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| Origins by Niamh |
| Chapter: Part 4 |
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| Verda | 06/29/2006 12:32 am |
| Emotionally draining chapters and this was your first attempt at fanfiction, it's incredible. Your easy and insight with these characters is unbelievable. I'm so glad that you decided to buy S5. You are a definte asset to the Buffyverse and Spuffy. |
| Athenewolfe | 06/27/2006 06:30 pm |
Chapter 15 - Very nice chapter! I liked the "i knew one of us wouldn't make it line"
Chapter 16 - Nice dramatic entrence of Buffy :-)
Chapter 17 - *shakes head* and she just thought there would be no consequences. How foolish could she be? Excellant excellant chapters and great story so far! |
| Athenewolfe | 06/27/2006 06:21 pm |
Chapter 13 - The scene with Dawn and Spike was poigant. Her wanting to see her sister, Spike unsure how to tell her how broken Buffy appeared. Really excellant writing! I love your style so much!
Chapter 14 - I loved how you had Giles turn right around and fly back. Flagging someone and telling them that his daughter had been in an accident was brilliant! |