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| Just a Teenage Crush by Addie Logan |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Seven | 05/03/2006 06:53 pm |
| Beautiful way to end this fic. A very good fic all around. The right amount of angst, love, snark, comedy, romance, and sex. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Seven | 02/08/2006 02:09 pm |
1) go Buffy - loved the tackeling
2) Nice bite *grin*
3) Sigh happy sappy ending - Me Like! |
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| MarzBar | Chapter Seven | 11/26/2005 10:10 am |
| This was a fun and fluffy story. Little angst was spicy. Love your stories. |
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| TammyDevil666 | Chapter Seven | 09/26/2005 12:50 am |
| This was a really cute story. I'm glad everything worked out for them. Thanks for the great read=) |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Six | 05/03/2006 06:46 pm |
It tore me to pieces .. the first part of this chapter. My heart just lurched and ached for Spike and Buffy. I wanted to cry when she woke up with her memories. You wrote this all so well.
Nice to see Xander grow up a little bit there for a few moments when he showed up at Buffy's door. Not good that Spike looks ot be packing up and leaving town. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Six | 02/08/2006 02:05 pm |
1) Sniff poor buffy - but seriously get over yourself - you can be with a vampire (of course since this is happy spuffy I am sure she will reailze that soon)
2) Ouch I LOVED the line about not having respect for killers and the come back about Anya
3) go Xander! Nice of him to finally give her a break. |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Five | 05/03/2006 06:38 pm |
| Uh oh ... Andrew crushed the crystal. Everything was going so well for Buffy and Spike too. Her thoughts about this being the fresh start they needed, and now all her memories will be back and ... {sighs softly} My poor Spike and Buffy. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Five | 02/08/2006 02:00 pm |
| 1) I love the wonderful scene - getting to relive her first time, which like normal sucked - she has spike to make new memories - happy sigh! loved this chapter! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Four | 05/03/2006 06:30 pm |
| She's so hopeful when she has amnesia. Pretty sad that it takes amnesia for her to let all her preconceived notions go long enough to let her feelings show. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Four | 02/08/2006 01:48 pm |
1) LMAO - "Buffy throwing a jealous fit over his feelings for, well, Buffy. kay that was a funny line!"
2) I adoreed the Dawn scenes - new favorite line - "Dawn hugged her. "You are like the coolest amnesiac sister ever."
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Three | 05/03/2006 06:22 pm |
| I get so choked up and tearful when I think about how much this would actually be torturing Spike. To have her this close but know that she really won't want him later. That had to be a killer ... more than the hateful words he used to get from her. Very well written. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Three | 02/08/2006 01:43 pm |
1) I adored Buffy creeping into his crypt! It was adorable!
2) I loved how she didn't care much for Xander - giggles lovely my dear lovely! I really hate Xander sometimes and you managed to capture exactly the reason why. *coughjudgmentalprickcough*
3) Love Spike's honesty and the whole exchange about being his girl - wonderful sweet!
4) I loved this chapter - full of humor and sweetness!
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter Two | 05/03/2006 06:13 pm |
| This Buffy is hilarious. She's a total riot. Her whole valley girl L.A., gum snapping self. LOL. |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter Two | 02/08/2006 12:26 pm |
1) hehe smart tara - bad willow
2) I love how Buffy is flirting with spike - she was smart as a 15 year old!
3) I can just Buffy doing the I can totally be intemidating with a hair flip and girly voice - LOL good scene there
4) I love this Buffy - so happy and carefree. Wonderful to see! |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | Chapter One | 05/03/2006 06:07 pm |
| Willow is an arrogant idiot who always thought that her way was the best way ... magic. No nothing can go wrong when she does magic. {rolls her eyes} Everything goes wrong almost every time. Loved the start of this one. |
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| Nikkole | Chapter One | 03/22/2006 05:25 pm |
| Very nice beginning! I know this story is already done, I am trying not to start any more WIPs. I get flustered when I have to wait to long! LOL! |
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| Athenewolfe | Chapter One | 02/08/2006 12:13 pm |
1) "She was merely putting the finishing touches on resurrecting Buffy—something she should've done at the very beginning."
Can I just say I think Willow is the most arrogant creature alive at the moment. Her use of magick *shakes head* Love your portrayal of her - it was spot on!
2) I love her mood swings - first kidnapper - then don't leave me - so Buffy!
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" Buffy turned. Someone else knew her name? It was a conspiracy. She knew it. " Oh yeah that is the buff we no and love!
great incorperation and usage of season six elements - willow's magic useage and the nerd trio...
I am enjoying this very much! |
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