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| Origins by Niamh |
| Chapter: Part 7 |
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| Verda | 06/29/2006 04:45 am |
| I haven't yet thanked you for all the wonderful passages, poems and lyrics you've given us to enjoy as well as the wonderful story that's unfolding before our very eyes. I had thought that prehaps the hounds were after Willow since she opened the portal with nothing to offer as a trade, but since she was in the general vicinity as Dawn and they didn't attack, guess I was mistaken. Now you've got me guessing. |
| Athenewolfe | 06/28/2006 03:23 pm |
Chapter 31 - Very good chapter loved the Giles interaction and general acceptance. Poor Buffy just being all avoidy girl.
Chapter 32 - I really love how you developed Giles and he what he said about trust. Very nicely done!
Chapter 33 - Great chapter - I loved the Huntsmen trying to talk to the Key! Such a fab story! |
| Athenewolfe | 06/28/2006 01:33 pm |
Chapter 29 - The Willow cooking breakfest aka micky mouse style was excellant... I loved that! It was perfect. Xander of course doesn't notice anything and even more of course is overreatcing to what he does see. What a jerk!
chapter 30 - Oh what a wonderful emptional chapter. My stomach is tied up into knots after reading that - excellant excellant job. I loved it - xander is being an utter jerk and then thier fight. It was a breathtakign scene. |
| Athenewolfe | 06/28/2006 12:36 pm |
Chapter 27 - Lovely chapter - I feel sorry for tara who doesn't want to go to her own bed because of Willow. happy that she knows there is a difference between her "just wanting to help" and Willow's version!
Chapter 28 - Willow is scaruly delicious. I absolutly adore your version of her so much potential! *evil wicked grin* Great chapter, I love the emtoional responses of Spike in this - great writing! |
