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| The Call by Mefiant |
| Chapter: Prologue |
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| Robyn | 07/03/2006 12:37 pm |
| I love the premise of this, it sounds very interesting. I also like how well you showed Dawn's grief by being somewhat abstract. |
| jl1980 | 05/26/2006 12:10 am |
fascinating beginning...really drew me in immediately...off to read more  |
| katakata | 12/05/2005 01:18 pm |
| Gosh what a thoroughly original premise! Loving it - while certainly optimistic it's not completely fluffy and your set up in the opening chapters was fantastic. I'm particularly interested in what disasters Dawn and Spike may still want to try and avert and what the cost to them will be. Oh and if Buffy were to discover what they've done I wonder what her reaction would be...gratitude for all they've risked and sacrificed? Disappointment that they flipped the 'natural' order of things on its head? Awe that they would change the world for her? Anger at their seeming manipulation? Or maybe a combination of all these things...honestly it's gonna have me up thinking about it until you next update. Help me avoid the insomnia and update soon please :-D |
| jane | 10/07/2005 01:49 pm |
| I really rate this story can't wait for the next update. |
| slinkypsychokit | 10/04/2005 08:12 am |
| Excellent! Just four chapters in and I'm hooked already! More, please?!? |
| Chanel 5 | 10/03/2005 04:22 am |
| I really liked this. who knows what would have happened if buffy hadn't died, I'd like to think this is entirely probable |
| maryperk | 10/03/2005 02:53 am |
| Looks like a great story!!!! |
