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| Cara Mia by Confused Muse |
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| YB | Chapter Six | 01/31/2006 07:34 pm |
Hey that story's great! I loved reading it. Well, what's written of it so far, anyway... The way you write Spike is awesome and your plot seems to be evolving rather well too. I like Dawn and I like Buffy and I like pretty much everything in here, which is pretty rare, I might add. I'll be keeping an eye on this fic then, see when you add a new chapter! Good job,
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| Oracleholly | Chapter Six | 12/26/2005 04:22 am |
| HOLY CRAP! I don't like the jars with vampire hearts of every lineage in them... and what does the Immortal *cough*asswipe*cough* have planned for Buffy ... you know I don't care ... Go DAWN, Go SPIKE!!!! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Six | 11/11/2005 08:43 am |
| GO SPIKE! RUN! Hurry to find Buffy before it is too late. Damn Immortal. Hope Spike gets there in time. Look forward to more. |
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| jane | Chapter Six | 11/06/2005 07:39 pm |
| Grrrh I'm on tenterhooks waiting for the big revelation. Love it udate soon. |
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| letitia | Chapter Six | 11/05/2005 08:48 pm |
| I really hope that they all can figure this out. Great update. always love Spike and can I just say GO DAWN.. |
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| SpaceLord | Chapter Six | 11/05/2005 04:43 pm |
| Very interesting story, what is the Imortal wanker up to? Gonna have fun reading about it in the coming chapters. |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter Six | 11/05/2005 01:27 pm |
excellent, would say more but barely awake  |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Five | 11/11/2005 08:42 am |
| Go Dawn for getting to Andrew like that. {chuckles} I'm heading to Chapter 6 now. |
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| Lou | Chapter Five | 10/19/2005 11:27 am |
| Such a tangled web. Delicious! |
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| sue | Chapter Five | 10/19/2005 11:06 am |
| OMG! That first pressing can be a real bitch! Hoping for a bit of rescue coming up. Loved the chappie and eager for more. Thanks. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter Five | 10/19/2005 08:44 am |
| Is the Immortal going to show Buffy where he has Spike imprisoned and what is being done to him? Is Dawn capable of calling Buffy's cell phone and getting Andrew to talk to her? How badly are you going to hurt Spike before Buffy wises up? |
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter Five | 10/19/2005 05:32 am |
| CM, love your Dawnie--go slayer sister...and that sniveling weasel Andrew...just should be shot...great story so far! |
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| redwulf50 | Chapter Five | 10/18/2005 09:13 pm |
Kill the Immortal soon  |
Patience isn't a virtue, it's a hard-to-acquire skill  |
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| megs | Chapter Four | 10/06/2005 01:27 am |
| oOo! I can't wait to see what The Imortal is up to! And what happens to convince Buffy that Spike is real. Update soon please! |
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| sue | Chapter Four | 10/04/2005 06:12 pm |
| Great to have an update. Methinks that Spike may be the victim of a bout of Immortal skullduggery soon. Will Buffy realise that it's really him? I need to know! More please, soon. Thanks ever so. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Four | 10/04/2005 01:36 am |
| Excellent chapter 3 and 4. Glad to see this one still here and reposted. At least Buffy wasn't rejecting Spike. She was rejecting what she thought was some thing trying to be Spike. I hope that Dawn can get Buffy to understand that Spike is really alive. Giles should know that Spike is alive because of Andrew. I hope that it all gets worked out. i don't like the Immortal, and I hope he dusts in the wind. |
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| Delicia | Chapter Three | 10/04/2005 11:01 am |
| I'm liking this story.Keep up the good work. Can't wait for more! |
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| Tasha | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:46 am |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/20/2005 @ 10:28 pm
Loved that last line of Chapter 2. Look forward to more of this one. I wonder what the Immortal is up to. Hope he doesn't try to steal Spike.
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| lovesbitca37 | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:46 am |
| lovesbitca37 09/18/2005 @ 11:40 am
I love it! The last line of ch2 is just perfect I can't wait to see how Buffy reacts to Spike and how they find out what the Immortal is up to!
Please update!
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| Shehrezade | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:45 am |
| Schehrezade 09/17/2005 @ 05:43 pm
Whoa how did I miss this! You're doing a response to my first ever challenge I posted! Awesome and I am enjoying it so much -- write more cos that Immortal is soooo needing sorting!
And that final line CLASSIC! Keep writing
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| Gina | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:44 am |
| Gina 09/15/2005 @ 06:00 pm
Ooh, the Immortal's got a dirty little secret! That last line was all Spike! Update soon!
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| Oracleholly | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:44 am |
| Oracleholly 09/13/2005 @ 11:09 pm
Great last line to Chap 2! lol I see the Immortal's being a bad boy; Spike's going to have to do something about that.
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| Stephanie | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:43 am |
| Stephanie 09/13/2005 @ 03:23 pm
LOL - first love the complaint about the genes she ended up with - that was so cute and so dawn. Oh now that last line is so freakin funny. LOL... just pleased to see you ROFL! Fab - good intrique with the Immortal. Need more!
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| Shadowsbabe | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:42 am |
| Shadowsbabe 09/12/2005 @ 08:30 pm
"LOL!!!"...That line should go down in fanfiction history.
Too bad Buffy's gonna to kick some major butt in the next chapter.
If I was Dawn, I don't think I'd stick around to watch.
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| vladt | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:42 am |
| vladt 09/12/2005 @ 08:18 pm
great start. thanks. love the chapter 2 ending.
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:41 am |
| spike_spetslayer 09/12/2005 @ 06:12 pm
CM--you just keep making it better and better. Love that line--"not a stake in my pocket" LOLTIP! that is classic! you rock, Girl! now go write some more!
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:40 am |
| ComedyofErrors 09/12/2005 @ 10:10 am
And what will Buffy say...
Interesting conversation the immortal was having.
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| Vicki | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:40 am |
| vicki 09/12/2005 @ 09:26 am
great cliffhanger ending. now please give us more.
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| Mali | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:39 am |
| Mali 09/12/2005 @ 04:55 am
O.o Has Buffy realised it's Spike yet? And I have a feeling that he doesn't know how pissed off she's gonna be. *rubs hands together in classic evil genius move*
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| Esther | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:39 am |
| Esther 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm
Yipee, he's finally seen her and grabbed her, but don't end it there....need more...please? Oh, the Immortal is up to something....and I hope my...um....Spike isn't caught up in it....great job, and I really can't wait for ch. 3!!!
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| Opal | Chapter Two | 09/24/2005 03:38 am |
| Opal 09/11/2005 @ 11:43 pm
It's not a stake....lol...
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter One | 11/05/2005 05:08 pm |
| Uh, oh. The Immortal is up to something! Can't wait for next chapter! |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter One | 10/18/2005 11:14 pm |
| I love Dawn taking charge like this. Poor Spike picked the wrong place to be drunk in. 'The first pressing' has an ominous ring to it. Great chapter. |
| I figured we'd seen her potential in Season 5 quite a lot, and the phrase "Little Bitty Buffy" stuck ;) The first pressing is actually a term for vineyards, it's the first harvest and wine-making of the season...there is ominous, but it's coming! |
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter One | 10/03/2005 10:54 pm |
| Oh yay! The site's back up and I can read these two marvelous new chapters. Wonderful confrontation between Buffy and Spike. Nothing is easy between them, definitely. Let's hope Andrew shows up shortly to straighten things out.
Very interested in the plot the immortal is trying to inact. Evil manipulative fiend. |
| Thank you so much There was someone who didn't like the confrontation at all, so it's nice to know someone appreciates me ;) |
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| Stephanie | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:37 am |
| Stephanie 09/11/2005 @ 05:39 am
Great story need more... more
Seriously, goo dstart... can't wait to see what happens next... I like SPike finding Dawn. It is logical and makes me wonder why he never bothered before.
Now ... more!
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| Shadowsbabe | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:36 am |
| Shadowsbabe 09/10/2005 @ 12:05 am
Okay, I'm hooked. I love this. So glad you remembered to fix the Spike/Dawn relationship. It was too important to both of the charcters. I'm still mad they never had time to show this kind of scene before the end of season 7. Can't forgive those darn Potentials for stealing screen time from important relationship moments like this. Please be a fast updater. Please!!!!!!!!!
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| Tamara | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:35 am |
| Tamara 09/09/2005 @ 07:44 am
I can't wait to see his reaction to telling Buffy . Y'now I reslly have kink about Spike hardening his heart towards Buffy post TGIQ with her desperately persuing him. The hypocrisy of her being with the Immortal after all her going on about soulessness and normal really bothered me especially since thye left it so late in the verse.
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| redwulf | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:35 am |
redwulf50 09/08/2005 @ 09:49 pm
Like Patti said us old folks need quick updates  great fic so far
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| ComedyofErrors | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:33 am |
| ComedyofErrors 09/08/2005 @ 07:54 pm
Great Dawn reactions: hug then slap. I wonder what Buffy will do...
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| Gina | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:33 am |
| Gina 09/08/2005 @ 07:30 am
Awww. I love Spike/Dwan friendship! Hurry and make Buffy dump that poncey slime bucket!
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| Esther | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:32 am |
| Esther 09/08/2005 @ 01:53 am
Oh man, great beginning!! I'm hooked already! More...soon....please?
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| slaymesoftly | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:31 am |
| Slaymesoftly 09/07/2005 @ 09:24 pm
Great start! More soon I hope? Not nagging, just hoping. I'm old, you know, and I forget stuff if it's too long between chapters....lol
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| Tasha | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:30 am |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ 09/07/2005 @ 09:12 pm
Nice start.
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| spike_spetslayer | Chapter One | 09/24/2005 03:30 am |
| spike_spetslayer 09/07/2005 @ 03:01 pm
Great start, CM--always wondered why Spike never looked Dawnie up when in Rome...keep going, sounds great
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