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| Harbingers of Beatrice by Holly |
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| Yzba | Epilogue - All Roads | 03/13/2006 04:15 am |
| You make me laugh and you make me cry. I have read this story 2 times and I was blown away both times. I have also read most of the stories that are on your website, and there is no word to say how much I am impressed with your writing. You have a talent with words of which I am completly jealous. I wish I could write like you do, because every sentence is magic. I particularly like this one because of the relationships. Zach and Rosie are adorable, they made me laugh so much, Spike is...well what I always thought he was, Every character is so human, they are more alive than they ever were in the series. Thank you for your wonderful stories, and I don't usually send reviews quite so...appreciative;) |
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| MarzBar | Epilogue - All Roads | 11/23/2005 04:43 am |
| Just finished this story. It's good to see that somebody had the good sense to get Buffy to retire since she hadn't been the official slayer for a long time. BTW, what's with the "Spike is a cockney" stuff? |
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| bubble_blunder | Epilogue - All Roads | 11/14/2005 09:03 am |
| This is most definitely one of the best stories I have EVER read. I almost cried to see it end, but I love the way you ended it. I think Zack is probably the greatest OC I've seen in any fic, and I would love to read the Zack Wright Chronicles, especially if they would give us a chance to get to know Rosie better, since I loved her too. Such an incredible fic. Thanks for sharing it.
-Lisa |
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| SpaceLord | The Last Day | 10/23/2005 06:56 pm |
Damn I hope u update this soon cause leaving me haning like this is just evil 
Good story so far, really like it. |
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| Panta_Rei | The False Prophet | 12/09/2005 01:32 am |
| Loved it. Your portrayal of Spike's conflict was incredible. |
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| Panta_Rei | Purple Skies | 12/09/2005 12:32 am |
| Hee! Would love to leave you this big long review, but now I have to find out how the confrontation between Spike and Lindsey goes... |
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| Panta_Rei | To The Innocent | 12/09/2005 12:23 am |
| Whaa--?? Huh??? *scratches head* |
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| Panta_Rei | Back Door Man | 12/06/2005 07:43 pm |
| Grr...I know Lindsey means well, in his own twisted way, but...*whacks him* |
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| Panta_Rei | With A Little Help | 12/06/2005 07:28 pm |
| Loved this chapter...off to read more. |
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| Panta_Rei | Tourniquet | 12/06/2005 07:22 pm |
| Poor, poor Buffy...but I wonder if she really was imagining the encounter with Spike? |
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| Panta_Rei | Ashes | 12/06/2005 07:13 pm |
| Excellent chapter. Your description of Amber's murder combined with Spike's conflicted emotions made me want to cry. |
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| Panta_Rei | Let It Rain | 11/25/2005 05:13 pm |
| Hehe--I love Cordy in this fic ;) Off to read more... |
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| Panta_Rei | Thou Art The Man | 11/25/2005 04:26 pm |
| Hm...interesting. Generally I'm not such a fan of original characters (either that, or Zack's from AtS and I'm making an idiot out of myself), but you seem to be handling this one well. I loved the whole encounter in the alley--two men snarking at each other is always amusing ;) |
| Heh...Zack Wright is definitely an original character. He was a terrible fun to write, too. I really hope you enjoy him. ^_^ |
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| Panta_Rei | His Pleasure Is My Pain | 11/23/2005 07:34 pm |
| Again with the poor Buffy =( Interesting dialogue, though...she's really very clueless about Spike, isn't she? And your characterization of Lindsey continues to intrigue me...off to read more. |
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| Panta_Rei | To My Someone | 11/23/2005 07:22 pm |
| Gah...loved it. From Spike's admittedly unexpected choice in song to Lorne's absolutely hilarious dialogue, it was damn near perfect =) |
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| Panta_Rei | Absence of Fear | 11/23/2005 07:09 pm |
| Ooh--Spike's 'rage' was moving in a way that I can't quite pin down. He's getting himself quite the conscience, isn't he? |
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| Panta_Rei | Till We Run Out Of Road | 11/23/2005 07:01 pm |
| I loved this chapter =) Cordelia, Wesley, and Gunn all had hilarious moments with Spike. |
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| Panta_Rei | Path of Thorns | 11/23/2005 06:49 pm |
| Aww, poor Buffy =( Loved her interaciton with the oh-so-enigmatic Lindsey though... |
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| Panta_Rei | A Distant Chord | 11/23/2005 06:32 pm |
| Chips Ahoy? *dies* That one statement was worth reading the entire chapter, not to mention how wonderful the rest of it was =D |
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| Panta_Rei | Everybody's Fool | 11/23/2005 05:50 pm |
| Excellent. The way you write Drusilla is breathtakingly creepy, if that makes any sense at all. |
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| Panta_Rei | The Black Cat | 11/23/2005 05:32 pm |
| Uh-oh...Spike leaving can't be good, given that there's scary-powerful vamps in town...but then, that's kind of a 'duh' statement, isn't it? Off to read more =D |
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| Panta_Rei | The Man of the Crowd | 11/23/2005 05:22 pm |
| See, this is the great thing about reading completed stories: cliffhangers are a little less panic-inducing ;) As usual, the banter was perfect. I'm loving how Buffy keeps confiding in Spike, almost against her will. |
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| Panta_Rei | The House Of Usher | 11/23/2005 04:58 pm |
| You are truly, chillingly talented when it comes to writing the evil characters. I loved this chapter =) |
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| Panta_Rei | Inside A Deep Ravine | 11/22/2005 03:59 am |
| This story just got a million times better. Not that I don't love Wolfram & Hart, but no one does Spuffy banter like you do...can't wait to read more =) |
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| Panta_Rei | The City That Slept | 11/22/2005 03:34 am |
| Now I'm wondering if it's really Angelus. While I was never into Angel as much as BtVS, I do sort of remember the story line you're branching off from...you've made Lindsey a very interesting character, and I love the line "What are you going to do, lock them naked in a room and play Barry White until they can’t help but screw?" Classic Joss--or I guess, classic you ;) |
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| Panta_Rei | Prologue - Dream A Little Dream | 11/22/2005 02:41 am |
| So, I gave in, got an account here, and decided to read this fic...loving it so far =) Excellent prologue; the repetition gave it a creepy, rhythmic feel. |
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| Willow25 | Prologue - Dream A Little Dream | 11/16/2005 09:59 pm |
| I really enjoyed where you took Spike in this story, it was an interesting twist. Would have liked to see more vengance, but that's more Anya's speed, I guess. Great work! |
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