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| Mastery by ComedyofErrors |
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| Milly | Epilogue | 07/09/2006 06:12 pm |
I've read both your stories archived on this site, both extremely well written, both thoroughly enjoyable.
I am hoping for more, thank you and keep writing. |
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| Athenewolfe | Epilogue | 02/18/2006 10:42 am |
| happy sigh - excellant ficcage - I really enjoyed the story! Happy lovely sigh! |
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| CutieSaiyajin | Epilogue | 01/03/2006 09:10 am |
| I loved this story. Dark, but it had a happy ending. Excellent job. |
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| SpaceLord | Epilogue | 10/21/2005 11:16 am |
| Really loved this one, very dark but with a happy ending. Can't wait to see what your next story will be like. |
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| Elsie | Epilogue | 10/08/2005 06:18 am |
| I loved it. Very well written, and I couldn't stop reading. I hope you continue to write more! |
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| MarzBar | Epilogue | 09/30/2005 11:43 am |
| Love the epilogue. Hope Spuffy can find a way to stay undead together for a very long time. |
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| Nichole | Epilogue | 09/30/2005 07:57 am |
| i have followed this fic from the begining and i loved it..it was so well written..maybe later we can get a sequel just to see whats up with Buffy and Spike and their merry band of minions..oh and to see if the council sent the other 2 slayers adn what happened..so many possibilites..ahhh back to my point...lost myself there for a moment..GREAT story..look forward to more of your stories soon...N |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 18 | 02/18/2006 10:38 am |
| *sniff* wonderful reunion - glad xander didn't make an ass of himseslf! |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:31 pm |
| Go get your man Buffy... I am just glad that he is willing to give her time and teach her. And it would seem as if the group is coming together nicely. Alexa was there to help her. I just love the innocence of her after she was finished and asked if she did it ok?? Great story. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:31 pm |
| Yippee!!! Hot Spuffy lovin'! Yahoo!
**does happy dance**
You've made my insomnia very happy.
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| Esther | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:30 pm |
| How can anyone hate you when you reward us with such a steamy chapter? HOT DAMN!!! I'm still drooling...great update...more...soon? Please? |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:30 pm |
| Adored this chapter. This was a nice lesson for the two of them. I enjoy seeing them get closer together in a natural progression. You write them very well.
I'm worried about what exactly the tape Angelus sent to the Scoobies showed. They aren't going to understand what she had to do ... I will hope that maybe the will understand and see that Angelus forced her. I hope they don't try to kill Buffy and Spike. Look forward to the next update.
I loved the intimate scene here too, and Spike letting her be on top was a good thing in my book. He was trying to show that she can have control in the bedroom, and it doesn't have to be all about the Sire. I liked that. |
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| Opal | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:29 pm |
| Naughty Naughty leaving Mistress Opal hanging for nummy goodness of Spike!
** opal hides remembering she is not the nice little goth club she went to saturday night**
**polite opal**
Wonder update Comedy, great visualization with your final scene between Buffy and Spike. I am very much looking forward to your next update. |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:29 pm |
| love it. I wonder what Spike is going to do now that he knows what is going on to wake him. And how great is it that Angel can't find them. I just feel bad that they have a video of her. Great update |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:29 pm |
| Definitely enjoying ... please update again soon. Angelus is such a jerk for sending a videotape of what he forced on Buffy to Joyce and all. I hope that SPike and Buffy are able to explain it or something. I hate to think of Joyce hating her daughter that much when Buffy did everything she could to be strong and save people even as a vampire. |
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:28 pm |
| Nooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! U stopped there... evil,lol. I really liked this chappie, very cute.
"He was kind of like the Wile E. Coyote of vampires, only his plans actually worked."
I'm happy I wasn't drinking because that was just way to funny. And I got a visual of Spike on that black pathed road in the cartoon with the roadrunner saying "meep" "meep" then sticking his tonguw out at Spike LMAO!!!! |
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| Tam | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:28 pm |
| UGH!! you are EVILLLLLLLL LMAO |
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| Esther | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:27 pm |
| Oh my...I bow at your feet, begging for more...please...don't stop there... |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:27 pm |
| You wicked, wicked woman! Leaving the story like that. Got me & Spike all worked up and then ***** a big ol' cliffhanger. **pouting** the next chapter better be forthcoming like soon! |
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:27 pm |
| The next chapter better be on its way, or you are in biiiiig trouble! LOL this was great, funny and sweet. |
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| Karyn | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:26 pm |
| damn! ...just damn! lol you are so evil...i love it!
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| Pyrochilde | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:26 pm |
Great chapter!! I can't wait to see how this little group interacts especially Buffy and the minions. I like Alexa  Poor Xander, I hope he gets better soon and I'm glad Giles realizes that Willow needs to learn some control before she gets out of hand like in the show. The last thing anyone needs in a magick addicted Willow. Can't wait for the next update!!
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:25 pm |
| Poor Xander. I wonder where Angelus is. It is good to see Buffy adjusting. Good chapter |
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| Rae | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:25 pm |
| I finally got a chance to read the start of this fic today. It is fantastic and i can't wait for an update. |
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| Jessica | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:25 pm |
| I love it keep it up your are a grate writer latter |
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| Tam | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:24 pm |
excellent update! so loving the dynamics of this story
poor xander  i honestly think this is the first time anyone has written his parents in a positive light and it was all so well done!
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| Esther | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:24 pm |
| Ok, I can't believe I'm gonna say this but, poor Xander!!! I don't hate him in your story, and I'm sooo sorry for what happened to him. Man, that just stinks for him, but at least his mom is there for him...his father...blech.
The Scoobs are a tough bunch, and I'm glad that they're sticking together so well. Poor Cordy, I hope she still stays with Xander after this. You can tell she loves him, and that's what counts.
Spike and Buffy...what can I say? I LOVE THEM!! Buffy's acceptance is spot on, and I'm really glad that she's with Spike now. Introducing the others to her was fab, and I'm glad that they will be having a close familial relationship. Still worried about Angelus, and I hope that he gets his comeuppance by both Spike and Buffy.
Great job!!! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:24 pm |
| I loved this update. Nice to see Buffy settling in. Ouchie on Xander's injuries. Yikes! Scary that Angelus is still out there looking. I was touched by Buffy's caring and concern when she realized that Drusilla was dust. She has a lot to learn about being a vampire, but she seems willing now that she has the right teacher. Her various realizations in her own mind were excellent. I look forward to the next update eagerly. |
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| Opal | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:23 pm |
| Love how you worked the Yoda comment in!
Nice update.
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| Steph | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:23 pm |
| Damn, I wish I had minions..then maybe they'd clean my house.... |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:23 pm |
| Well it is good to see the new "family" making it. And by that I mean both sets. Giles and compay along with Spike and Buffy's group. WOnder what Angel will try to do first?? Can't wait to find out. |
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:22 pm |
| Had two chapters to catch up with. Still loving it. Poor Xander! But so nice to see him be a hero for a change! |
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:22 pm |
| Excellent cahppie!!!! Can't wait for more. |
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| Steph | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:21 pm |
| This story is so cool...great writing! |
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| Spike_spetslayer | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:21 pm |
| Very, very good fic--I love how sensitive and tender Spike is with Buffy. Awesome! Please, write more soon! |
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| demonica mills | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:21 pm |
| Wow! This story is amazing. I've read this storyline before, but yours is by far the most original and intriguing. I love that you have Joyce helping out, and Willow's discovering of her magic skills. I'm anxious to find out if Xander is okay, and to see what happens next between Spike and Buffy. Keep up the good work, and I look foward to reading your next chapter |
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| Opal | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:20 pm |
| Great update, I like that Spike showed restraint with his arousal to Buffy, it fits in very well with the story line. |
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| bloodshedbaby | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:20 pm |
| Testing the review form... Oh, and this fic freakin' ROCKS! |
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:19 pm |
| Awww, I loved how Spike was acting all sweet to his new childe. That was so great, I can see he and Buffy are going to havve a great relationship *I hope* Ca't wait till you write more. |
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| ~*~Tahsa~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:19 pm |
| FABULOUS chapter. {beams} This was a nice awakening for Buffy or rather reawakening. It is like a renewal to her. She has a new Sire, new teachings, and a tender touch has replaced the cruelty of Angelus. I enjoyed all of their intereaction. Spike is really trying to think of her needs. I like how you handled Spike's feelings on Dru's dusting. Nicely done. I look forward to the next update. |
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| Erin | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:19 pm |
| Excellent chapter! This fic is awesome. More soon please. |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:18 pm |
| It's nice to see Buffy progressing nicely. I wonder what Angelus will do next! |
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| Tam | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:18 pm |
| hot damn am i glad i got caught up on this one! incredible fic! two thumbs way the heck up! |
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| Esther | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:17 pm |
| Hot dog...that was freaking awesome!!! I knew the end of Angelus couldn't have been that quickly, but I wasn't expecting Dru to be killed so soon....especially by Joyce, so that just ROCKED!!! Go Joyce!!! I totally loved the action, drama, and the end....more soon?!!! |
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| Opal | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:17 pm |
| Wondeful Update! Buffy woke up warm...you must have a little trick up your sleeve.
Great Job! |
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:17 pm |
| This was another wonderful addition. Love the damage-bound Scoobies, including Joyce. Poor Xander! Nice to have a story in which he gets to be a hero. More soon, please! |
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| Steph | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:16 pm |
| So can't wait for more interaction with buffy and spike....very good! |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:16 pm |
| The anger! The mayhem! Even Joyce kicking butt! I liked it. |
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:16 pm |
| Great action, I really loved this chappie!!! Can't wait till you write more. ;) |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:15 pm |
| {bounces in her seat} Dru is gone ... Angelus is pissed ... Buffy woke up in Spike's arms. Sounds good to me. I like how Buffy woke up. The fact that Joyce dusted Drusilla was poetic. I wonder how Spike felt when he felt Dru dust? he knew the Scoobies were coming to the mansion. I wonder where Angelus is hold up with his minions. They aren't going to find the Desoto where Spike is. He's too smart for that. {grins} I can't wait for the next update. |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:15 pm |
| Great update. I just hope that all of the work they put into getting the house will keep Angelous at bay for a while. he is going to be on a war path when he finds out Dru is dust. GLad to see the group working together. Hope Xander is going to be just fine. Scary Willow... all of this in one chatper. Can't wait for more. |
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| desertrose | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:15 pm |
| Wow! What a tale! There is so much to the whole thing. Amazing job. |
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| Steph | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:14 pm |
| That has to be one of the scariest chapters I've read.....yikes.....I hope Angelus death is just as grusome, bastard. |
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| Judy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:14 pm |
| Great story. Can't wait for the next update. Just make sure Spike and Buffy really hurt Angel and Dru, lots. |
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| vladt | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:13 pm |
| dark,brutal, bloody and loving. very difficult mix to care off. great job. thanks |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:13 pm |
| Great update hon!
That torture, rape & mayhem was quite descriptive - so glad that Buffy didn't succumb. Nice how Spike didn't drink from that boy. The renouncing of the Sire claim on Buffy - I'm not I've read of that before - where the marks open at the power of the words, but very powerful imagery.
I love how Spike has now 'sired' Buffy & that they group have left for their new home.
Looking forward to your next update.
P.S. I'm so glad you are delighted with the banner. |
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| sue | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:13 pm |
| an excellent story - blood-curdling, but becoming heart-warming .... |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:12 pm |
| That had to be a hard as hell chapter to write. Wow. You stated from the beginning that this would be a dark fiction with plenty of warnings. I actually feel bad for you writing it too. That had to be pretty gut wrenching.
Content completely aside ... you wrote this chapter very well. I was happy to see Spike claim the "orphan" Buffy for his Childe now. Hopefully the two of them can heal together now. I look towards your next update. |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:12 pm |
| Sweet ending to a horrific night. I look forward to your updates. |
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| s.p. hudson | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:11 pm |
| Oh, thank God they finally got away from the mansion!! I just don't think I can take anymore like that. Can there now be extreme pain, humiliation, slow, excruciating torture that lasts for years before finally getting bored and diembowling Angelus before dusting him? I'm thinking the same treatment of Dru is in order! |
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| romero | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:11 pm |
| Great update. Can't wait to see Spike and Buffy relate as sire and childe. |
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:11 pm |
| That was so sweet how she reconized that he wanted her *sigh* Oooo I hope Angelus gets his, eventhough I like Angelus but still,lol.
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| GoldenBuffy | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:11 pm |
| WOW, I really like this story. Dark and intresting, can't wait for your next update. |
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| Opal | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:10 pm |
| Great update!
They're almost free...I can't wait. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:09 pm |
| Ugh ... so close ... so close ... please update again soon. {whimpers} Need to get Buffy out of there. Need to keep her from being dusted by Angelus or the Scoobies. {whimpers again} Please update soon. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:09 pm |
| Thank you for updating -
damn that chain! but Go Buffy for the lamp bashing. |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:08 pm |
| Dang! So close but yet so far! I really feel sorry for her and I wonder what Spike has in mind for her. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:07 pm |
| Oh boy ... Angelus is such a sadistic bastard. Good chapter update. You are really writing this type of fiction well.
Looks like plans are moving along for Spike and such. I hope that they can get Buffy out of there before Angelus dusts her tonight or the next night.
Please update again soon. |
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| Aisling | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:07 pm |
luved the update huni/... cant wait till Angelus gets his!  *evil grin* cya huni xxx. |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:06 pm |
| That was a horrid little scene for Buffy and Spike. I anxiously await the time that Angelus gets his butt kicked and Dru gets locked in a closet somewhere. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:06 pm |
| Angelus is just moving right along with his day to day plan. Nice to see Joyce getting all trained up. I just hope taht Spike can protect Buffy from being dusted by her friends. |
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| Erin | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:06 pm |
| Excellent chapter! More soon please. |
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| Bloodshedbaby | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:05 pm |
| Oh wow! This chapter was intense! But god, I just loved the small bit of comfort Spike was able to give Buffy. I love the little 'family' you are creating here. PLEASE update soon!!! |
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| s.p. hudson | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:05 pm |
| He's such a bastard! Here's hoping Buffy finds a way out of the chains soon! More, soon. Please? |
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| Aisling | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:05 pm |
more soon please... damn those chains i was hoping she'd escape right to Spike LOL  more soon huni cant wait xx |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:04 pm |
| What an evil twisted thing Angelus is. Very accurate. ;) |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:04 pm |
| Still moving along strong. Look forward to the next chapter. |
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| bubble_blunder | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:03 pm |
| I love it! I can't wait to see the next update! It's so dark and cold that it's scary, but I loved reading it, and I could really see it playing out in my mind. It seems so un-forced. Keep up the great work! And please update soon! |
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| Burnz | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:03 pm |
| Good fic. I am interested to see where you will take the three camps Giles/Spike/Angelus, and what that will mean for Buffy. |
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| s.p. hudson | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:02 pm |
| Dark. Sinister. Chilling to the point where you're almost afraid to keep going. Damn good update! Keep up the good job! |
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| Aisling | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:02 pm |
| awww... i hope she goes with Spike soon cya huni xxx |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:01 pm |
| Definitely a dark tale. You have all the proper warnings though. So no one can blame you when they read it. I know that I personally watch to see what my mood is before I read. I know it will be dark, rape like, abusive, etc. So, I make sure I can handle it.
That being said, you are writing it very well. You are capturing the essence and characterization of what these things would be IRL. I truly hope that you are not being able to pull from experience to write this. Pain and pleasure can go together for some people, but abuse and rape are a whole nother deal. Buffy isn't willing here. That makes it abuse and rape. If she was willing, that would be different.
In any case, you are a talented writer, and you are tackling some very hard topics. I also enjoy the sidebar with Spike and his 4 loyal minions. I hope that Buffy does fight Angelus within herself and lures him into a false sense of dominance. I hope that Buffy and Spike end up together. I guess we all just have to wait and see what you have for us next. |
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| romero | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:00 pm |
| I love it! Please update soon. |
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| pip | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 06:00 pm |
| wow, really dark story. I love it! update soon!!! |
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| Aisling | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:59 pm |
| wow! great update.. oh poor Buffy! |
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| s.p. hudson | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:59 pm |
| Very nicely written. Just the right balance of fear and grief in Giles', Joyce's and the Scoobies reactions to the situation. Dawning horror for Buffy in the knowledge of what she has now become. Well crafted sense of foreboding for what may happen next. Wonderful update! |
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| Aisling | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:58 pm |
| oooh! i likey, i lovey more soon cya xx |
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| s.p. hudson | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:58 pm |
| Splendid beginning. You've definitely nailed the character of Angelus in all his sadistic glory. Can't wait to see where you're going with this. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:57 pm |
| In the immortal words of Oliver Twist: "Please sir, I want some more." (and soon might I add).
This is wonderfully, deliciously dark! Thank you for submitting this treat. |
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| 3988Akasha | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:57 pm |
| Damn! Totally lovin' this fic. It's way dark. I really want to see Angelus get his, cocky bastard! Update soon! |
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| Jen | Chapter 18 | 09/29/2005 05:56 pm |
| Sounds good so far! I hope there is spuffy romance and buffy/giles friendship |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 17 | 02/18/2006 10:35 am |
| excllant plan - I really hope they dust him. he so deserves it. I love this fic by the way! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 16 | 02/18/2006 10:28 am |
| OMG! What an evil place to live off - thank goodness I know there is more. Excellant fic - I feel so sorry for Spike wanting to know who dusted Joyce - poor spikey. Sigh happy sigh - love this ficcie~ |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 15 | 02/18/2006 10:23 am |
| Thank you again for the excallant chappie! I want to hurt giles just a little ... maybe one broken finger.. just one... LOL - great chappie as always looking forward to the next! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 14 | 02/18/2006 10:18 am |
| AHHHH - I hope Giles listens to her - Angelus is a genius at his cruelty sometimes! great update |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 13 | 02/18/2006 10:03 am |
| AHHH me love - fans self fabalicious chapter sweetie - it was freaking amazing! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 12 | 02/18/2006 10:00 am |
Angelus is the king of pychological torture - well done. What an *ss.
The scene with Buffy was excellant. Her taking control of the siuation and making her own decisions,knowing she wanted him! Well done! Fab fab ficcie |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 11 | 02/18/2006 09:55 am |
| Wonderful sweet chapter I like Morrie and Alexa they are great characters. I love Buffy as a vampire...so unsure of herself, and her place in this world. I really like this story! great job! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 10 | 02/18/2006 09:50 am |
| Wonderful chappie my dear. Poor angelus ;osy all his toys. Hopefully his life will follow. Can I mention again how I never want the scoobies to rescue me ... bloodthirsty lot. Excellant chappie thank you very much! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 9 | 02/18/2006 09:45 am |
| Is it wrong to feel sorry for Dru? She is such a child and now she is gone. I cant wait to read everyone's reactions! Brilliant chapter! |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter 9 | 09/30/2005 08:59 pm |
| Another lovely chapter |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 8 | 02/18/2006 09:42 am |
What a cruel and sadistic bastard angelus is. I despise the vamp and wish him dust. The cruelty you have him showing is extremyl well writtern and the charactrization excellant.
Wow I just loved the orphen scene where he took Buffy as his own childe. *sniff* excellant |
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| Chanel 5 | Chapter 8 | 09/30/2005 08:53 pm |
| I have to be honest and say I've skipped a few chapters, I can't stand Angelus and torture is a bit much for me. However, I loved this chapter and its calm, and I hope things get better for Buffy now. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 7 | 02/18/2006 06:52 am |
| Have I mentioned I like the minions! They are nice minions! Can I have minions? I also like your half-demon half -human, I can't wait to see what happens when everyone acts on thier plans tommorrow. Great update and chappie! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 6 | 02/18/2006 06:38 am |
| That was just mean and cruel of him - how fitting. I am going to enjoy it when Anelus dies. I loved how she asked to be with Spike. Silly girl - she should have known that this was all a game to Angelus. Great update! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 5 | 02/18/2006 06:33 am |
| Wow - Joyce and Giles are rather calcuating - kill Buffy - put her out of her misery - um perhaps you should ask her if she wants to die. Note to self, never hope to be rescued by the Scooby gang! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 4 | 02/18/2006 05:52 am |
| excellant chapter - I love how he is planning her destction - knowing that if he makes her retreat he will lose his game. Killing her with kindness takes on a whole new meaning for the poor girl. Excellant story! I am enjoying this very much! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 3 | 02/17/2006 10:35 pm |
| I loved the sadistic Angelus where he refuses to let her cry or scream without permission. I love the portrayl of spike that you have started to create and his wonderful "family" loveley update (now I am going to bed really!) |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 2 | 02/17/2006 10:31 pm |
| Wonderful chapter! I loved Joyce's strength in this and how Giles was worried about what Angelus would do to Buffy. Really great chapter so far. I can't wait to read the rest! Why oh why is it 530 am? *pouts* well off to bed and then will finish this story in the am. I can't wait! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter 1 | 02/17/2006 10:26 pm |
| Powerful first chapter - I can't wait to see what kind of vampire Buffy will make - keeping her soul but being subject to Angelus will be harsh on her I am sure. Great start - I can't wait to read the rest! |
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| gaillee | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:54 pm |
| Can't wait to see how you wrap this on up...It's been really great. Like the new characters as well as Buffy, Spike, et al. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| Nail gun ... inventive. Interesting idea. Nice dusting of Angelus. {Smiles} Great chapter. Look forward to the next. |
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| Lou | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| The nail gun was an interesting variation. Good strong Buffy too. Love this story. |
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| Confused Muse | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:53 pm |
| Superb, a direct hit to the tongue to shut Angelus up - thank the lord!
Poor Spike - he always seems to be getting tortured, but hey, he's tough. |
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| vladt | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| great story. love the update. thanks. looking forward to to the finale chapter (not!) |
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| Esther | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| Great chapter, and I'm so sad to see Chris get dusted...liked him. And can I say....WOOHOO on that Angelus death scene....hot damn, if anyone deserved to get nailed through the neck w/that nail gun, it's him. Poor Spikey, wanted to cry when I read that about him, but Buffy got the jackass in the end. Loved it, and I'm glad that Xander didn't give her a hard time...can't wait for the final chapter...gonna miss this story. |
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| Dar | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| WOW! just WOW |
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| erika | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:52 pm |
| I was following this story on vampires-kiss.net but I was so excited when I found a more recent update on this site. I really like this story. It's very unique to me and very well written. |
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| Slaymesoftly | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| Dusty Angelus! yay! Was very worried when he grabbed Spike - but leave it to Buffy to give him his just desserts. Too bad she couldn't have tortured him for a couple of days, but, hey... |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| *18*
Angel dust! YES!! I'm quoting the A-Team when I say "I love it when a plan comes together!" (Molotov coctails - yeah, boy.)
I'm going to miss Chris. Nice reunion scene b/t Xander and Buffy. |
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| MarzBar | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:51 pm |
| YAY!! Angelus is dust, and Buffy did it!! Waiting for the last chapter. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| *up to 17*
I LOVE ALEXA!!!! I really like how you are incorporating the minions with the Scoobs. |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| Great update. of course Giles would be in the way and I am glad Joyce is putting a stop to him. Loved the update. It is grea to see htem all working together. |
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| Opal | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:50 pm |
| Great update Linda...
Like everyone else has said...similarities are bound to happen...I for one didn't even notice! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:49 pm |
| I think it was a great chapter. I like this story. You've had me on the edge of my seat many times throughout the course of it.
I think that similarities are bound to happen, especially with the friendships that are forged between some of the writers. Heck we do all get similar or seemingly same ideas at times, but that doesn't mean we are copying each other. You have your own twist of words, and I say that you shouldn't ever have to worry about other people's story ideas. You have a great creative mind. People should remember that and just realize that similar ideas pop up.
Look forward to the next update. |
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| Spikeschilde | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:49 pm |
| Fantastic update! I’m looking forward to some good old Angel ass kicking
Lol, and I didn’t even notice the similarities to my story until I read you author’s notes at the end ^_~ It’s definitely your own story
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| Esther | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Great update!!! Like the forced comraderie and the hilarious chat w/Alexa, Willow, and Cordy about minions. Seems Giles hasn't changed, but maybe Joyce will have a hand at helping. Loving the chapter and story. Can't wait for more!!! |
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| Rae | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Fantastic update! Will be waiting for more. |
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| Steph | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| Please make angelus' death grumsome, thankyou! |
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| Shadowed Sword | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:48 pm |
| *bounce* GREAT story, Fantastic Chapter! Cant wait till Angelus gets his poofter arse kicked! |
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| Onyx | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:47 pm |
| Ok, SERIOUSLY
leaving us hanging like this in not nice! but I love you for it anyway. Great new chapter, I love all your characterizations, and you definitely deserved to be nominated. Can't wait for the next installment. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:47 pm |
| *chapter 16*
congrats on the nods honey! Well deserved.
Great chapter -- love that Cordelia critiquing Spike on the fashion - that's our Cordy.
Nice to see you keep the genuine feelings Cordy had for Xander. LOVED the Oz/Spike predator size up. I LOVE OZ.. but you already know that.
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| daisy | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| you are evil. you can't just leave it there. i hope all of spikes minions are okay. more soon please. awsome story. |
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| Judy | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| This story just gets better and better. Great job.
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| Esther | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| Hot damn, I loved that update!!! It's nice to see the Scoobies' POVs and find out their reactions to everything. Oh the ending....poor Spikey....I felt for him with the Dru question. (and I couldn't help but laugh at what Cordy told him....love the look, but that was Classic Queen C) Oh the cliffy....I'm gonna be hoping for more soon. |
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| Opal | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:46 pm |
| Great update! |
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| Francesca | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Well that was a good... almost happy chapter. I like the accepting Scoobies and the not such a prat Giles. Nice change. I hope Xander will be ok. I really do like Cordy and Xander together in this. |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Amazing chapter but you're EVIL leaving it that way!! C'mon, hurry and update again ASAP!! Anyways, this chapter was awesome, did I mention that? I loved the reunion with the Scoobies and I especially liked the part with Oz and Spike. I've always believed those two would get along well. Hmmm...wonder how you'll have Xander take the news about Buffy and Spike being together. Hopefully his new more grown-up outlook will help him see past his hatred of the undead. CANNOT WAIT for the next chapter. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:45 pm |
| Okay now that was an evil cliffhanger of cliffhangers. Who screamed outside ... hope that was Spike's minions doing the crossbow firing and not something heading inside to Buffy.
You handled all of the character's emotions and characterizations very well. I enjoyed the chapter. Nice tie ins all around.
Look forward to the next update. |
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| Oracleholly | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:44 pm |
| *all caught up to chap 15*
Yay! With Buffy standing up for herself with Giles. Since the tape was obviously doctored, Giles should have been suspicious of it, but instead he let that Watcher mentality take over. Bad Giles.
I LOVE ALEXA!!!
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| sissy | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:44 pm |
| I have been reading this fic all night, I absolutely love it so far, well except for most ot the stuff with Angelus. I am not really into the gore I suppose. I love how Spike is so sweet with Buffy. I also love the way she stood up for herself with Giles,and that Joyce still loves her. and that she has her soul, you have a great fic here. i cant wait for more!
sissy |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:43 pm |
| Excellent writing, Comedy. Loved this chapter update and the others. Good to see Buffy sticking up to Giles. I'm glad that she told Giles her side of the story too. I wish I could be a fly on the wall when Joyce gets Giles into the car. She's going to rip him a new one.
Look forward to the next update. |
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| Onyx | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:43 pm |
| I just read the bulk of this story a few days ago, and I must say the new chapter is spectacular! I love this story with a PASSION! Everything about it is so enchanting, including the few original characters. |
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| Opal | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:42 pm |
| Awesome update. I like how Buffy gave it to Giles good! Looking forward to the next update. |
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| slinkypsychokit | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:41 pm |
| Great chapter! Can't wait to see what happens once the Scoobies see the new Buffy! Especially after her take-no-BS-attitude towards Giles! And, Go JOYCE!! Yay for the maternal intuition! |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:41 pm |
| I am glad that finally Giles got a taste of the new Buffy and can see where her loyalty lie. And I am glad that Joyce seems to be in her corner. And how great was it to see the rest of the new Spike/Buffy family taking part even from a distance. Love the update. |
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| vladt | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:40 pm |
| great update. love the story. thanks. but do not warn of the soon to come ending, just do it. then listen to we readers whine, cry and plead for more. |
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| Isabella | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:40 pm |
| I have eagerly waited for every chapter of this fiction. I love the story. But what do you mean, just a few more chapters? Do you think there will be a sequel? Hey I see spinoff here. However, you are the writer, I'm just the eager reader. thank you for the great fiction.
Isabella |
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| PyroChilde | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:39 pm |
That was EVIL leaving it like that!!! > But still an awesome chapter. It figures Giles would assume the worst. I mean he admits that Angelus had to have forced her into killing that child and yet he's still prepared to stake her just because he thinks she should have left him to die at another's hands so that her's stayed clean. He knows how cruel Angelus is and that he would have made sure that little boy died slowly and painfully. He really needs a wake up call here!! I can't wait for the next fic, I LOVE IT!! |
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| Kat | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:39 pm |
| Amazing chapter but I do seriously hope that Giles gets a wake up call because to be perfectly honest his thinking is sooooooo unfair. And I actually usually like Giles. HMMM |
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| Esther | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
| Loved it!! Nice to see the other characters highlight some sections...makes them become a real part of the story...and I just adore Alexa...so sweet of her to help Buffy 'entertain' Spike...hot damn!
Oh, the Spuffy was really cute, and I love how domesticated they are already...
Nice to know some stuff about Angelus' whereabouts and what he's doing...gets them prepared for the foreheaded git...hehe...
Oh man, was wondering about that tape, and now I know....can't believe Giles would actually think that Buffy would willingly kill a child while souled...he really doesn't know her, does he?
Cliffy...oh what a cliffy....can't wait for the next one!! |
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| Karyn900 | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
| I'd say it sucks to be Buffy right about now. I knew Giles would never see that she was trying to save the boy from a worse fate. Great update though, i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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| vladt | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:38 pm |
| thanks for the great update. will be a long week. |
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| Rhonda | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
| I just hope that Giles will listen to what Buffy has to say about the tape. And GLAD that Buffy and Spike are showing a bonded force. Great update. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
| I was afraid that Giles wouldn't understand. Of course Angelus didn't show the whole rest of it where he killed all the rest, and Buffy was saving the child from a longer and more painful death. {Sighs}
Sucks that you are going away and we won't get an update until your back. I so want to see Angelus get his just deserves. I hope that Buffy can convince Giles of what really happened. |
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| Burnz | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:37 pm |
| No way I could hate you. So they come together. Nice bit of Spuffiness. |
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| Opal | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:36 pm |
| YUM! |
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| Verona | Chapter 1 | 09/29/2005 06:36 pm |
| Very very pleased with this story. Very entertaining and not too long. Nice to show the tender side of Spike. I also like how you had Joyce get vengeful. Altogether well written. |
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| megs | Chapter 1 | 09/28/2005 08:38 pm |
| More? Please? please? plllllease? |
| It's coming. Really. The beta has it. |
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