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| Karma by redwulf50 |
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| Emilee | Heard it from a friend | 08/04/2006 11:41 am |
| I know this is taking you a while to write, but I hope you keep at it. This is a spectacular story, and the Gods intervention is FUNNY. "My son ate your Honor Student," priceless. I really hope to see more soon. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Heard it from a friend | 07/21/2006 11:12 pm |
| {Cheers} Yipee!! Glad to see that you still have thoughts for this one. I look forward to when you continue with it. |
| thanks muchly |
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| Jen | Heard it from a friend | 07/11/2006 04:01 pm |
| Please continue I love this story!!! |
| Thank you, I think I will |
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| Robyn | Heard it from a friend | 07/09/2006 07:03 pm |
Loki being a lawyer was great. I really enjoyed the Spike/Aries bonding, very cute. I like how Dru was fixed, thanks for filling us in on what happened to her. I am really enjoying this fic and hope to see an update soon.  |
| Loki is the perfect lawyer, and I wanted to end the Dru speculation. Spike and Ares just work well together. |
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| anon462 | Heard it from a friend | 07/09/2006 04:34 pm |
Hey, I really like this one!!! Big Time!!!
??? Doesn't Karma sort'a mean 'getting what you deserve or earn in life'? Is this story about Spikes karma, or Buffys, or both?
Poor Spike, he just can't face the idea of going back to Buffy and her not loving him, again.
Hey, stupid Buffy, Spikes the injured party here, not you. So stop with the name calling.
Can't really figure out a 17 yr old Spike. Sure he'll appear to be more her age, but she'll know who he is, and Angel will know who he is, and Giles will find out who he is, so, what's the what? |
??? Doesn't Karma sort'a mean 'getting what you deserve or earn in life'? Is this story about Spikes karma, or Buffys, or both?
My only answer is that is both more and less than this 
Poor Spike, he just can't face the idea of going back to Buffy and her not loving him, again.
But he will because that is what he is.
Hey, stupid Buffy, Spikes the injured party here, not you. So stop with the name calling.
LOL, this was younger Buffy's dream and she has yet to hurt Spike. But the next dream is for both Buffy's and lets older Buffy see what might have been and it ain't hugs and puppies.
Can't really figure out a 17 yr old Spike. Sure he'll appear to be more her age, but she'll know who he is, and Angel will know who he is, and Giles will find out who he is, so, what's the what?
Let's just say Buffy and Spike aren't the only visiters from the future and see your first question |
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| Tamara | Heard it from a friend | 07/09/2006 12:06 am |
It'd be a nunnery not a monastery. It makes sense though that she'd become a nun once cured of vampirism and the insanity .
Poor Spike. I don't blame him for choosing death. Over a hundred years of getting screwed by life will make you long for peace.
Older Buffy definitely needs to suffer some to find out why. In fact I wouldn't mind if he gave her the cold shoulder for all the damage the Older Buffy did.
Great chapter. Definitely looking forward to more of your inspired lunacy . |
Older Buffy definitely needs to suffer some to find out why. In fact I wouldn't mind if he gave her the cold shoulder for all the damage the Older Buffy did.
But we both know Spike won't he truly loves her even though he will never completely believe Buffy loves him and only him. |
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| sirc | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 01:41 pm |
| great chapter |
| thank you |
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| margaret | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 12:19 pm |
| i sure hope this one gets updated soon.. i love this |
| You act like I never update |
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| vladt | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 11:56 am |
| great update to a great tale. thanks for the read. |
| thanks for the review |
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| Araedhel | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 10:19 am |
| I loved this chapter and the rest of the story. Please write more really, REALLY soon. |
| I'll try |
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| Megan | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 08:11 am |
| Gahhhhhhhhh! I have nothing else to say! |
| but is that good or bad??? |
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| Dihcar | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 05:59 am |
Fantastic Redwulf, your SPike is amazing, it explains alot that his father is the greatest warrior ever, and the love bitch's part came from his mother(s).
Ares is awesome with his son.
What was also cool was the xander putdown, he really deserved it.
I'm liking Jesse, so far, he seems to be more mature and understand that when someone isn't intrested, you don't push/force them, unlike xander.
seeya |
| Ares is new to the good guy side and is enjoying it muchly |
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| Irina | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 05:02 am |
I loved Spike's talk with his Dad and two mums. Loki's remark about being a lawyer was so funny. And I really enjoyed Xander getting shot down by Buffy. Fantastic chapter!  |
| Xander will prolly need shooting down again |
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| fallen_angel | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 04:48 am |
| i curse smart-assedd, stupid vampires too. |
| lmao, Buffy isn't done cursing them |
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| Tonia | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 02:34 am |
That was great! Can we please have more Spike and Ares interaction? Please?
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| Ares won't shut up *whines* |
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| MarzBar | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 12:21 am |
| Glad to see this story is back! Would you please give us more soon? |
| I'll try |
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| Richard | Heard it from a friend | 07/08/2006 12:07 am |
| Oooh, Angel the Deceiver, so good that he deceives himself. Reminds me of Lady Nisi choosing the name Deceiver for herself while forgetting that it also means Deceived in the Sharer's symmetric language. I take it Angel isn't going to take vows of silence after having had the truth brutally rammed home? |
| The thing is Angel doesn't really believe he is a deceiver. Thanks for the review Richard |
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| Opal | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 11:52 pm |
| Loved it all! Especially last chappie when Angel was called "Asshat!" |
| lmao, Ares really doesn't like Angel |
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| slinkyPK | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 11:42 pm |
| Totally perving on Ares. Please come back later for real review. |
| lol, ok I take it you like Ares |
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| fanxstitch | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 11:30 pm |
| I love this story. I am so glad you brought it back. Please continue with this as it is really wonderful. I hope you update very soon. |
| thank you. I will try |
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| golddrake | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 10:54 pm |
| great chapter |
| thanks :d |
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| Verda | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 10:48 pm |
| Finally Buffy put Xander in his place, YAY! This is a very interesting story, will Buffy recognize the younger Spike? and once she does, is he going to go back to his turned age? Update soon please, can't wait to see what's happening next. |
| thank you ma'am |
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| Richard | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 08:53 pm |
| Ooooh, I love this story. Haven't read this chapter yet cause I'm having to read it from scratch. Not a bad thing at all. |
| thanks Richard |
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| jl1980 | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 08:24 pm |
| wow...very intense...your writing style is so unique, in a very good way, and the whole idea is very original...thanx for another great update, can't wait til the next one |
| thank you ma'am |
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| Karyn | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 08:21 pm |
| cool chappie!!! *giggles @ Ares* |
| And Ares just won't shut up. |
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| maryperk | Heard it from a friend | 07/07/2006 08:12 pm |
| Cool chapter. |
| Thank you ma'am, and I am truly almost working on IAW |
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| Robyn | Third verse | 07/09/2006 06:41 pm |
| I loved Buffy's reaction to meeting Angel. As for Xander I wouldn't mind her going ahead and hurting his feelings because he obviously doesn't take hints. Yay for Buffy staking Darla and all the other changes that have been made, I am looking forward to how else things change. |
| Some people are born wankers. Some people strive to be a wanker. And Some just achieve Wankerness, then there is Xander |
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| Megan | Third verse | 07/08/2006 07:52 am |
| Whoot! Xander's a dick, no matter what, huh? |
| pretty much |
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| Verda | Third verse | 07/07/2006 10:15 pm |
| By rewriting history what will she change? Jesse's alive, Darla's dusted. Interested in seeing where you're taking this. Good read. |
| So far it is just going where the story goes |
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| Cewcew | Third verse | 03/28/2006 11:56 pm |
| I sware Im guna start crying. yet another fabulous story has come to a TBC. Im starting to think TBC stands for Teasing you Because I Can. If I promise to be a good girl can I have an update? |
| lol, how did you figure it out?? |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Third verse | 03/25/2006 05:12 am |
| This is one heck of a twisted universe. I'm cracking up at times and going huh at others. Look forward to seeing when/if you continue. |
| Love that I confuse but amuse you, what can I say? It's a guy thing :d |
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| Athenewolfe | Third verse | 03/06/2006 01:16 pm |
| OMG Wulfpup! That was freaking amazing. I lvoe how you are twisting things around ... flashes of memory and a younger looking spike, I love this, this is really fab! I want more! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE! |
| Have a LL almost finished then back to this |
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| akarinacj | Third verse | 03/05/2006 07:02 am |
| Interresting story. Waiting to see how you change the history.:-) |
| thank you |
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| Morrigan | Third verse | 03/04/2006 06:09 pm |
| Hehe Work it girl, work it... That was funny. |
| thank you ma'am |
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| lilmamaday | Third verse | 03/04/2006 03:38 pm |
| Great story! I can't wait to see what happens when Spike gets to Sunnydale! please update soon! |
| I'll try |
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| Kittenuno | Third verse | 03/04/2006 12:54 pm |
| Great fic with an exceptional rewrite of the Buffy Universe. Can't wait to see where you go with your redesigned BTVS characters. |
| thank you ma'am |
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| jl1980 | Third verse | 03/04/2006 07:33 am |
| this is good in a wonderfully nostalgic way...love the new twist and can't wait for buffy and spike to actually meet in this world...lovin it |
| lovin the reviews thank you JL |
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| dihcar | Third verse | 03/04/2006 05:22 am |
God that xander is a fucking idiot, she should really make it clear that she's not intrested. She's Spike's girl.
I hope that you didn't take too much of spike's strength away now that he's so young, cus angel is still in the mindeset of thinken he's stronger then spike so he would need a good asskicking from him.
seeya |
Karma part three
You said--
God that xander is a fucking idiot, she should really make it clear that she's not intrested. She's Spike's girl.
I hope that you didn't take too much of spike's strength away now that he's so young, cus angel is still in the mindeset of thinken he's stronger then spike so he would need a good asskicking from him.
Wulfe replied---
Spike beat the Immortal, Dracula and a very ancient Turok Han in the last chapter. He is a wee bit stronger than Angel, and a hell of a lot better fighter. |
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| Pulchra Nex | Third verse | 03/04/2006 05:17 am |
oooh I love this! (and can I just say wow!? Ares and Spike in one story! :-D I hope you update soon  |
| Thank you and Ares is fun to write |
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| Irina | Third verse | 03/03/2006 11:28 pm |
| Love the way the story is progressing. LOL... great first meeting between Buffy and Angel. Fantastic update! |
| lol, Is the way there first meeting should have went |
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| neo_trinityknot | Third verse | 03/03/2006 11:22 pm |
| Loving this story |
| thank you |
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| vladt | Third verse | 03/03/2006 09:36 pm |
| this is getting even better. thanks for the fun read. |
| you're welcome |
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| oracleholly | Third verse | 03/03/2006 09:33 pm |
| Great addition sweetie! Hey, lookee we both rewrote "Welcome.." go us! |
| lol, yeah we did |
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| slinkyPK | Third verse | 03/03/2006 08:30 pm |
Oh yeah, me likes it! Excellent spin on Bronze scene. And, I say again, Damn you for giving me a plotbunny! I have much to do! My own bunnies are overfed as it is and there you go...
Can't wait to see what happens next, hon! |
| damn your plot bunny |
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| MarzBar | Third verse | 03/03/2006 07:26 pm |
| This is a fun redo of the series! Will Jesse make it? Can somebody off the Whelp? More story please. |
| Of course more stopry someday |
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| Jackofspikes | Third verse | 03/03/2006 06:07 pm |
oh...now you've done it...you've fed the monster! Now it want's MORE...lol
Excellent update more soon please |
| maybe....someday |
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| Robyn | A new Beginning?? | 07/09/2006 02:22 pm |
| I am enjoying the changes in Buffy's attitude and responses. ;D |
I am enjoying the changes in Buffy's attitude and responses. ;D
Buffy swears it is her Slayer side |
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| Megan | A new Beginning?? | 07/08/2006 03:14 am |
| Whoa...that was a wild ride. I'm praying that I've kept it all straight in my head, but we both know that's likely impossible, lol. Intrigued about what's to come, though. And there were some FANTSASTIC lines in this chap. |
| Thanks Megan just read your newest chappie too |
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| Verda | A new Beginning?? | 07/07/2006 09:35 pm |
| Thanks, that was alot easier to read. So now she gets to start again, with all of her old memories, like it. Geez won't Spike be surprised when she chooses him over Angel. Thanks good read. |
| Spike no longer trusts Love |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | A new Beginning?? | 03/25/2006 05:04 am |
| Interestingly changed Buffy. Ares angle bit odd ... but okie dokie to see what happens next with it. I'm very curious to see how life goes this time around. Got a bit dizzy with allt he jumping around. Hope I got it right. |
| lol, more jumping around in the next chappie |
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| jl1980 | A new Beginning?? | 03/04/2006 07:29 am |
| great spin on season one...i see where this is headed...she gets to do it all over, only right this time!! on to the next chappie now! |
| lol, maybe....someday |
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| vladt | A new Beginning?? | 03/03/2006 09:19 pm |
| the master is outdoing himself. spike and nikki woods working together; buffy taking charge. thanks for the fantastic read |
LOL, I thought I was writing this one?? Not Kat, Debs or Mega???
Thank you sir for the encouraging words |
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| Athenewolfe | A new Beginning?? | 02/08/2006 05:40 pm |
Review for Chapter 2b...
LMAO - first thing Buffy does - gets herself off LMAO LMAO LMAO;
First day at Sunnydale High? Oh shit… she was in hell. Oh yeah hell!
I love Buffy threatening to sue -I did to course not for the same reasons
love the xander scene and omg the giles scene fab fab - smart buffy for once pretending it was from dreams;
faB UPDATE NOW! |
| Buffy needed to feel loved even if only by herself |
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| Athenewolfe | A new Beginning?? | 02/08/2006 05:33 pm |
| Why no update Wulfie? You know I love this ficcie. Review for 2A: K Buffy is a bit overbearing ... the sjy is us ... no you evil she witch you are the dark he is the light *hits buff with 2 by 4* i like the gods and goddesses go Ares and Freya. This line - "Oh, yeah." Ares then turned towards Buffy and broke into fake tears. "Buffy, I'm so sowwy. I didn't mean to rape and torture my way across Europe. I didn't have a soul. Sob, sob." classic@. Oh and "This is a Spike-centric story and only chapter two, do I really need to tell you who won??" So who won? |
| Spike won, duh |
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| lilmamaday | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 03:59 pm |
| What a great story! I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and Spike finally do run into each other, especially since Buffy has been filling everyone in on her Hot Boyfriend! Please update soon! |
| Buffy and Spike have a long wait to be together |
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| MarzBar | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 04:13 am |
| Based on this chapter, this story could be lots of fun! Tweeking the whelp is a good thing. More story please. |
| I think Xander is best trained like a puppy, with a newspaper to his nose |
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| Irina | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 02:27 am |
| Great plot! I'm really enjoying the story. I look forward to reading more. |
| Thank you, I hope to have more soon. |
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| Nikkole | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 02:20 am |
| Nice~ I really like this story! I can't wait to see another update! |
| thank you. was suprised that I finished it. |
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| OHolly | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 01:28 am |
| YAY!!! I'm so proud of you! *tears* What a fulfilling chapter. Lots of great stuff. Love how Nikki and Spike took out the immortal -- a pork bone!!! -- and Dracula/Brides. So that ugly ass thing in the cave was a Turok-Han. Cool. Would love to know just what those three did in the old time line. (pretty please). And Ares is the shit!!! LOVE HIM. Can we have more of him too?? |
| Well answered most of this on IM, but I realy like using Ares too |
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| ZoeGrace | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 01:12 am |
| i can't believe you finally updated this! Can't wait for more. I love these time travel fics! |
| Tank ye much ma'am
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| Dany | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 01:03 am |
| I love your story . It's an interesting twist to a back-in-time storyline with such a prologue . Isn't it a paradox to have Dawn in Season 1 ? |
| Isn't it a paradox to have Dawn in Season 1 ?
Could be but at the same time I need her there so I had to go with the need and hope not to many folks get the time paradox. |
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| Tamara | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 12:41 am |
| Great update, you mad dog! er.. redwulf.Do it again! |
| Tank ye, HDK is being betaed as we speak hope to have it up Thursday |
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| bloodshedbaby | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 12:38 am |
| Oh love it! Like this Buffy. A lot. And damn 5000 words? You HAVE been writing! |
| Well add in that OHolly has the next chappie of HDK |
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| Ariel Dawn | A new Beginning?? | 01/24/2006 12:27 am |
| K, Wulfie that ROCKED! so funny! loved every minute! |
| LOL, tank ye kindly miss |
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| Robyn | Prologue | 07/09/2006 01:59 pm |
| Very sad to bad that it took her to long to finally realize the truth. |
Very sad to bad that it took her to long to finally realize the truth.
She is Buffy you expected better?? |
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| Megan | Prologue | 07/08/2006 02:42 am |
| Ooh, I've read this before. I vaguely remember you telling me you were continuing it now. Let's see what you've got, little man! |
| little man / you just love teasin huh?? |
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| Opal | Prologue | 07/07/2006 11:21 pm |
| Scrumptions ... I love the angst! |
| thank you |
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| Verda | Prologue | 07/07/2006 09:09 pm |
| So sad that they all left her but Dawn and Andrew but thanks for the Angel bashing. Never figured her to take herself out **sniff** Poor Spike! Well written. Thanks for the read. |
| LOL, you know Bashing Angel is kind of required |
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| jl1980 | Prologue | 07/07/2006 08:12 pm |
| wow...that was a powerful first chapter...how can xander blame spike for that? how messed up is that? can't wait to see where you go from here.... |
Thank you ma'am
And see Xander thinks Spike is at fault for everything |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Prologue | 03/25/2006 04:51 am |
| Holy cripes, Wulfie. What a way to start this one. {reads the rest that is here} |
| lol, of course....and when are YOU updating |
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| jl1980 | Prologue | 03/04/2006 07:18 am |
| oh my God...this is so dark and sad but totally fascinating...realistic how everyone would have left but dawn and andrew...not surprising to me, i always liked the little nerd ...and for them to still blame spike!!! grr!!! on to the next chapter!! |
| lol, the reason Xander blames Spike comes out more in future chappies |
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| Athenewolfe | Prologue | 02/08/2006 05:26 pm |
| okay - 2 hours 17 minutes hehehehehe me love! Nice angel bashing sweet ficci! |
| Angel bashig is my thing |
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| CutieSaiyajin | Prologue | 01/06/2006 05:45 am |
| Ok, whoa. This is a great prologue. You can't just leave us hangin' there. Update soon! |
| I'll be trying to get back on this one in Febuary. |
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| Delicia | Prologue | 10/20/2005 08:38 pm |
| I enjoyed the prologue. It was very emotional,it had me choked up.This promises to be a great story. I am patiently waiting for more! Thank you. |
| Patient, patient?? A fic fan waiting paitiently???? Never happen thanks for the freat review. |
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| ZoeGrace | Prologue | 10/19/2005 01:23 am |
| Well...well...well...You're just a dark little puppy aren't you? Please tell me this isn't the end. She's coming back somehow right? |
| LOL, not real that Dark, just a dark setup, try Time Tossed or Hard Days Knights a lot fluffier. Or if you klike crossovers with Batman try Bludhaven's Hellmouth. and yes I actualy have the next chappies open now, trying to angst them up |
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| WendyJane | Prologue | 10/14/2005 09:03 pm |
| Very very well written. Loving this- despite the angsty-ness. Made me sniffle; hope to see more soon. xx |
| Maybe |
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| Always_jbj | Prologue | 09/27/2005 10:39 pm |
| So sad *sniff*... and you promised me Spuffiness MONTHS ago... so come on.. pay up, boy! More, more, more. And if I'm not mistaken isn't this a challenge response?? To one of MY challenges?? HUH? |
| No not an answer to one of your challenges this old fic actualy predates your challlenge but I had mentioned it to you because my original idea had been very much like your challenge, but it has evolved |
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| Andra | Prologue | 09/23/2005 03:22 pm |
| Please, preatty please write more soon!! |
| Got it open now should have more within the next ten years oe so |
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| tamibrandt | Prologue | 09/23/2005 12:46 pm |
| awww Can I cry now? :~( Very Good. |
| You can always cry, but why now, its about to get very Spuffy |
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