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| Hidden Agendas by angelic_amy | | Chapter: Déjà Vu. | | | | JenxGeR | 01/16/2006 02:56 pm | Nice fight scenes. No long descriptions of right hook, uppercut, blah blah. Just great general actions that brought the scenes forward that kept me reading.  | | Thanks! I wanted the fight scenes to be fast moving, and too much description can sometimes slow them down. I'm glad you liked how they were written! |
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