wait to see more...
You won't have to wait too long
 
IsabelThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 10:06 pm
Go Buff! That was satisfying to say the least. Of course Xander and Angel were going to gang up together and form the club of rejected losers lol Great chapter.
Thank you, it was cathartic to write
 
CassandraThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 09:58 pm
Lovely. I can just picture the look on those two's faces when they get hit with that. I hope to see more of your story soon. Until then...
Thank you, and it is coming
 
TamaraThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 09:35 pm
I'll bet Angel thought he was gonna scare Anya.

Good idea on still binding Willow even though her aura's cleaned up. You really want to discourage any backsliding.

That's gotta be one satisfying door slam.
Angel is not the brightest person in the world
 
HPfanThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 09:07 pm
Hope Willow really understands when she's back to normal. Go, Anya! Go, Giles! And go, Buffy! The three of them can definitely kick butt. Love the neat revelations about Buffy. Looking forward to the next update.
You won't have long to wait
 
golddrakeThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 07:46 pm
great chapter
thank you
 
letitiaThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 07:36 pm
Just getting to the last scene in this chapter was definitely worth the wait. I am just glad that Buffy put just about all fo them in their place. And Angel and Xander get what they get.
Thank you very much.
 
kimbclarThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:59 pm
Go team Anya and Giles! There like the dynamic duo of wit and sarcasm. Great chapter! I know this story is in the Angst genre but does that mean no happy ending. I don't mind angst, in fact I like it, but pretty please a happy ending!
You know I can't tell you that
 
BigbirdThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:57 pm
A double put down! yeah loving the Anya in this.
Thank you so much
 
Spikes Slayer2The Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:46 pm
hehe go buffy!! lol love the Giles/anya action! very nice..
Thank you. I like the ganya bits too
 
IrinaThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:36 pm
I'm so happy Willow listened to Buffy. I loved how sarcastic Giles was with Angel and Xander. Buffy being immortal is a really interesting development, i'm really looking forward to learning more about it. The ending of the chapter was very satisfying. Great update!
Thank you for your kind words
 
DarkBloodyMistressThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:30 pm
gawd they are such sickos... xander and angel that is... not you know, buffy and them... lol
LOL...I totally understand.
 
EmileeThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 06:19 pm
Amazing. Angel and Xander dislike Spike/William and/or obsess about Buffy enough to present a united front. Degenerates and monsters was certainly accurate, and frankly, if we're basing it on how a person acts rather then the status of their pulse, then both descriptions fit both males. Excellent update. Can't wait for more. Are you putting your other WIP's on hiatus to work on this one? Not that this isn't good, but I also really like Paradox, and would love to see it continue.
No I'm stil working on the others but time restraints and Real Life forced me to slow down. I'm able to update this on daily because it's already finished
 
NeartThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 05:58 pm
The Giles and Anya interaction is just getting better and better. So Buffy is immortal..hmmmm?
I live in hope that you'll allow Buffy the chance to give both Angel and Xander a severe slapping and a side order of ass kicking with a little stomping for dessert.
Feeling the need for some violence, must be that time of the month, ya know, AngelXander Tension!
I know the feeling
 
KarynThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 05:55 pm
poor buffy, glad she slammed the door in their faces!!
LOL...me too
 
VerdaThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 05:42 pm
Just love this story. Anya is great. So happy that she's feeling so good about herself and her friends. Yay Buffy! got her little revenge. Take that Angel and Xander *sticks out tongue* Great read. Thanks
Thank you for your kind words
 
gotkonaThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 04:58 pm
Go Buffy. Lovely chapter.
Thank you.
 
duke6665The Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 04:49 pm
With barely restrained violence, Buffy closed the door in their faces.
wow another great chapter. every time i think this can't get any better you just keep blowing me away. as much as i want to see what happens in the end i also just plain don't want this fic to ever end. it is THE best fic i have had the pleasure of reading so far.
You just made my day
 
kimThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 04:01 pm
Well that certainly makes it clear to them. Even those two should have the grace and shame to go away for at least a day.

And Anya just gets more useful by the minute!
Anya is just flowing in this story
 
BridgetThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 03:54 pm
Really loving this story. Another great chapter.
Thank you so much
 
jl1980The Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 03:51 pm
way to cut to the chase, buffy...lol...maybe now these two losers will get a clue and sod off...lol... another excellent update, very good job...hope they can get rid of the chip, and get william/spike better soon
Two losers is a very good way to discribe them
 
LouThe Truth is a Double Edged Sword07/10/2006 03:48 pm
A perfect moment!
Thank you
 
AthenewolfeThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/28/2006 12:39 pm
I absoltuly loved the last line - and since I typed this three times and got a fatal error each time - just going to post it now
Thank you sweetheart
 
~*~Tasha~*~The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/22/2006 07:37 pm
Bravo on Buffy for finding a way to finally get through to Willow. To see the statue crying at least gave me hope that Willow learned her lesson. Plus with the goddess being the one to merit punishment onto Willow in the first place, she can't just blame it on the others not understanding her wanting to fix it.

Excellent chapter. The title says it all The Little Witch That Could, But Shouldn't.
One hopes the lesson will be well learnt
 
CordykittenThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/21/2006 08:51 am
Loved Buffy's try to comfort Spike. ~ And Willow is a statue now? Her own fault... at last she has to hear now what Buffy has to say to her. And she, Willow, didn't like the truth. ~ Good chapter.
Are you sure she didn't like it?
 
sircThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/16/2006 10:49 am
well done
thank you so much
 
vladtThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/14/2006 12:18 am
very good read. love buffy's monologue to red. wish i knew if the statue was crying out of remorse, or anger? thanks for the fine read.
You will have an answer soon
 
CassieThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/13/2006 07:07 am
great story
Thank you
 
missus_graceThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/12/2006 01:26 am
Nice touch, having Willow unable to speak back and having to listen only.
She had no choice but to listen but it was good that this time she actually heard.
 
RobynThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/11/2006 11:50 pm
Wow, Buffy really isn't living in the land of denial anymore. Her speech to Willow had a real air of maturity and understanding that shows how much she has grown in just a couple of days.
Remember, she knew Willow couldn't talk back...that helped her!
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 03:27 pm
maybe i don't, cause the last couple days the replies to my reviews have seemed to be getting nastier and nastier
in what way is 'let me know when you are' even remotely nasty?
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 03:19 pm
okay, not sure what i did to put a bug up your ass... but sheesh, if you don't appreciate me reviewing your stories anymore then fine, won't... not sure you'll miss one review anyway...
Seriously not sure what you are talking about...you said you weren't sure if you felt sorry for willow...i said let me know when you are...not seeing the problem. maybe you just don't get my humour...sorry about that
 
DeliciaThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 11:17 am
Oh, sweet! The demon could only rest with her scent! StatueWillow was a great idea; now she HAS to listen, even if she doesn't want to! Xander's not gonna be happy, oh well!! He did bring it upon himself, the creep! Thanks for the wonderful update!
you are more than welcome.
 
jl1980The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 07:24 am
i think buffy handled that well...not too judgy, but making her understand..i hope when willow returns to herself she will be willing to listen to reason...great update, can't wait for more
What makes you thnk she hasn't already heard
 
LadyYashkaThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 01:55 am
I love this story and I can't wait for more! (I'm also looking forward to you updating your other stories as well)
LOL..the other stories are coming, this one is already finished!
 
MorriganThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/10/2006 12:41 am
Aww... sad little Willow statue.  Well, she shouldn't have been doin' what she was doin.' Looking forward to see what happens now.
Well I hope you enjoy what I've done
 
Jace NoxThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 10:53 pm
The last three chapters that I have read have been brillent, since I received all the updates at once I thought I would review at the end of the last chappie.

I cannot believe Willow. I just can't see how she thought magick after the magick would fix anything.

And William and Spike, their personalities are so vastly different yet the same, and Buffy loving both of them. I can't wait to see the final outcome.
it wasn't about the magic it was about the control.
 
Spikes Slayer2The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 10:44 pm
i think its funny that willow turn into a statue.. lol
Ahhh...and the light goes on for the slow girl
 
gotkonaThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 10:20 pm
Ok now that is strange, a crying statue. Can't wait to read more.
I hope you won't have long to wait
 
kimThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 10:08 pm
Ah, good...amazing the things you learn when you have no choice but to listen. Binding her powers for a while is a really good idea. She needs to learn how to be college student Willow, before she can be witchy Willow. Gaining magical aptitude gave her a short cut to pass growing up.

Nice to see Spike again. I hope they can heal him soon.
So do I...so do I
 
KarynThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 09:06 pm
awesome chapter jack!! loved it ! *sigh* maybe she'll actually learn something this time.
*sigh* maybe
 
IrinaThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 08:31 pm
It was nice that Spike was able to resurface, loved his talk with Buffy. The whole Willow turning into a statue was very clever. I hope Willow took Buffy words to heart. Wonderful chapter!
Thank you
 
duke6665The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 07:59 pm
great chapter..course who knows if willow will learn
guess we'll have to wait and see
 
VerdaThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 07:55 pm
What a great idea to bind her powers, now she has to listen. Don't think a binding spell will help Xander, not that Buffy will have anything to do with him again but kinda feel sorry for him 'cause he just lost most of his friends and girlfriend. So happy that Spike got to talk to Buffy and that she reassured him that she was there for him, all of him. This just keeps getting better and better with each chapter. Thanks for this great story.
Has Xander lost Willow?
 
TamaraThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 07:37 pm
Definitely the only way tp get Willow or Xander to sit still and listen but even this probably wouldn't get through to Xander.
I would have to agree
 
DarThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 07:12 pm
I like this Anya more with each chapter and I like how they all relate to her. Another Great Chapter.
Thank you so much.
 
sourThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 06:34 pm
oh and may be spike can learn about xander's daydreams and beat him hımm? poetic justice?
lol...william wold lose at this stage
 
sourThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 06:31 pm
Great chapter. Let me guess white witch is Tara? Statue idea is great.
waiting for uptade!
Soon. I promise
 
BridgetThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 06:09 pm
Good chapter. I wonder what will happen with Xander? Will Buffy confront him with his memories?
guess you'll have to wait and see
 
kimbclarThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 05:33 pm
I like it! It's really good how Buffy's able to get everything off her chest. I also like how you incorporated the whole Willow into a statute idea. I seem to recall that's what happened to Amy's mom. I always wondered if blowing up the highschool killed her. Well, I guess I'll always have to wonder. Great chapter!
Thank you, I think the statue is probably buried but not damaged.
 
IsabelThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 05:19 pm
You managed to make me feel bad for Willow. Which is hard to achieve =) The scene with Spike was really sweet and touching. I hope she can help him.
So do I
 
anon462The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:54 pm
Wow. This story just keeps getting better and better with every chapter.
Thank you very much.
 
golddrakeThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:35 pm
great chapter
Thank you
 
Harry 4EyesThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:32 pm
Thw white Witch...wonder who that is? Cordelia? heheee Well I guess Tara makes an appearence soon, and then she can unite with Oz and leave Willow alone and sad.

Poor William, really must be feeling his 140plus years if he has to have his great great great nephew bathe him. But he looks good for his age gotta admit...lol

Whoa...maybe someone needs to turn Xander so Buffy can dust him. good therapy that, like shopping.

So far we have, the will be done spell, then the protection spell, and then the forget it all spell and it's counter. But we still have the Disable chip spell, the return fix demon spell and then turn Statue back to girl spell still to go...I bet Spike is glad he's sick otherwise he'd be in a right state with all the magic and it's consequences.

Well Jackers you definitely spoiling us, make it that much more dificult when you slow down with your posting.
update soon
Harry
I promise not to slow down with this one.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:30 pm
not sure i feel sorry for willow..
Let me know when you are
 
HPfanThe Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:09 pm
All I can say is wow!
All I can say is thanks
 
Pin1The Little Witch That Could…But Shouldn’t07/09/2006 04:03 pm
Nice chapter and I'm glad to see Buffy dealing directly with her issues. Xander is sooo slimey!
Thank you for reading and reviewing
 
AthenewolfeWhen the Chips Are Down.07/28/2006 12:22 pm
loved this chapter - your anya is brilliant - loved thier sense of humor - go for it girl!
Thanks sweetness, she reminds me a bit of you
 
~*~Tasha~*~When the Chips Are Down.07/22/2006 07:31 pm
One of my favorite lines from this story is when Buffy tells William that it isn't a good idea to tell the Slayer that she soothes a demon. LOL. That was a memorable quote that I'll always associate with you and this story. {Smiles}

ROFL on Anya's link to the "vengeance" world to get Angel an "Infestation" ROFL ... still crack up over that one. Her "I like you" to Spike was a funny but cute way to soothe Spike/William's worries about her wreaking vengeance on them.

Angel still watching from outside. Funny the show Anya and Buffy gave him. {giggles}
thank you so much sweetie, but I'm gonna get an ego! LOL
 
CordykittenWhen the Chips Are Down.07/21/2006 08:43 am
And now it's about Spike's chip and some more research. Oh I really like the way Anya fits / is in this story. And the thought that Anya still has her contacts in the vengeance world. *gg* a vampire crab infestation for Angel, how nice. :-D Loved Anya and Buffy teasing Angel *gg* (If I don't have time to finish this now, I'll come back later.)
Thank you again for the review
 
sircWhen the Chips Are Down.07/16/2006 10:40 am
Loved the bedroom scene
It was fun to write
 
vladtWhen the Chips Are Down.07/14/2006 12:05 am
very good update, love your anya. thanks for the fine read.
Thank you so much
 
CassieWhen the Chips Are Down.07/13/2006 07:07 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
DeliciaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/10/2006 10:43 am
Very nice! I like William admitting that Buffy calms the demon, that was so sweet. Also, I think Anya and Giles would be great together. I love that the girls teased peepingAngel, dumb stalker-guy! Thanks!
Thank you
 
duke6665When the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 04:33 pm
another perfec chapter. i have never read an anya/giles fic before. would make a better pairing then anya/xander
I agree Ganya rules!
 
HPfanWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 04:03 pm
Lovely new chapter. Really like Anya here. I think that she and Giles will make a neat couple. Gotta move on to the next chapter now - just can't wait.
Thank you so much
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 03:32 pm
Fine then... its not sweet... sheesh....
ok
 
deedoWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 02:14 pm
aww that is sooo sweet!!
It's nice to see how easily Anya is included and Giles related to Spike, thats pretty cool
I will try
 
RobynWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 01:01 pm
I enjoyed Buffy's thought about Giles having a bed, it was really quite cute. I also loved the girl talk when they realized that Angel was outside the window. I like that Anya is really being seen for the individual that she is and not just an extension of Xander.
Thank you, you are too kind.
 
LouWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 11:46 am
Another great chapter. I always thought that Anya would have way more knowledge than anyone else. Good on you!
Thank you
 
BridgetWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 11:02 am
Great chapter. I really like Anya in your story. She was really under utilized on the show.
I also like Buffy and Giles in this story they are not so judgmental. Great writing all around.
Thank you very much
 
gotkonaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 10:24 am
Great chapter.
Thank you
 
NeartWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 08:06 am
I love the spuffy but I can't tell ya how delighted I am that Anya is getting a chance to 'blossom'.
Thank you
 
Harry 4EyesWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 07:45 am
You know it's stories like these that make me want to watch Angel I ave no idea what you said is true or not. The whole Germans working on superhuman weapons seem to ea favourite with American Comic book writers but have no idea if the whole submarine part was your own work or jossverse.

LOL sorves the git right for spying...I was hoping to here a thump and the vamp fall off the roof or tree, then i remembered Giles lives in an apartment complex and the tree is outside Buffy's house not Giles.

Poor Anya, deserves someone who can treat her like an equal, but after seaon 7 and Angel seaosn 5, I don't really like him too much either at times. It's like he grew older and became more typical Watcher than he started off.

Well Jackers still loving it
Update Soon
Harry
Of course it's true Harry, I wouldn't steer you wrong
 
Spikes Slayer2When the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 07:01 am
aww.. a buffy/anya friendship.. thats cool.. i wish they had explored that more in the show.. hmm love the growl fest and aww the last line?! perfect..
Thank you so much
 
MorriganWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 04:31 am
Eep!  That's like... butterfly inducingly great!  Loved this chappie!
Thank you, you just made my day.
 
missus_graceWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 02:11 am
I had a feeling there was going to be Ganya!

And there are times when I feel this way about Willow, too. Watching the early S.4 episodes where she uses magic willy nilly and to suit herself bother me to no end. Are she and Xander going to be redeemable here?
now that wold be telling
 
IrinaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/09/2006 12:20 am
Awww... this chapter gave me all sorts of happies, I absolutely loved it! Great update Jack!
Thank you so much.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 11:39 pm
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh so SWEET!!
um...thanks.
 
KarynWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 11:04 pm
awesome chapter jack!!
thank you sweet girl
 
golddrakeWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 11:01 pm
great chapter
thank you.
 
BadiaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 10:40 pm
This is such a cool story! Love that Anya 1100 years of experience is being acknowledged.
Thank you, it seemed a shame to waste it
 
VerdaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 10:07 pm
Loved the Anya/Giles pairing since "Tabula Rasa". Giles definately needs to *have many orgasms*. Vampire crabs!!! yes, give them to Angel, he sooo deserves it. Love it. Thank you for this great story.
Thank you, nice to hear from a fellow vengeance demon...er...justice Angel ???
 
kimWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:57 pm
Awwwww...cuddles...

Giles is doomed, LOL. He has no chance at resisting Anya when she has a goal in mind. I always liked the potential of Ganya.
Anya certainly is a goal oriented person
 
sourWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:50 pm
Great chapter. Giles/Anya is brilliant. I think there should be Xander trashing (please). And I'm dying to findout Buffy's reaction.
AHHH..the limits of a short story
 
BigbirdWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:49 pm
I'm all caught up now... Yeh Angel bashing my favorite fun time. I always hated how Anya was treated this is much better, and Giles gets a girl! loving this story, thanks.
Thank you so much
 
AzelmaWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:40 pm
Awesome chapter! But, what a cliffhanger for an ending! I want to see Buffy's reaction! And I love that Anya asked about dating Giles - I really do like them together. Hee.
Thank you...so do I
 
TamaraWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:37 pm
I always hated the Initative storyline. They should've been treated like any other group trying to take over the Hellmouth. Having Buffy join them was extremely detrimental to her character.
I have to agree. Might look at righting that wrong in the near future
 
kimbclarWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:32 pm
Awe! That last bit was smoopy or maybe smaltzy but I loved it. Sap does a body good.
LOL...thanks...I think
 
jl1980When the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:23 pm
wow...this story is awesome...so very touching...and i love giles/anya!!! yea!!! there's not a lot of fic with the ship -- that *I've* found, anyway -- but i love it!!! can't wait for your next update
Thank you, I'm overwhelmed.
 
IsabelWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:22 pm
Aww, Anya and Giles! I hope Giles will be interested because I think they'd be perfect together. And that little scene in the bedroom with Angel watching was hilarious. Good stuff lol
Thank you so much.
 
MarzBarWhen the Chips Are Down.07/08/2006 09:20 pm
Go Anya! Now I'm worried about them just making it through the night. More story please.
LOL...tune in tomorrow same bat time same bat channel!
 
AthenewolfeLet the Games Begin07/28/2006 12:18 pm
I do like Anya in this fic - she is perhaps my favorite character in this fic
Thank you..I think the same way
 
~*~Tasha~*~Let the Games Begin07/22/2006 07:19 pm
Man Willow truly is delusional. She is all can't they understand my pain ... then in the next sentence she is bitter and saying Buffy should just get over Angel already. What a hypocrite. You really do paint her for what her true form was. They tried to gloss is over on the show as her just Oppss and all that, but look where it led. You have this spot on for Willow's character and attitude.

I would have loved to have seen the look on Angel's face when William/Spike did not respond to his "Sire's" voice. To be defied so openly would Angelus and Angel into quite a snit. Loved that part.

The Buffy/Anya bonding moment was precious.

I also liked seeing the side of Spike/William where he tells Giles that he tried to hide all evidence to his true family. See, that makes sense to me. Why? Because the Council's books on Spike were all hideously wrong. They had him as a ruffian and brute from birth. It was the total opposite of what WIlliam really was. It always made me wonder if the Council was just stupid, or did Spike lead them astray on purpose.
leading them astray would definately be in character
 
CordykittenLet the Games Begin07/21/2006 08:30 am
Good that Buffy sees clear now. And talked to Anya that she don't have to take the emotional abuse, that she is part of the team. And binding Willow's witchcraft? That would be a good thing. Now they have to help William.
Yes...William does need help
 
sircLet the Games Begin07/16/2006 10:21 am
great chapter
thank you
 
CassieLet the Games Begin07/13/2006 07:06 am
great story
Thank you
 
RobynLet the Games Begin07/09/2006 12:38 pm
I loved Buffy's little speech to Anya about Xander and her friendship, letting Anya know that she deserved better and was important as an individual was something that I wish had happened on the show. I love how your fics help correct these things. I feel bad for Buffy but am glad that she got to really see Willow, Xander, and Angle's thoughts. Doing so will allow her to reevaluate her relationships with them and help her decide how and how much she might want them to continue to be apart of her life. I am really looking forward to how you make use of what Buffy has learned.
Then I hope I don't let you down
 
IsabelLet the Games Begin07/08/2006 08:49 pm
Not jumping to conclusions here. Just... How do you call that again? Oh yeah, wishful thinking lol =) Unfortunately, I don't think Buffy could turn her back on her friends, at least not definitively. :::sighs::: But life would be sooo much easier for her if she did. Anyway, we'll see where the story goes because I have no idea. Which is a good thing because it makes it more fun to read. But wherever you'll take it, I know for a fact I will like it.
You are much too kind
 
IrinaLet the Games Begin07/08/2006 06:18 am
This chapter really showed how thickheaded Willow is, I can't wait to find out if she gets her powers binded. All the threats against William are really worrying me, I hope Anya is able a to find a way to help him. I liked the way Buffy reaffirmed her friendship with Anya. Wonderful update!
thank you so much
 
DeliciaLet the Games Begin07/08/2006 02:42 am
Great work! I'm glad Giles put Willow in her place; she needed it! All those memories for Buffy to live through were gut-wrenching! Now things can start to get better (I hope!).
lol...so do I
 
HPfanLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 10:41 pm
Thanks for the lovely update. Willow just doesn't get it. *Sigh* Buffy needed to know the truth about her "friends", but I felt so sorry for her disillusionment. Looking forward to learning more about Giles' family connection to William. Hope to see a new chapter soon.
As soon as I can
 
Mr_ChaosLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 10:12 pm
Definately an interesting chapter. I am with Anya...try your best shot, Willow. I wonder if when she does fail, if she will go super timid again. Personally, I get the feeling, from both the story and the show, that willow is putting on a similar act as Spike/William. heck, Willow is real close to acting jsut as William did when he first rose from the grave.
Guess you are just going to have to wait and see
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 09:04 pm
much pain and death to angel and xander... and willow... yes yes
vicious! lol
 
letitiaLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 07:25 pm
as usual GREAT chaper. I am just glad that they have Anya around. Angel better watch his step. I am glad that William is being accepted as he is and protected. Willow is such a loose cannon.
Willow is certainly that! lol
 
MarzBarLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 06:37 pm
I hope this will be a productive new start with relationships amongst the people in the house now. Hopefully they have shaken themselves loose from Xander, Willow and Angelus. More story please.
We'll see
 
BridgetLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 06:34 pm
The last two chapters were excellent. Great idea having Buffy experience everyone's memories. I can't imagine what will happen next.
Thank you
 
KarynLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 06:15 pm
awesome chapter jack!! *huggles* Love it!!
Thank you...couldn't do it with out you
 
BadiaLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 06:15 pm
Another great chapter. I always wondered how Xander was the heart in the spell to defeat Adam lies and attitude towards Anya and Buffy, so I have to love a story that hows his flaws.
I wondered about that too!
 
jl1980Let the Games Begin07/07/2006 05:35 pm
this story gets better every chapter...though angel's departure had a bit of an ominous note to it, didn't it? i'm kinda scared...everybody's out to get spike ...can't wait for your next update, as always!
Thank you so much for your continued incouragement
 
Pin1Let the Games Begin07/07/2006 05:22 pm
Love Anya in this and even Buffy comes around to being lovable. I think the deadly trio of ANgel, Xander and Willow will be very messy. Thanks~
Thank you
 
gotkonaLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 05:17 pm
Great chapter.
Thank you.
 
VerdaLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 04:46 pm
Yup, add Red to the short list of villians. Very glad that you're portraying Willow, Xander and Angel the way you are. As the darkness consumed each one it was hard to enjoy them the way that I did during the first three seasons. Wow, Anya can take out the chip? Cool! She really is powerful. Wouldn't mind a showdown between her and Red. Great chapter. Hope that you can continue to update this quickly, love it so much.
She turned her cheating boyfriend into a troll...hell yeah she's powerful!
 
LouLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 04:23 pm
It'd be a hoot if Angel, Willow and Xander teamed up together - three bosses and no workers!
hmmm.
 
duke6665Let the Games Begin07/07/2006 03:47 pm
another great chapter. loved angel tryinf to pretend he didnt claim buffy .and buffy picking anya over xander. really love the idea of having anya bind willows powers
Thank you so much
 
vladtLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 03:14 pm
really enjoying anya receiving the recognition she should have had in canon. red and xander should have gone with angel. thanks for the great read.
You are most welcome.
 
DeanSamWinchesterfanLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 03:14 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.
Thank you and I will.
 
Harry 4eyesLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 02:41 pm
OK I changed my mind, Willow can't be helped, you should have her powers binded, though from what I understood in season 7, she's not really that powerful herself but she is a good conductor of magic. the power required for the spells actually come from other items or beings, nd she can absorb more of that power than an average which. Not like Harry Potter where the people themselves have the magic within them.

So Giles is related to a Prat, Spike/William who is a Pratt and Xander and Angel who are both prats. And Wesley was a prat when on the show...so basically Jossverse is full or Prats. lol

But lets get back to finding the cure for the now humaniod Demon we have here. Wonder if the ship stops working now that his body functions are working too...surely the chip was designed to work on Vamps...but it would either not work on a Human brain or completely fry it.

well Jackers you certainly been busy.
Update Soon
Harry.
Good point on the chip human/vampire compatibility question. This is one of the anomilies we find in Jossverse. For a human to be considered dead, all brain activity ceases. However, for a micro chip to work by causing electrical impulses to the pain centres of the brain, 1: the brain would need to be producing electricity, ie. working, and 2: the pain centres would only work as part of a funtioning or partially functioning brain. Either of these situations suggest life rather than death and this is incompatable with the concept of vampires as shown in the jossverse.
 
golddrakeLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 02:34 pm
great chapter
Thank you
 
IsabelLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 01:58 pm
I know this might make me look like a bad BTVS fan in some people's eyes, but I haven't liked the original Scoobies since season 3, prefering the adopted Scoobies instead. I always prefered Tara, Anya and Spike and despised the way Xander and Willow treated them. So seeing Xander, Willow and Angel apparently get their membership to the Scooby club revoked makes me WAY happy. Well, of course Tara isn't in this fic, but I'm loving the way you treat Spike and Anya. Good for you. I loved this chapter. Very satisfying.
Really not a good idea to jump to conclusions
 
kimLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 01:56 pm
Changes...changes...

It's not Thanksgiving yet, so Angel isn't there for "Pangs"...had he sensed things, in L.A., that quickly?

Anya really is the quicker fixer-upper, now, isn't she?
This started during the 'Something Blue' episode which took place after 'Pangs'.
 
TamaraLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 01:51 pm
Definitely bind Willow's powers. It should've been done in canon after the mass amnesia at the very latest.

Great job having Buffy tell Anya that she's a friend and doesn't have to take Xander's crap.
Thank you, both are things i wish had happened on the show.
 
Spikes_lizardLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 01:43 pm
oh i am so loving this willow and xander get put out on their rightous butts and angel also i am doing the snoopy dance
Don't start that dance too quickly
 
kimbclarLet the Games Begin07/07/2006 01:27 pm
It just gets better and better. I love this fic! Can't wait to see where you take us next. I so hope William/Spike realize that they aren't beneath Buffy.
Some how I think William is the harder sell
 
AthenewolfeIn the Face of Memories07/28/2006 12:08 pm
Poor Buffy - what an over load - but a brilliant way for her to come to grips with everything that happened and thier thoughts. Good chappie!
Thanks sweetie
 
~*~Tasha~*~In the Face of Memories07/22/2006 07:11 pm
Very powerful chapter with the realizations all around that Buffy saw, felt and lived through their eyes.

I got a big kick out of Giles telling Angel off with his ... he is my family and stolen by yours ... bit. That was so cool. Kick arse Giles (so long as it is for Buffy and Spike and not against them) is a treat to see.
I have to agree, I do like an onside Giles
 
CordykittenIn the Face of Memories07/21/2006 08:22 am
One thing done at last. Thanks to Anya the claim is broken now. And apparently it opened Buffy eyes a bit more, regarding Angel(us). But now Angel wants to have William back. Good then he won't get him :-D And now Anya has to reverse Willow's spell. Buffy has to relieve their memories if she has bad luck? Well I don't think she'll like what she'll see. No, it was a bit hard for her, seeing her friends this way.
Yes, very bad
 
sircIn the Face of Memories07/16/2006 10:12 am
great chapter
thank you
 
CassieIn the Face of Memories07/13/2006 07:06 am
well done
Thank you
 
MorriganIn the Face of Memories07/08/2006 05:03 am
Wow.  That would be a whole lot of let-down to take in, all at once.  Poor girl.
Yes, but necessary
 
VerdaIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 03:59 pm
What an amazing sequence of events! It was a good idea for
Buffy to see those memories, that way she would have all the facts to help her to work through their relationships. Alway enjoy it when Giles identifies Spike as part of his family. Thank you so much for this wonderful story.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review it.
 
DeliciaIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 01:16 pm
Great chapter! I like how you have Giles as William's nephew; that's so cool! I'm glad that Buffy could see the memories herself, it will help clear her of the warm fuzzies concerning some folks!
One would hope
 
Harry 4EyesIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 06:39 am
I would really like to know which prat thought it was a good idea to give William the surname Pratt...That sentence should explain why I have a problem with it. Seriously, can you imagine being called an idiot all your life?

Well looks like Willow is salvagible....barely. Xander was a goner from the beginning, so he's not going to be any help. Angel needs dusting. Maybe Bring back Oz that would be cool, and bring in Tara somehow....they'd make a cute couple, one too shy to talk and the other who just doesn't want to...lol

Ooohh so is Angel going to order Buffy to terminate William in the next update? I think he'd posted some spoilers that's why it's familiar. otherwise i'm phychic and didn't even realise...lol

I'd like to see Angel explain his way out of this situation considering Buffy has already been in his head and knows his reasoning...

Well Jackers plenty of food for thought here.
Loved it
Update Soon
Harry
Always a pleasure Harry
 
Spikes Slayer2In the Face of Memories07/07/2006 04:57 am
wow.. that was very moving..
Thank you very much
 
katakataIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 04:05 am
I think it was Mark Twain (maybe) who said that 99% of a man's life takes place inside his head. It's like some actual event takes place in the physical world but it's the motivations/machinations that lead to these events and our experiences of them that give them their meaning. I'd imagine it would be difficult enough experiencing your own life as a slayer let alone adding everyone else's baggage to the mix. I guess it's one way to feel 50 pounds heavier in just five minutes - though I prefer to do it with chocolate myself. LOL. More soon please?
As soon as I can
 
NeartIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 02:14 am
brill chapter, Anya is the best, Giles as Spikes 'Da' should be good, how will he feel about it when Spike is Spike again? Fun, Fun, Fun.
I hope he grounds him!
 
StacyIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 01:30 am
Really good!! I love it so far! Thanks for writing.
Thanks for reading
 
missus_graceIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 01:00 am
Every chapter is so full of revelations and twists!

I always love it when Spike is related to Giles. Great work!
Thank you
 
IrinaIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 12:42 am
I loved how Anya tricked Angel into releasing Buffy from his claim. And William being related to Giles is such an exciting development. I'm a little worried about how possesive Angel is acting toward William though. I really enjoyed Buffy's eye opening look into Willow and Angel's memories. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter!
Thank you so much.
 
RobynIn the Face of Memories07/07/2006 12:09 am
Wow, there was real power with those memories.

I love how Anya got Angel to break the claim and the immediate affect it had on Buffy. That coupled with the view she got of his and the others memories should hopefully help her in the way Anya and Giles would like. With what she has just learned she is really going to need theirs and William’s support as she sorts through what she has learned and regains her equilibrium. I hope this also helps her stand by and stand up for Anya when it comes to Xander and Willow. I love the family connection between Giles and William, though it makes me a bit unhappy about how poorly he treated Spike when he came for help. I am really enjoying this story and I am looking forward to the aftermath from what Buffy has just learned.
Giles was reacting to the demon. He had no idea that his relative was still a part of his body.
 
TamaraIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 10:58 pm
Clever , Clever Anya.

I'm glad Buffy recognizes that Xander's treatment of Anya is abuse.

If Angel has any sense at all , he'd run like hell asap.
LOL...have to agree.
 
margaretIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 10:50 pm
great story. i love that buffy gets to see all these events and how they are influencing the people around her update soon!
I will try to do just that!
 
margaretIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 10:50 pm
great story. i love that buffy gets to see all these events and how they are influencing the people around her update soon!
I will and thank you
 
AnneIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 10:43 pm
Excellent story. I absolutely love it. I cannot wait to read more, especially to see how Buffy kicks Angel's butt for even thinking that he is so superior. Go Giles protecting William. I always hated that that man's character got so tainted as the seasons rolled by. Hope to see more tomorrow.
Giles in the role of protective father?
 
fanxstitchIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 10:41 pm
A really great chapter. Glad that Buffy gets to see her 'friends' real minds and thoughts.
Thank you
 
vladtIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 09:12 pm
fantastic read. wonder if anya really needed an anchor? buffy will have a lot to deal with after those revelations. love the tale, thanks for the fun. love this anya.
Anya needed to focus on the benediction so yes, she needed Buffy as the anchor.
 
MurphIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:59 pm
Wow. This is a fabulous story. I really love where this chapter went. Can't wait to see the aftermath.
Thank you
 
Lisa NadolnyIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:59 pm
Wow. This is a fabulous story. I really love where this chapter went. Can't wait to see the aftermath.
Thank you
 
EmileeIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:35 pm
Ouch. Poor Buffy. All that vitriolic filth spewed at her. Well the veil has been lifted, now how is she going to handle it? And how does everyone reacte to the spell being broken? Not to mention Angel realizing he broke his claim, which I doubt he would have done under normal circumstances. Can't wait to find out.
won't be long
 
HPfanIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:27 pm
Talk about a moment of truth. That was awesome. Can't wait to see both Angel and Willow try to explain away their past actions. Hope Buffy tears a strip off each of them. Just let Angel try to get his hands on William now. Update soon, please!
Thank you and I'll try to updat daily
 
kimIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:08 pm
And now she knows...You can finally be an adult, Buffy, seeing your 'friends' through realistic eyes, instead of the rosy tint of youth. Learning about the missing day should finally put to rights her feelings for Angel, and what they'd had - rather, what she'd had in the relationship, since her feelings came from a different place than his.

Giles knowing the familial relation all along, and yet, treating Spike that way?

I don't suppose sire's blood would be helpful, since Spike's body is functioning as human now...
You need to remember that without the soul there is no familial link. The demon is not related to Giles. I imagine having the body of a relative so close and someone else possessing his body would make you a little resentful towards the possessor.
 
KarynIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:08 pm
*sniff* wonderful chapter! poor buffy!
Thank you sweetie
 
MarzBarIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 08:01 pm
Tough day for Buffy. She now has the ability to make things tough for those who think they still control her. More story please.
coming soon
 
Pin1In the Face of Memories07/06/2006 07:15 pm
Another great chapter! Nice, efficient breakage of the claim and I love the memory tour. Looking forward to seeing what happens next
You won't have long to wait
 
letitiaIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 06:50 pm
I am just glad that Buffy has Giles and Anya now that she has her eyes open. And I just hope that she stands strong. Love her with William and how dare Angel just think as always he can take control of things.
Thank you so much
 
redwulf50In the Face of Memories07/06/2006 06:44 pm
Damn can we stake Angel's sanctimonious ass soon??
Patience wolfie
 
DeanSamWinchesterfanIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 06:07 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.I love that William and Giles are related.
Thank you
 
golddrakeIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 06:05 pm
great chapter
thank you
 
duke6665In the Face of Memories07/06/2006 05:46 pm
wow great chapter. i really loved the spell and flashbacks. i have never read a fic where anya was treated as anything but a pest or an idiot or just plain not important. its nice to see her play an important part. really loving her in this fic. great work
Thank you...I love her too
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 05:26 pm
....bastards....
you think?
 
IsabelIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 05:01 pm
Wow. Much, MUCH needed walk down memory lane. So nice to see Buffy finally see the events as they were, to see her friend's faults, to see Angel... well, the way I see him lol. Fantastic update.
Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy
 
jl1980In the Face of Memories07/06/2006 04:56 pm
wow...that was a powerful chapter, jack..i'm in tears...poor buffy, so much to have to face all at once...i'm so glad giles is "adopting" william, so to speak, and protecting him from angel,because something tells me, angel or angelus, william wouldn't be safe for long either way....that chapter was beyond words, so awesome!! can't wait for more
Thank you for your very kind words.
 
EllaIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 04:50 pm
aww. poor buffy.
great chapter. i hope to see more soon.
Thank you and I try to update daily
 
LouIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 04:29 pm
Wow that was some revelation! Great chapter.
Thank you
 
slaymesoftlyIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 04:11 pm
Whew! A lot for Buffy to take in, but what an eye-opener, huh? Can't wait to see what she decides to do when she stops crying...
Process, deny and let the slayer take over ? LOL
 
Spikes_lizardIn the Face of Memories07/06/2006 04:08 pm
more please i love it
Thank you...i try to update daily.
 
AthenewolfeWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/28/2006 12:04 pm
Three years of memories - shakes head. I would hate to see what would have happened if they hadn;t been in the room when it occured. Shakes head and starts to daydream about that scenerio...
rofl...you is evil LOL
 
~*~Tasha~*~Who's that Knocking at my Door?07/22/2006 07:04 pm
When Anya said that Angelus' curse came from the rape and murder of a potential Slayer, I still gasped. The fact that he knew what she was (since Dru informed him) and continued on ... was juat abominable. It would have been different if Angelus was willing to take a Slayer head on. He wasn't. He went after a potential who would be weaker ... to try to prove his "manliness". That's wrong and cowardly.

Go Giles with his support of William's and Anya's hypothesis that Angel had 100 years to find out about the curse. He's right, they did find the information in a matter of weeks. Angel could have too, if he wanted to. The thing was, Angel didn't want to.

Stupid Willow thinking she is all powerful and playing with Magic she truly does not understand.

Excellent chapter.
Willow does have some lessons to learn
 
CordykittenWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/21/2006 08:11 am
Anya's past did give her some insights that are helpful for Buffy (I hope). So Angelus claimed Buffy and failed to tell her, huh? Very good thing then that Anya can do something about it before Angelus comes back to Sunnydale. Oh then maybe William loves Buffy too? But he thinks he is unworthy of her. And Willow did indeed to the spell, a forgetting spell this time. Good that the others were protected, thanks to Anya.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review
 
sircWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/16/2006 10:03 am
Great chapter
Thank you
 
CassieWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/13/2006 07:05 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
VerdaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/07/2006 03:32 pm
So glad that Buffy and Giles are helping Anya finally feel like she's part of the team. Can't wait to hear Angel explain himself, but than he has no memory of it yet, does he? Excellent chapter.
Thank you kindly
 
DeliciaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/07/2006 01:00 pm
Nice chappie! Your explanations are so wonderfully detailed, it keeps the excitement up! I can't believe Willow! *shakes head* I hope this teaches her.
Not yet...but soon?
 
EmileeWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 10:36 am
Well that was interesting. Stupid (well not really, too smart for her own good) Willow! She's in sooo much trouble. Poor Buffy, having her beliefs about Angel torn apart. Neccessary, but losing childish dreams is still painful. And, William has such a self esteem problem. I can't wait for the next chapter to see all the new developments. I love your stories.
Thank you, you are too kind
 
Harry 4EyesWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 07:50 am
Wait a minutes i'm getting a serious case of Deja Vu here, certain parts seem extremely familiar why is that? Also remember reasing about Angel demanding Buffy stake Spike. And the demon needs flogging is familiar.

Wait Willow did a spell thinking it best everyone forget the last 3 years? So three years education down the shithole. Pretty stupid thing to do that, for the brightest member of the group pretty dumb girl isn't she.

Angel claimed Buffy and didn't tell her!! he deserves dusting on principle...maybe have Dru dust him Still not giving up on it...lol

Well still loving it
Update Soon
Harry
Harry...I am dusting Dru in Paradox! LOL
 
LouWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 06:13 am
I like smart Anya - good job she did such a nifty spell or it'd be huge confusion all round!
oh yeah! LOL
 
katakataWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 05:26 am
A sweet William, tolerant though still quirky Buffy, an exposed Willow and some Angel-bashing? A rousing 'oh hell yeah' to this fic! Imagine how different things could have been if season 4 had progressed along these lines - of course it would never actually be allowed to happen in the Whedonverse (Joss & co seem to prefer people remain tortured, if not by others then due to their own ignorance). Really satisfying to see Xander get called on the hyena-rape incident (he soooo got away scot-free with that) and to see Anya getting some recognition for her accumulated knowledge (sure she was naive in the ways of being human after 1000+ years out of practice but she could NOT have been completely clueless to survive that long). Really enjoying this and looking forward to more 8-)
Joss actually said once that if it wasn't a Shakespereian type tragedy, then it wasn't love.
 
IrinaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 05:05 am
Uh oh... looks like Willow screwed up again. I'm really looking forward to the confrontation Willow's in for when she gets her memories back. I loved William's talk with Buffy. And Anya really shined in this chapter. Wonderful update!
Thank you so much
 
MorriganWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 01:59 am
Hehehe  Willow goofed herself and Angel up, and no one else!  Love it!
Not exactly!
 
vladtWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 01:10 am
fantastic read, thank you. anya is superb. could giles just dust angel now?
Hmmm, i'll think about it
 
NikkoleWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/06/2006 01:00 am
Ok, that was......FRIEKIN AWESOME!! What a great story so far! I have to say, "It appears she believes we would all be better off forgetting the last three years" was funny as hell! I laughed for a while over that one! I am very interested in where you will be taking this story, and can't wait for more updates!
I try to update daily
 
MarzBarWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:58 pm
What a terrific story! Did Angelus relinquish the claim on Buffy yet? WTF can they do about Willow? More story please.
The next few chaps will answer those questions
 
Pin1Who's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:44 pm
Another great chapter. I love Anya and her revelations! Still looking forward to the Angelus confrontation.
it might not be what you expect!
 
fanxstitchWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:32 pm
Another excellent chapter to this wonderful story. I eagerly await the next one.
Thank you so much
 
jl1980Who's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:25 pm
i'm aghast at willow's nerve! how can she think something of that magnitude would be okay? man! okay, i'm so fascinated now...love your anya, and giles, too actually...love your insight into the whole situation..can't wait for more
Thank you so much
 
BadiaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:03 pm
More please! Have to love a story where Buffy is not firmly entrenched in the land of denial.
lol...me too!
 
BadiaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 11:03 pm
More please! Have to love a story where Buffy is not firmly entrenched in the land of denial.
I try to update daily
 
TamaraWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 10:30 pm
Great idea making the girl he killed an uncalled slayer. It shows the major differences between Spike and Angel . Angel did what he did to a essentially normal girl and Spike took on a full Slayer in a fair fight.


Anya's attitude towards magic is the exact opposite of Willow's and much smarter.

William's way of getting Anya to tone down the sex talk is much better than Xander's insensitive shushing.

They're gonna have a hard time getting Angel to believe what happened in the last three years. And an even harder time getting him to remove a claim that he doesn't remember making or that he might not admit to if he did remember.


Angel might be easier to deal with than you would think!
 
Mr_ChaosWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 10:29 pm
So far, i am really liking the story. It is interesting, orginal, and it really takes a closer look at the charecters. The idea of how vampires become, calling otu Willow, calling out Angel (the idiot) and Anya finally getting her due is so good. That's why I love your stories: They loo deeper into the charecters and don't pull punches.

And the idea of how to help Anya not talk aobut sex too much...brillant.
Thank you...you just made my day.
 
EllaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 10:03 pm
great chapter...update soon!
Thank you and I will
 
HPfanWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 09:40 pm
First of all, love the glimpses you give us of the inner dialogue that going on between William and Spike. They're just so - cute. Secondly, Willow strikes again - just knew she was gonna do something - right or wrong. Can't wait to see what effect Willow's latest spell is going to have on recent developments - mainly Angel's arrival on the scene. Update soon, please!
I will, and thank you for your continued support
 
RobynWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 09:28 pm
I loved how sweet William was in explaining to Anya why they others are uncomfortable with her frankness. I really enjoy all the information they are getting about Spike thru William, between him and Anya Buffy and Giles are really learning something. Angel not remembering what’s been going on is going to be interesting.
Thank you
 
missus_graceWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 09:25 pm
You've taken this story in so many directions! There are a lot of original ideas in here; I especially like the contributions Anya is making.

Can't wait for the next installment!
Thank you
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 09:22 pm
Stupid stupid Willow and haha at Angel
Yes
 
RichardWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 09:20 pm
You're just chock full of good ideas. Like the gypsies not being complete lunatics. Though the 'special girl' could have been a witch, a seer, an avatar of a goddesss or something else special. And Practical Anya? Love her!

The only thing I'm not sure of is William potentially loving Buffy still. It would be far more interesting for him to definitely not love her. Consider just the angst potential in that turn of the screw.
This story is already completed. Additional plot ideas are not required...thank you.
 
IsabelWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 08:42 pm
Ah Willow Willow Willow... What are we going to do with you, girl? ::shakes head:: She can be so annoying with her obsession with magic. The girl does need to learn control, but I don't think she can. Should be fun to see Angel not remembering the last three years though. Thinking him and Buffy are still together. He's in for the shock of his life. Serves him right.. Arogant bastard lol Great chapter. I love that Anya knows so much. Makes so much sense since she lived in a world of demon and magic for a thousand years. About time someone realizes that.
Willow does have a lesson to learn!
 
kimWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 08:05 pm
She took away 3 years? Oh, gee, that's smart...seems that Willow probably messed up a spell again. I'm sure she meant 3 days, or something. Even Willow would know that erasing 3 years would make her life way too difficult, since she wouldn't know anything about college, etc. And actually, 3 calender years back from this point in 1999 puts them at fall of '96, and Willow wouldn't know Buffy, yet. Buffy didn't come to Sunnydale until Spring. To go back to just before Buffy died at the hands of the Master? What was Willow thinking of?

This could actually be advantageous when dealing with Angel, though. They could leave him that way and fill him in with memories they want him to have, instead, and send him on his way back to Cordy and Doyle. Eh...that'd be too difficult, too. They could leave Willow this way, though, and re-educate her. Make sure she doesn't take the same path? Let her be college girl without all the magic attempts in mind....

William's point for Anya was well-said...she needed human things explained in a way she could relate to again.

And finally, the blinkers are off Buffy...
Anya never had a chance in the show...I'm trying to give it to her here.
 
letitiaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 07:50 pm
I just love William/Spike in this. Buffy is finally opening her eyes. And Anya is just the bomb... Hope they can figure all of this out and stop Willow before she really hurts someone.
Thank you so much for your kind words.
 
golddrakeWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 07:45 pm
great chapter
thank you
 
KarynWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 06:33 pm
nope...lets not tell angel anything..rofl..what? you should know i would say something like that *grin* awesome chappie!
Thanks sweetness
 
duke6665Who's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 06:20 pm
wow great chapter. if angel and willow were both effected then xander must have been too lol. can;t wait for more.
and cordy and oz!
 
gotkonaWho's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 06:15 pm
Very interesting chapter with great information. Can't wait for more.
Thank you, you won't have long to wait
 
redwulf50Who's that Knocking at my Door?07/05/2006 06:12 pm
Uhmmmmmm, can we just dust Angel's arrogant ass??
ummmmm, no!
 
AthenewolfeIs that an Angel at the Door?07/28/2006 11:58 am
ohhh i liked williams statement of all the facts - how he pointed out the weaknesses that everyone had such as angel refusing to find out the facts of his soul. The Anya parts were brilliant I loved them very much - she is such a great character!
Thanks sweetness, I would have to agree about Anya, I do love her
 
~*~Tasha~*~Is that an Angel at the Door?07/22/2006 06:53 pm
Go William. I loved the last line of this just as much now as the first time I read it. "was he not in bed with you?" That sums up Angel/Angelus to a t. He doesn't accept responsibility for anything.

I remember that I adored Anya more with each chapter. You bring her out of her "shell" into a more warm and well rounded character as the chapters go on.

Another fine chapter.
Thank you so much sweetie, I'm getting warm fuzzies
 
CordykittenIs that an Angel at the Door?07/21/2006 07:59 am
Anya is more helpful as the rest of the Scoobies. A lots of insights from William. He is the better man (demon) from his family. And he's right too: Angelus doesn't have seemed to care to find out more about the curse. Or he risked it willingly. :-D William saw this right.
Thank you
 
sircIs that an Angel at the Door?07/16/2006 09:52 am
I just love the way you write everyone. So very true..
Thank you, I have to admit to having a real dislike to a number of characters and I tend to be a little harsh with them
 
CassieIs that an Angel at the Door?07/13/2006 07:05 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
DeliciaIs that an Angel at the Door?07/07/2006 12:29 pm
Lovely! Anya comes through with the big knowledge again, yay!! I enjoy hearing the backstory coming from William's perspective. He's making some very good points! Thanks
Thank you too
 
VerdaIs that an Angel at the Door?07/07/2006 07:17 am
Great developement of Anya's character. Always thought she was capable of more if they ever wanted to develope her further. Liam was truly the real "bad rude man". Another amazing chapter.
Thank you, I do love Anya
 
HPfanIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 09:24 pm
Wonderful chapter. Love all these revelations about demons, souls and vampires. Sure doesn't show Angel in a very good light. Hope Buffy is taking notes. Anya is one smart cookie! And what can I say - just love William. Gotta hurry now and read the new update.
Thank you so much for your very kind words
 
KarynIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 06:30 pm
awesome chapter jack! love it love it love it!
Thank you sweetie, I find angst sooo much easier than smut!
 
BadiaIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 05:15 pm
I love this fic. Finally a Buffy who realizes that early that her frriends and watcher cannot be trusted completely. Plz write more.
Don't write her friends and watcher off yet
 
vladtIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 04:48 pm
great update. thanks. love anya's growing confidence. the last question is a wonderful way to end the chapter. thanks for the fine read.
Thank you for your kind words
 
BridgetIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 10:49 am
Another great story. I like how you have brought William to the forefront with Spike still present. I am also glad that you have made Anya a integral part of this story. Yeah you.
Thank you so much...you just made my day.
 
NeartIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 09:39 am
Willow is scary when she wants to 'fix' it and make it better, and thank goodness your Giles is less blind to Anya's knowledge. Lovin' it, keep it comin'
Willow thinks if she can fix the outside she doesn't have to think about the inside !
 
BigbirdIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 06:45 am
Ah Anya appreciation always of the good. Good chapter too.
Thank you, Anya plays a large part in this fic
 
LouIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 04:37 am
This is a great way of putting over all the points we've all longed to make. An excellent Anya too.
Thank you so much
 
Harry 4EyesIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 04:07 am
Well that title won;t do, because there is no one at the door :-p

Ahhh the eternal question why was Angelous with a soul so different than Liam when alive? Yet Liam was not much different after he was turned just with even less morals.

I'd have a longer reply but the heat has fried my brain it seems, I can't think straight.

But still loving it Jackes
Update soon
Harry
Heat? But you're a Brit! England doesn't get actual heat
 
kimIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 02:49 am
Really a time to be blunt, and he's living up to it, as is Anya. Buffy needs to accept that she never knew the real Angel. They never discussed who he was inside, or the past that made him all he is today.
There are a lot of truths to come out
 
RobynIs that an Angel at the Door?07/05/2006 12:51 am
I am really enjoying this story and I love the encouragement and respect that Giles and Buffy are starting to show Anya. I think Buffy is going to get a whole new perspective of Angel, and I loved William's question to Buffy, it's something both she and Giles needs to realize.
There will be a lot of truths coming out
 
RichardIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 11:47 pm
Well, that was interesting. Anya is certainly an underused character. And it makes sense that whatever she did to attract D'Hoffryn's attention required magic. Anya's turning of Olaf into a troll certainly points that way.
She has spoken of it during the show.
 
fanxstitchIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 11:40 pm
Very excellent story with a lot of depth and truth to it. Please keep this up and update often. I'm also a big William fan.
Thank you so much
 
letitiaIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 10:50 pm
I am just loving Anya once again. I am glad she is taking Willow precautions... Someone should. And also glad that they are actually TALKING to William and listening. Great chapter.
Thank you
 
DarIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 10:27 pm
Buffy can't bop William on the nose like she did Spike..Can't wait to see how she deals. Great Chapter
Yes she certainly can't do that
 
Jace NoxIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 09:42 pm
Ohhhhh Go William!
LOL...yes indeed
 
NicholeIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 09:32 pm
Ok i'm SSOOOOOO loving this story i await with baited breath for more..i'm loving how William is telling the story...oh hope giles don't forget the disinvite spell..look forward to more soon..N
Giles did the spell, then questioned Anya.
 
IrinaIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 08:30 pm
I loved how perceptive Anya was in this chapter, good on her for ruining Willow's plans to 'fix' things. Great conversation between William and Buffy, it was very insightful. Fantastic chapter.
Thank you...playing God is fun
 
golddrakeIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 08:22 pm
great chapter. I'm really enjoying this story and I look forward to more.
Thank you so much.
 
IsabelIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 08:08 pm
Great end to this chapter. "was he not in the bed with you?" I loved that. It's so true. Angel never took responsibility for anything. Wanker.
No he really didn't
 
duke6665Is that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 08:01 pm
great chapter. loved anya telling giles that SHE wrote the spell
Well...she did! LOL
 
jl1980Is that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 07:42 pm
he is *so* right! i love your explanation of vampires and their demons...very interesting and makes perfect sense...again, i love the respect with which you're portraying anya..she was so much more than they ever gave her credit for...excellent story, can't wait for your next update
Thank you, I have always been angered that Anya's 'expertise' wasn't explored.
 
TamaraIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 07:29 pm
Great Giles/Anya interaction. They always worked well together. Anya's pretty smart for realizing what Willow would do.

Good description of the difference between Angel with a soul and without. It should be a greatly enlightened Buffy that sees Angel again.
It will at that!
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 07:01 pm
*looks around then pounces William*
William screams like a girl and runs to Buffy for protection.
 
Spikes Slayer2Is that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 06:59 pm
what does that mean??
doesn't he hold some responsibility too?
 
DeanSamWinchesterfanIs that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 06:58 pm
Good chapter.Update soon.William is so sweet.
Thank you...I will try
 
redwulf50Is that an Angel at the Door?07/04/2006 06:57 pm
Turning to Buffy, William spoke earnestly. “I don’t mean to hurt you, Miss Buffy, but Angel had one hundred years to discover all the facts of his curse. He did nothing at all to ensure that he was safe. He then allowed you, an innocent child, to blame yourself for the loss of his soul and all the bad that came with it. I really don’t mean to be crude, but was he not in the bed with you?”


Seee we aren't supposed to ask questions like that they show his assedness..... I mean his highass.... I mean his Highness in a very unproper light.
rofl...idiot!
 
AthenewolfeWilliam's Tale07/28/2006 11:31 am
Thank you dear for the explanation of why Dru kept her soul. I knew I knew the reason! Lovely explanation and I loved how Angel was cursed with his father's soul. Nice detail. Xander seems to be rather excessive in his attitude but it is fun to see that part of his character put on display. Exploring the side which is bogoted and vindictive is always intriguing and interesting.
I see the potential for Xander's character to become many different things, I think that's why I like writting him...he keeps surprising me
 
~*~Tasha~*~William's Tale07/22/2006 06:27 pm
Willow and her stupid "need" to "fix" things. {growls}

Xander ... I agree with Giles. Xander is an insufferable prat.

Way to go Buffy and Anya in this one. The way Spike emerged towards the end was great. I loved every chapter of this, and now I get to leave you nice long winded reviews for you to read later too. {giggles}
thank you, your reviews give me a great deal of joy
 
CordykittenWilliam's Tale07/21/2006 07:42 am
Spike won't be pleased; but cute when William spilled that Spike loves Buffy. (But what about William? What does he feel?) So William is human now and will stay this way. Just more or less sane, depending on his demons' survival. And Xander is really a pain here. I wonder how long Anya will take the way he acts. Thanks for now Ripper threw him out. :-D Angelus coming for Spike? But not to help him so that's bad. Willow wants to fix things? Well that didn't go so well in the past.
William is not just a human...there is more to him than that
 
VWalkWilliam's Tale07/18/2006 04:57 pm
So Willow is getting ready to do something stupid that will probably make things worse. I'm so scared for William. I really like your characterization of him... and the brief glimpse of Spike was great. I'm also enjoying Anyah - I can totally see Xander (boo! hiss!) saying something like he "can't" be with Buffy so he's with her - to her.

I'm loving the story so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thank you for your continued support
 
sircWilliam's Tale07/16/2006 09:30 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
CassieWilliam's Tale07/13/2006 07:05 am
great chapter
Thank you
 
VerdaWilliam's Tale07/07/2006 07:00 am
Wonderful, wonderful story. I hope you have many ideas for the future of this tale. William human and Spike trapped inside. Don't know who the bigger villian in this story will be...Xander or Angel. Excellent read.
Thank you very kindly
 
vladtWilliam's Tale07/05/2006 04:36 pm
wonderful read. xander at his best. i am surprised there was enough space in the room for both xander's and red's egos. thanks for the fine read.
Surprising wasn't it!
 
RobynWilliam's Tale07/05/2006 12:31 am
I really love how Giles, Buffy, and Anya stood up to Xander and how Giles and Buffy commented on his behavior. When I read the last couple of lines my heart just dropped, Willow wanting to fix things again.
Yes but dont' lose heart yet
 
TamaraWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 07:15 pm
Yay for Giles for telling Xander off and for Anya fot not giving in to his tatics.

Uhoh, Angel's coming and Willow is trying to "fix" things. Neither one sounds good.
No they don't do they
 
slaymesoftlyWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 06:57 pm
Oh oh - Willow wanting to "fix" things - nothing good can come of this! LOL
nope...really can't
 
Spikes Slayer2William's Tale07/04/2006 06:23 pm
oh my.. thats amazing! and damn willow and her "need to fix" things..
YUP...Willow is Willow
 
KarynWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 05:21 pm
awesome jack!! go giles!!! ugh, willow just won't learn...sigh
Maybe she will...maybe
 
kimWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 03:55 pm
Oh, dear, oh, my...

So that's the character death I suspected - William's demon, in that he'll never be "Spike" again? Or is that too easy and you have surprises still in store?

Buffy's brain go 'buzz, tilt'.
I like to surprise
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 03:26 pm
Stupid Willow! Don't you dare do a thing!! Someone maim her and stop her!!!
watch and learn I'm evil.
 
HPfanWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 03:24 pm
Thank you, thank you, thank you for a fantastic new chapter. Hate that Xander's being such a jerk. Hope he comes around. Giles' reaction was surprising, but welcome. Always knew he was an intelligent man. Angel's coming to get in on the act can't be good. Can't wait to see what happens when he arrives on the scene. Okay, Willow's reaction is troubling. She's always cast spell first, think later, and then deny all responsibility. Can I be a demanding little reader now and beg to you to update sooon, please, please, please!
Yes you can demand
 
neo_trinityknotWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 03:01 pm
Just like Willow to do something and make things worse
oh yeah!
 
EllaWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 02:39 pm
aww, he loves her!
hope to see an update soon...
Sooner than you thnk
 
RichardWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 02:34 pm
Woo hoo, talk about spectacular. Hope you have something equally spectacular planned for Willow.

I LOVE how you point out the absurdities in the (canon) characters. You don't parody them, you reveal them for the parodies they are, without turning the story into a parody. It's a real gift.
Thank you, I always appreciate kind words.
 
LouWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 02:07 pm
Phew! I don't think I've ever read a better Xander putdown - richly deserved. He was so nasty!
LOL, I think I've taken Xander to new places
 
slinkyPKWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 02:03 pm
Willow fought back tears as she watched. She knew deep down that this was all her fault and felt an overwhelming sense of guilt. She had to fix this.

Tsk, tsk, tsk. Will the not-quite-bright Wicca never learn?

Like the new fic, Jack. Pretty cool so far!
Thank you...and maybe
 
duke6665William's Tale07/04/2006 01:43 pm
great chapter.. hope willow doesnt mess things up to bad lol
Thank you and we'll see
 
golddrakeWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 01:18 pm
great chapter
Thank you
 
DeliciaWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 01:09 pm
Well done! I love the premise of this story a lot! The exposition in this chapter was very unique and informative, I am enjoying myself. Xander is certainly being an ass. I'm glad Buffy put him in his place. Thanks!
I like the Giles did! lol
 
letitiaWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 12:10 pm
oh my. LOVED Anya in this chapter. I am just glad that finally someone put Xander in his place. Of course he is not going to listen. Can't wait to see William in all of his glory.... Wonder what Willow is up to. She just can't leave well enough alone. She never learns.
maybe she will???
 
DarWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 11:47 am
AWESOMW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
thank you
 
MarzBarWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 11:20 am
Woohoo! What a beginning! Nice Xander bashing early in the tale and lots of mystery about what may happen to Spike. More story please.
Soon, I promise
 
DizzyBWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 11:13 am
Love this story! Just found it and can't wait for more. Thought it was an appropriate find for Independence Day.
Thank you...I will try to be quick with the updates.
 
EmileeWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 11:09 am
Nice start, you certainly have me intrigued. I noticed a character death warning. Please tell me you're not planning on killing off Spike are you? And I do mean all parts of the whole. You don't really like Xander, or come to think of it, Willow either do you? They never really come out in a flattering light in your stories. But that's okay, because there really wasn't much to flatter them with in the show. Can't wait to read more.
Actually sometimes Xander is a good guy in my stories. Willow too.
 
Harry 4EyesWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 11:03 am
And here I was thinking after Paradox and Penny you were getting soft on us Jackers, but here you go once again with the Kick Xander club once again. It's odd I actually find the vindictive hell bent on some misguided revenge Xander closer to cannon than accepting Xander.

Willow always confuses me, she's sweet kid but also a quick fix Willow and not really learn from mistakes Willow so it can go really any place with her. Hasn't anyone told her that owning up and making sure you don't do anything similar is more appreciated than hiding and supergluing everything and hope no one notices. Kind of like little kids who accidently broke her mums favourite vase like that.

I seriously hope she doesn't try to fix things she'll probably end up messing things up much worse than ever before.

Cool so Spike is now kinda like the Slayer, Perfect for her, exactly what Angel wanted for her, someone Human who she doesn't have to worry about when she's on patrol....Won't Angel be pleased...lol

So Lawson actually made an appereance on Angel season 5? Did he have a soul on that one? or was it something you added.

Poor Sod, does that mean it was really Angels father who used his sons body to sleep with her? because that is seriously twisted...lol

Well can't wait to read more...good luck with the updates of three fics and the co-write you are doing.

Loving it
Update Soon
Harry
Lawson asked Angel if he had a soul and Angel said 'I don't think it works that way'. There was no definative answer. But then Angel never mentioned Spike's soul. Lawson was an intrigueing character.
 
BigbirdWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 10:53 am
Yeah Xander kicked to the curb!! I love it, now if we get a little Angel bashing in the next chapter and some Willow slapping as well I will doing my *happy dance* all night!! Well done!
Hmmmm...well lets see what the bunnies say
 
Pin1William's Tale07/04/2006 10:36 am
Yeah - crazy, vindictive Xander is gone! Great chapter and I love Anya's insights and truths. Great story.
Thank you, I've always liked Anya
 
IrinaWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 10:07 am
Whoa! Xander was an absolute jerk in this chapter, i'm glad Giles tossed him out of his home. Nice touch having Buffy make the hyena remark to Xander. Anya was certainly chock full of useful information, I did feel kinda bad for William when she exposed his dark past with Angelus though. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Great chapter!
Thank you so much
 
jl1980William's Tale07/04/2006 10:01 am
wow...that last sentence is a bit scary..no more magic, will, please...i'm glad xander got kicked out, i was cheering for giles poor spike...this was an excellent update...i can't wait for your next one
I promise you won't have to wait long
 
DeanSamWinchesterfanWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 10:00 am
Good story so far.Update soon.Bad Xander!I love that almost everyone in the Aurelius line have souls.
LOL...I hadn't thought of that!
 
Pam SWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 09:31 am
Boy, this Xander is a pain.

Enjoying the story.
Thank you so much
 
redwulf50William's Tale07/04/2006 09:23 am
hmmmmm, can we kill Xander yet??
Well you can, but that would mean you have to actually write something!
 
deedoWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 09:22 am
I already love this story, Jack! Great work and although it's a bit angstier (is that an actual word?) than your others, I enjoy reading it immensely!
I can't say I'll miss Xander and I'm really glad Anya will be treated better from now on.
I'm looking forward to read more
It is a bit 'angstier' thank normal, but a change is as good as a holiday.
 
IsabelWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 09:15 am
OK, whenever Willow says words like "I have to fix this" I start to sweat a little. I'm a little worried about what Xander will do too. But the boy's a tool so whatever he comes up with, I'm not too worried. Glad to get a glimps of Ripper. I love Giles when he gets all angry and dangerous. Great story with a very interesting plot.
Thank you for your very kind words
 
DHPWilliam's Tale07/04/2006 09:10 am
ohoh Willow's going to do something terribly stupid, isn't she?

Excellent update. I really like the way you portray Anya. They should have used her knowledge about demons way more in the show.
She's Willow...what can I say!
 
AthenewolfeSomething Sad and Blue07/28/2006 11:18 am
good chapter sweetie - now I know i knew this but why does spike have his soul - because Dru was insane? Little confused by that but sure I just missed something. Enjoyed meeting William and looking forward to more!
nope...it will be explained later
 
~*~Tasha~*~Something Sad and Blue07/22/2006 06:20 pm
Yep ... I'm finally getting to the review posting here. You know that I loved this gift as you sent it to me while it was being written.

You warmed my heart and encouraged me with this tender gift, and I love it. Thank you so much.

The start of this is awesome. I always love it when Anya is all with the knowledge and is respected more. Yeah, she is blunt, but there are ways to work around that (I remember how you do it later in the story, and I liked that).
Thank you sweetie, the gift was given with sincerity for all you have done for me
 
CordykittenSomething Sad and Blue07/21/2006 07:23 am
Trying to do some catching up.. and because this one is finished now, I started reading :-D ~ After Something Blue.. and Spike doesn't take it so well? Not talking that's just not Spike like. And Xander? Very cruel indeed. And Spike doesn't act like himself too. Anya noticed something when Spike mentioned the name of the demon. Uh-huh.. Spike's demon is in danger to be killed? I like this Anya here, she knows a lot. Xander is just at his worst. :-D Love the first chapter, now on to the rest.
Thank you for taking the time to review
 
VWalkSomething Sad and Blue07/18/2006 04:02 pm
I can already tell that I'm going to really love this story. I like the way you're opening up Anya's character. Great characterization of everyone.
Thank you, I love Anya and always believed she was under written in the show.
 
sircSomething Sad and Blue07/16/2006 09:07 am
I love it
Thank you
 
CassieSomething Sad and Blue07/13/2006 07:04 am
great start
Thank you
 
VerdaSomething Sad and Blue07/07/2006 06:40 am
Amazing story. It's imaginative and very well written, I love the concept of Spike still having his soul. Now what's Harris going to say? Anyone got a gag! Thanks for the great read.
Thank you so much.
 
RobynSomething Sad and Blue07/05/2006 12:18 am
I really like that Giles and Buffy finally realized that Anya might have some useful information, and I loved her information about Spike having a soul. Buffy's comment to Xander concerning his delusions was so well deserved.
Thank you, I appreciate it
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersSomething Sad and Blue07/04/2006 03:15 pm
Ohhhhhh, I love William! He's so sweet and I'm usually all with the protectiveness of him too!
He is sweet
 
DeliciaSomething Sad and Blue07/04/2006 10:28 am
Ooh, I'm loving this! I'm enjoying helpful!Anya, it's great when she has something to contribute! Can't wait to see what happens with William/Spike!
This one is actually finished...so I can update quickly.
 
NeartSomething Sad and Blue07/04/2006 09:43 am
wow, ingriguing start. Gread idea with the souls and love that Anya is being taken seriously.
I like Anya, I think she could have said so much if they'd bothered to ask her.
 
IrinaSomething Sad and Blue07/04/2006 12:04 am
Wonderful start, Jack! Can't wait to read more!
Thank you so much
 
Spikes Slayer2Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 11:21 pm
awww.. love it!! cant wait to see what happens!
Thank you, you won't have long to wait
 
vladtSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 11:03 pm
excellent chapter. love anya. speaking of anya, xander's death would improve her existence. thanks for the fine read.
I've already done the death of xander fic! LOL...but nice guess
 
TamaraSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 10:25 pm
Another great story! *bounces up and down*

Never settle , Anya!
She will learn that
 
MorriganSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 10:18 pm
Hmm...  Interesting take.  Looking forward to seeing where the rest goes.
Thank you...I hope you enjoy the ride
 
IrishroseSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 10:04 pm
Squeeee!! A William!fic. Oh yummy, yummy, yummy.
lol...glad to be of service
 
fanxstitchSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 09:25 pm
Great story and premise, please continue with this.
I have already finished it, so yes...I will continue
 
TammyDevil666Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 09:19 pm
Okay, this is an interesting start. I can see that Xander isn't very nice in this one like he was in the others, but hopefully that changes. I don't like him when he's such a jerk. I'm also a bit worried about the character death. I usually try to avoid stories that have that as a warning, but I liked your other ones and decided to give it a chance. I just hope it wouldn't be anyone really important. Anyway, I'm interested to read more=)
I hope you continue to enjoy this story
 
gotkonaSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 08:32 pm
This sounds wonderful.
Thank you kindly
 
ToniaSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 07:51 pm
Poor William! He's forced out of hiding only to have to put up with the Scoobies. Please tell me that someone will smack Xander?
Guess you'll just have to read to find out
 
DarSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 07:35 pm
I'm thrilled to read a story with Anya getting a little respect. Like this story atmosphere.
Thank you...I like Anya
 
jl1980Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 07:22 pm
oh wow...i'm breathless, speechless..this is simply incredible..my heart is breaking from this story, so sad and beautiful...love your treatment of anya so far...do i sense maybe anya/giles later? that would be awesome!! excellent fic, i'm hooked already
Now JL...that would be telling! lol. Thank you for your very kind words.
 
BigbirdSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 07:16 pm
Excellent start will add this to my favorites list and wait for more!!
Thank you, I promise not to keep you waiting too long
 
slaymesoftlySomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 06:59 pm
Nice beginning. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
Thank you. It's an interesting journey
 
Jace NoxSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 06:41 pm
oooo this story is heating up, I can't wait for the next chapter.
You won't have to wait long I promise
 
IsabelSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 06:26 pm
Great start. I'm so happy they're treating Anya decently for a change. And stupid Xander. God the boy is annoying. He makes me want to pull my hair out in frustration. I'm really liking this story so far, like all of your stories =)
Thank you...you just made my day
 
HPfanSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 06:17 pm
What a beginning! You've got me totally hooked now. So glad to see Giles and the others starting to understand that Anya may well know more than they ever thought she might. Now, if only they could teach Xander to show a little respect. Might try a good slap upside the head to see if someone can knock a little sense into him. lol Wanna see more of William, so update soon, please!
Thank you so much. Do you really think Xander can learn at this late stage?
 
Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 04:23 pm
yay! i'm *so glad *somebody* remember st xander's own history of attempted rape!

here's hoping anya realizes she can do *so* much better!
Yes Xander did seem to get away with a lot, didn't he?
 
AzelmaSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 04:15 pm
This seems like it's going to be a great story. I've always had a soft spot for William. So adorable!

Can't wait to see what happens next, and I'm so glad you have Anya treated properly by the Scoobies.
I really like Anya and think she was much under-used in the actual show
 
kimSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 03:51 pm
Interesting premise, though it's a shame it takes all that for Buffy just to be decent to him. Once more, the soul makes it all okay for her.

I like Anya getting her proper recognition.
Yes, but remember she has been trained to be that way
 
RichardSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 03:47 pm
Brilliant.
Thank you
 
KarynSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 03:21 pm
Awesome beginning jack!! loved it!!!
Thank you so much...and thank's again for the awesome banner
 
Pin1Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 03:07 pm
Love the new story. I really like this Anya and appreciate what she can cotnribute to the group. Hopefully, she will escape Xander, who continues to be obnoxious. Looking forward to more.
Thank you, I really like Anya too
 
golddrakeSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 02:49 pm
great start. I'm really looking forward to more.
Thank you, I think I can update this at least three times a week
 
redwulf50Something Sad and Blue07/03/2006 02:36 pm
Bloody excellent fic
Thank you...but the prise is getting higher!
 
Harry 4EyesSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 02:28 pm
So does this Lawson bloke actually exist? I'm sure i've heard of him in other fics as well. And his parents should know better than call him Lawson.

So Spike kept his soul but was beaten to submission...wonder why Angelcakes kept that little tidbit to himself...aswell as the Lawson turning...I see plenty of Angel Bashing in this fic too.

So Jackers another story...don't you have a couple you still need to complete? But I get the feeling those two are coming to an end soon.

So off to Ebay for Willow. amazing what you can find on there.
Well Jackers another promising fic.
Update soon
Harry.
In Angel season 5 we met Lawson. His name is actually Sam Lawson and I promise to give you more information on him in the coming chapters. Nope not ending Penny and Paradox soon...at least I don't think so
 
UncagedMuseSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 02:03 pm
Excellent beginning!
Thank you, it's a labour of love
 
maryperkSomething Sad and Blue07/03/2006 01:48 pm
Cool
Thanks as always Mary.