Prodigal by Confused Muse
 
gailleeChapter Eleven01/09/2006 05:34 am
THAT was just hot! This story is so well written. Love the cliff hanger end to this chapter.
 
Always_jbjChapter Eleven01/07/2006 10:32 am
Wow! Fabulous chapter, nice hot spuffy action followed by the wonderfully intriguing phone call at the end! Can't wait to see what that was all about... and to see Buffy's post-coital reaction and her treatment of Spike.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Chapter Eleven01/07/2006 06:26 am
Awesome chapter!! This was a good one. Those two are playing a dangerous game with each other. I wonder who will win.
 
megsChapter Eleven01/07/2006 04:40 am
wow-ie! I'm just now catching up(I had to ask Daisy tha name of this story!) on all the fics I was reading befor school started getting heavy. Fantastic story!!! Is Buffy/Bethmara some type of vengence demon now?!?!? and was that phone call telling Giles that a slayer died? Keep it up!!!! can't wait for more!!! on another note...ch 7 - 2nd paragraph...is 'Miss Lucy' supposed to be Miss Edith? or did I miss something along the way...?
Thank you Megs And I'm afraid I'm not letting anyone know the plot till the characters are ready to reveal it - I know I'm bad! And no, it was supposed to be Miss Lucy - if you recall, Dru has lots and lots of dolls, all of whom speak to her, but she doesn't always like what they say ;)
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter Eleven01/07/2006 04:07 am
Mmmmm yummy smut *purrs*
 
EstherChapter Eleven01/07/2006 02:07 am
Boy howdy, that was....yummy!!! Spike in all his sexy, primalness....Buffy being all aggresso-girl.....hot damn!!!! And now that little cliffy in the end...I can't wait for more!!!
 
LouChapter Eleven01/06/2006 08:58 pm
Bethmara's a right little raver, isn't she?
 
sueChapter Eleven01/06/2006 08:19 pm
OMG! Off to have soothing shower - that was so bloody hot! Has the wench no shame (I'm hoping not 'cos it don't 'alf make for good reading!). The chappie? OK *grins my head off* Loving it and so looking forward to more. Thanks ever so.
 
neo_trinityknotChapter Eleven01/06/2006 08:14 pm
Great story, cant wait to read more of it!
 
PinChapter Eleven01/06/2006 07:22 pm
Another great chapter. I really like this story and look forward to finding out how things got to be where they are. Thanks!
 
NikkoleChapter Eleven01/06/2006 05:04 pm
Now that was hot! You and your evil cliffhangers, I swear, get a person all worked up to get some information, and then leave us hanging again! Bad bad bad! And yet still so good!LOL! Keep it up!
 
Ariel DawnChapter Eleven01/06/2006 05:03 pm
how, that was a hot chapter. wonder what the phone call was about though...looking forward to the next chapter!
 
UncagedMuseChapter Eleven01/06/2006 04:58 pm
Very good chp and I can't wait to see what happens next!
 
NikkoleChapter Ten01/06/2006 04:54 pm
Interesting! I can't wait to go on to the next chapter and see just how bad they want to scratch those itches they have!!LOL!
 
bubble_blunderChapter Ten12/29/2005 04:47 am
Just got caught up with Chapters 9 and 10. Awesome updates! Can't wait to read more. -Lisa
 
~*~Tasha~*~Chapter Ten12/28/2005 06:23 pm
Oooo ... looks like the prelude to another yummy chapter for Ch. 11. {grins} I do enjoy this one. I keep wondering what will happen next, and why Buffy has changed or what she's changed exactly into. I'm not quite sure of that. Maybe I'm just dense though. {Smiles} I enjoy the mystery.
 
EstherChapter Ten12/28/2005 09:02 am
Oh my...yum!! That was delish and I hope there's more soon. The sparks between these two are too hot, want more....please?
 
Ariel DawnChapter Ten12/28/2005 02:38 am
oooh! I'm all excited for what's coming next!
 
Always_jbjChapter Ten12/28/2005 01:19 am
All caught up! Loved the chaps. You gave us some nice interesting little disclosures to contemplate. The Spike/Bethmara banter is fabulous and the ust is just delicious! Very much looking forward to the next chap *wink*.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter Ten12/27/2005 11:54 pm
More spuffy smut??? *bounces hopefully*
 
sueChapter Ten12/27/2005 11:15 pm
I have missed this so much! Great update. They are both hiding so much from the other and I keep wondering about Buffy's demon side. Looing forward to more. Thank you,
 
~*~Tasha~*~Chapter Nine12/22/2005 02:19 am
She's really made him mad now. Can't wait to see what happens next.
 
KarynChapter Nine12/21/2005 08:08 pm
wow, great chappie, love the interaction with these two!
 
UncagedMuseChapter Nine12/21/2005 06:01 am
Sitting on the edge of my seat! I can't wait for next Tuesday! Love it!
 
Ariel DawnChapter Nine12/21/2005 02:16 am
Have caught up with this one and damn this is good stuff CM. Keep those updates coming!
 
janeChapter Nine12/20/2005 11:27 pm
Wow I just love it.
 
redwulf50Chapter Nine12/20/2005 11:22 pm
LMAO, damn Beth neds a good Spanking, then a good shagging great chappie
 
bloodshedbabyChapter Nine12/20/2005 08:10 pm
Damn, I have to wait another week? *sighs* Great chapter! Hopefully Buffy isn't completely lost...
 
NikkoleChapter Nine12/20/2005 06:17 pm
Evil update! Leave us haning like that! Its ok, we forgive you. Thsi was a good chapter, I'm glad that we are getting some insight on what they are both feeling inside. Can't wait for the next chapter.
 
sueChapter Nine12/20/2005 01:55 pm
You are so bad! Just enough to tease and then you leave us hanging! Love the oodles of attitude our twosome have going for them. And Bu - oops, Beth realising she has a thing for certain vampires is just further evidence of the difference in your version of the person she's become. Yummy. Looking forward to more when it comes. Thanks ever so.
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter Nine12/20/2005 01:25 pm
nice...
 
bloodshedbabyChapter Eight12/20/2005 07:50 pm
the plot thickens... *runs off to the next chap*
 
LouChapter Eight12/18/2005 04:37 pm
Great to see this updated - a very original Buffy and what a cool Dru!
 
NikkoleChapter Eight12/14/2005 09:18 pm
HMMMMMM.....Twists and turns, twists and turns, where will it all lead to??? I really like this story! I can't wait to find out just what kind of demon Buffy really has become!
Thank you - I'm glad you're finding it interesting. I promise all will eventually be revealed...
 
sueChapter Eight12/14/2005 09:23 am
Brills update. Love the way you're moving the plot along and longing to see what happens next. Thanks.
Thank you, Sue I'm trying for the strip teas approach to plot development, as well as putting in smut where I can ;)
 
bubble_blunderChapter Eight12/14/2005 07:26 am
Just got caught up on this story, since I somehow managed to miss the last chapter. Wonderful update, dear. I'm interested to see exactly where you are taking this one. -Lisa
Lisa - thank you for your kind comments. It's gonna be a long road, not just plot wise but personally, but I *am* planning to update weekly now, and writing ahead when I get the chance.
 
UncagedMuseChapter Eight12/14/2005 06:52 am
YES! *jumps up adn down* I absolutely love this fic! Am so glad you are working on it again.
Thank you! I'm glad to see my distraction hasn't dimmed someone's enthusiasm, and it's motivating me to write yet more (when I get some free time....)
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter Eight12/14/2005 02:46 am
Nooooo, not Dru *faints* Run Spike Run
Oh come on, she's a softie really... Oh, wait, she's not *cackles evilly*
 
Always_jbjChapter Eight12/14/2005 01:38 am
Oh, I love the update! It's good to see Spike getting Giles involved. I loved Spike's moment of revelation... *pets poor Spike!* Hmmm... Dru could make things very interesting... can't wait to see what happens next!
Thank you C, it's good to know people still care about this poor, half-forgotten ficcie of mine. I'm not sure, but after ten, chapters may get a tad longer simply to move the plot along.
 
~*~Tasha~*~Chapter Eight12/14/2005 01:15 am
Glad to see an update of this one. Look forward to more.
Yeah, sorry it's been a while - I oversubscribed to some LJ communities and was busy trying to meet deadlines there! Never again, say I...
 
redwulf50Chapter Eight12/14/2005 01:01 am
LOL, damn good chappie, I love the plot line, it sucks you in and leaves you on the edge of your seat.
Thank you Wulfie! I promise to try and live up to that expectation...
 
HenkeChapter Seven10/22/2005 10:39 pm
Keep it up
 
redwulf50Chapter Seven10/16/2005 02:17 pm
Oh shit, where was I when you posted this chappie, grrrrrrrr and now you have seven and eight at the beta?? Oh yeah I like you
 
ComedyofErrorsChapter Seven10/13/2005 04:00 pm
Spicy. Cna't wait for more.
 
EstherChapter Seven10/12/2005 05:52 am
Hot damn, that was a great update!! Wow, there's tons more to learn about Buffy....and man, love how dark she is. Hehe...also love how much she wants Spike...can't wait for his convo w/Giles!!!
 
Always_jbjChapter Seven10/12/2005 01:41 am
I loved the update! This story just gets more and more interesting with each chap.
The conversation with Giles certainly will be interesting... I wonder if Giles can manage to push aside his vampire-issues long enough to hear Spike out?
 
slaymesoftlyChapter Seven10/12/2005 01:37 am
Had to catch up on a few chapters, but I'm still loving this fic. Can't wait for the explanation of what's going on with Buffy - lost her soul? On purpose? What's with the ring? Is it an amulet like the vengeance demons wear? Spike is sooo hot in this fic. Can I lick lime juice off his chest ? Or some other body part?
 
Elizabeth Anne SummersChapter Seven10/11/2005 08:55 pm
Eeep, good update. Can't wait for more. And oh noes, Dru!
 
bloodshedbabyChapter Six12/20/2005 07:36 pm
ooooh... nice
 
Ariel DawnChapter Six10/06/2005 10:45 pm
Another fab Chapter!
 
megsChapter Six10/04/2005 10:36 pm
I like this take on the story! Please write more :>
 
Always_jbjChapter Six09/24/2005 11:58 pm
All caught up! *yay* I really like this fic... looking forward to more.
 
spike_spetslayerChapter Six09/24/2005 03:40 pm
Oh, CM, you are so BAD! Love the whole idea, but then you know that. Looking forward to more more more!
 
TashaChapter Six09/24/2005 06:03 am
Nice story. Good update. Looking forward to more. I wonder what it will take to get through to Buffy.
 
TashaChapter Five09/24/2005 03:27 am
Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:36 pm Hmmm ... read ch. 4 and 5 today to catch up. Interesting developments. I wonder just what Buffy is and what Spike is going to do about it. Very interesting. Looks like an original take on things too. Look forward to the next update.
 
EstherChapter Five09/24/2005 03:26 am
Esther 09/16/2005 @ 01:13 am Hot damn, ch. 5 was great! The Spike scene was HOT...goodness, I drown in a puddle of drool...and seeing him battle his 'inner demons' (no pun intended) was great. Classic Spike/William. The Buffy scenes were very interesting. Like that you've given us a clue as to her environment and a sneek peak to her attraction for Spike. Can't wait for more!!!
 
ComedyofErrorsChapter Five09/24/2005 03:26 am
ComedyofErrors 09/15/2005 @ 02:58 pm Uh-oh. Something to lose, extra money, hmm...this sounds like trouble. Like Spike's conversation with himself.
 
OracleHollyChapter Five09/24/2005 03:25 am
Oracleholly 09/15/2005 @ 02:52 am Email You've really got my curiosity peaked about the 'state' of Buffy. What has she become? Who's her boss? Yummy Spike masterbating. Always a plus.
 
Always_jbjChapter Four09/24/2005 04:15 am
Hmmm... intriguing idea! Can't wait to see what is going on. LOL... Poor Spike I volunteer to kiss all injured body parts better for him. It's a sacrifice I know... one that I will gladly undertake!
 
ElizabethAnneSummersChapter Four09/24/2005 03:24 am
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/15/2005 @ 02:19 am Oh noes, she didn't lose her soul did she? Well... who needs a soul... bleh... lol
 
spike_spetslayerChapter Four09/24/2005 03:23 am
spike_spetslayer 09/14/2005 @ 11:04 pm CM, you TEASE! come on! SpikeWank was good, but we need more, and wtf is going on with Buffy? More more more!!!
 
karynChapter Four09/24/2005 03:22 am
Karyn 09/14/2005 @ 10:09 pm damn muse...you completely stumped me that time..had no clue until you mentioned the necklace...lol very good chapter
 
OraclehollyChapter Four09/24/2005 03:21 am
Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:08 pm *up to ch 4* OOOOO what an interesting premise. I've read other Post-Becoming stories where Spike finds Buffy, but different situations. This promises an interesting twist to this set-up.
 
margaretChapter Four09/24/2005 03:20 am
margaret 09/13/2005 @ 01:16 pm great twist on the story can't wait to see what spike does next
 
tadamsChapter Four09/24/2005 03:20 am
tadams 09/12/2005 @ 10:44 pm great storyline I like where you are taking this
 
CelestiaChapter Four09/24/2005 03:19 am
Celestia 09/12/2005 @ 12:46 pm Really interesting like story... but could you explain more about your prophecies and everything. I did like to know what REALLY happened to buffy because she rock! More soon please!
 
NikkoleChapter Four09/24/2005 03:18 am
Nikkole 09/12/2005 @ 11:33 am Interesting....VERY! Buffy some sort of elevated demon? HMMM, the possabilities are endless there! Good job! Keep those updates coming!
 
ComedyofErrorsChapter Four09/24/2005 03:16 am
ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:05 am Whoops, always a prophecy. Interesting idea that Buffy would have gotten "turned", will wath to see where you go with it.
 
ElizabethAnneSummersChapter Four09/24/2005 03:16 am
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/12/2005 @ 01:21 am OoooOOOOoo, interesting twist there. More please.
 
EstherChapter Four09/24/2005 03:15 am
Esther 09/12/2005 @ 12:42 am Color me shocked cause I totally didn't expect for Buffy to be non-human...great twist!! Not a vamp; don't know what she is; elevated: damn, this is turning out to be freaking awesome!! Can't wait for another chapter!!! Soon....please?
 
Always_jbjChapter Three09/24/2005 03:59 am
Now that was just YUM!!! *fans self*
 
OpalChapter Three09/24/2005 03:14 am
Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:49 pm Love the update! Can't wait to see where this one goes!
 
StephanieChapter Three09/24/2005 03:14 am
Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:46 am Hmmm... Nice body shot scene I can't wait to see what is going to happen next. I am intrigued and need more. More. and I really want to know what kind of punishment Buffy would delve out to the big bad
 
spike_spetslayerChapter Three09/24/2005 03:12 am
spike_spetslayer 09/10/2005 @ 05:51 pm Gosh, CM, this just keeps getting better and better--i feel the need for some tequila right now! LOL Keep going, please!
 
IsabellaChapter Three09/24/2005 03:11 am
Isabella 09/10/2005 @ 01:04 pm Ok, the first chapter teased me. The 2nd chapter left me going, there's got to be more. I read thru it so fast I had to re-read to make sure I missed nothing. Please keep up on this story I've really enjoyed Buffy's walk on the dark side. I'm also enjoying your story Cara Mia. will you be updating both? I really hope so. LOL Isabella
 
opalChapter Three09/24/2005 03:10 am
opal 09/10/2005 @ 12:42 pm need a carton of ciggies! now!
 
SlaymesoftlyChapter Three09/24/2005 03:09 am
Slaymesoftly 09/10/2005 @ 11:50 am Holy shit! Drooling now - and I don't even LIKE tequila! lol This is wonderful - and prudish Buffy is still in there? So this is just her pretending to be somebody else so she can forget her pain? Cannot wait to see where you go with this. Wherever it is, go there quickly, please! *begs humbly*
 
TashaChapter Three09/24/2005 03:08 am
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/10/2005 @ 03:39 am Wow, that was a hot description of a body shot party. Awesome!!!! Look forward to the next update.
 
ElizabethAnneSummersChapter Three09/24/2005 03:08 am
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/10/2005 @ 01:56 am Oooooo *fans herself*
 
EstherChapter Three09/24/2005 03:07 am
Esther 09/10/2005 @ 01:12 am Wow, just the thought of taking body shots off of Spike....yum!! Loving the new, more mature/darker Buffy (including her appearance) and Spike's obvious attraction to it. Those two are gonna combust!! Great job!
 
atenChapter Three09/24/2005 03:06 am
aten 09/09/2005 @ 07:46 am I like this. Very interesting twist with Buffy -moe like Faith.
 
Always_jbjChapter Two09/24/2005 03:49 am
Ooh, very interesting!!! *runs off to read more!*
 
ComedyofErrorsChapter Two09/24/2005 03:03 am
ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 07:48 pm I like Spike's monologue a lot, and I can't wait to see this drinking contest!
 
romeroChapter Two09/24/2005 03:02 am
romero 09/08/2005 @ 06:16 pm It's good to see Buffy with a rowdy attitude. Can't wait to read more.
 
NikkoleChapter Two09/24/2005 03:02 am
Nikkole 09/08/2005 @ 02:48 pm Nice twist of events you have here! I can't wait for the update!
 
MaliChapter Two09/24/2005 03:01 am
Mali 09/08/2005 @ 08:45 am Ooh. I'm guessing that's Buffy. Brilliant. This is gonna be good.
 
EstherChapter Two09/24/2005 03:00 am
Esther 09/08/2005 @ 01:22 am Hot damn, I love your totally different take on this....Buffy in a bar guzzling it up w/others....wow...can't wait to see her reaction when she sees Spike. FIREWORKS!! Great job!!
 
DaisyChapter Two09/24/2005 02:59 am
daisy 09/08/2005 @ 01:15 am can't wait to see how buffy reacts to spike being there. i hope she doesn't try to stake him. i can't wait to see what you do with this next, so PLEASE update soon.
 
DKChapter Two09/24/2005 02:58 am
DK 09/07/2005 @ 10:40 pm Good story, hope to read more updates.
 
jodiChapter Two09/24/2005 02:57 am
jodi 09/07/2005 @ 10:35 pm yummy. more please.
 
msberryChapter Two09/24/2005 02:55 am
msberry 09/07/2005 @ 10:25 pm Liked it very much!
 
TashaChapter Two09/24/2005 02:54 am
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/07/2005 @ 09:19 pm Good update. Look forward to CH. 3
 
slaymesoftlyChapter Two09/24/2005 02:53 am
slaymesoftly 09/07/2005 @ 09:13 pm great new chapter. And now he's found her and the fun begins!
 
Chanel 5Chapter Two09/24/2005 02:51 am
chanel 5 09/07/2005 @ 08:17 pm I like it. keep going.
 
bloodshedbabyChapter One12/20/2005 07:04 pm
catching up on this fic so i'm starting from the first chap. I forgot how good it is!!
 
KarynChapter One12/15/2005 03:33 am
great update CM, can't wait to see what Dru wants...teh hee! Poor impatient spike! lol, wants his results and he wants them now, ummmmm, determined spike gets me hot...oh hell any spike gets me hot....rofl
 
Always_jbjChapter One09/24/2005 03:36 am
I'm procrastinating as the muse is not talking to me so I decided now was a good time to start reading something new. I am so glad I did!
I really enjoyed this first chapter and am off now to read some more!
 
NikkoleChapter One09/24/2005 02:48 am
Nikkole 09/07/2005 @ 01:21 pm HMMM. Nice beginning. Let's see where this goes, it has a lot of paotential! Good work!
 
slinkypsychokitChapter One09/24/2005 02:47 am
slinkypsychokit 09/07/2005 @ 12:30 pm Oh, I like this, I do. Is there more? Can we have more, please? Such a wonderful start you've made. Very intriguing. I would very much like to see where you take this.
 
TashaChapter One09/24/2005 02:46 am
~*~Tasha~*~ 09/06/2005 @ 11:50 pm Nice start. I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
 
SlaymesoftlyChapter One09/24/2005 02:44 am
Slaymesoftly 09/06/2005 @ 08:43 pm Oh! Love this beginning! Wonderful idea - can't wait to see how you work it.
 
MeganChapter One09/24/2005 02:43 am
Megan 09/06/2005 @ 07:53 pm Oops, confused the name, but I knew which fic I was talking about! More more...LOL. Haven't even read karyn's yet. Stupid pregnant brain!
 
MeganChapter One09/24/2005 02:42 am
Megan 09/06/2005 @ 07:52 pm Karyn, this is a fantastic effort. Was just telling Stacy that I found you at aff.net and she told me all about you ;) I hear you have more? Please please don't make us pant for more. The way you've had Spike find out through Joyce is so original and I loved the build up with the telling of his troubles and traumas with Dru--very believable. Excellent job and I wait eagerly for more.
 
ComedyofErrorsChapter One09/24/2005 02:41 am
ComedyofErrors 09/06/2005 @ 06:51 pm hmm...has possibility. Like to see more.
 
ElizabethAnneSummersChapter One09/24/2005 02:40 am
ElizabethAnneSummers 09/06/2005 @ 03:58 pm Email URL I'm intrigued...
 
RaeChapter One09/24/2005 02:40 am
Rae 09/06/2005 @ 02:26 pm Very much like the start. I can't wait to see where you are taking this and hope you update soon.
 
maryChapter One09/24/2005 02:39 am
mary 09/06/2005 @ 01:49 pm Email Great start. Cant wait to see where you are going.
 
Wendy JaneChapter One09/24/2005 02:38 am
WendyJane 09/06/2005 @ 01:36 pm Ooh- I like this! Great start- looks like the perfect layout for a great new fic!! Can't wait to see more of this!!
 
DaisyChapter One09/24/2005 02:36 am
daisy 09/06/2005 @ 01:26 pm great start cant wait for more. whats buffy gonna be like when spike finds her.. more soon please