Tempered By Time by Peyton
Chapter: Chapter One - Frustrated, Helpless and Alone
 
jl198005/25/2006 12:47 am
very good insight into the feelings of the characters going into this battle...looking forward to where you take this
Confused Muse10/26/2005 07:09 pm
Good chapter, great juxtaposiotion of Dawn's fellings and Buffy's... Only one downside - the change to present tense in the last scene kinda threw me!
Lou10/24/2005 11:25 pm
God that was painful. How our poor Spike suffers! And I fear there's worse to come. Buffy needs a smack in the kisser.
romero10/22/2005 11:10 am
Thanks for a great story. Please update soon!
spike_spetslayer10/18/2005 12:49 am
OMG, you're evil! you can't just leave it there! More, Please!
I'll try to have more by the end of the week.
jane10/17/2005 08:00 pm
Oh bloody hell things don't look good. I was a bit pissed off by Buffys' blase attitude to Spikes' disappearance. Now she knows the truth I hope she can make it right.
Great! You were supposed to be pissed off! %^> Thanks!
ComedyofErrors09/29/2005 07:20 am
Saving the world with superglue. Good line. Like to see more.
Thank you. It's what I was screaming at the screen during The Gift when Buffy took her very eager jump so I guess it's not surprising it grew into a plot bunny.