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| Freedom by icemink |
| Chapter: 1 (chapters 1-10) |
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| Athenewolfe | 06/04/2006 09:14 am |
Chapter Six - The ice cream and chips were great - they did a good job brainwashing her didn't they?
Chapter Seven
I love this update - the girl and the ever present madness - really great story - I feel so sorrt for Buffy.
Chapter Eight - WOW - just WOW!
Chapter Nine - Can I kill Ms. Post - just a slow death - that is all - really *Growls*
Chapter ten- Oh no what is going on? Looks concerned... runs to next chapter! |
| Athenewolfe | 06/04/2006 08:41 am |
| Chapter four was lovely - i like the interaction and this alternate world that they are in. I noticed a slight typo - "She wasn't supposed to admit she was scarred" scarred instead of scared" but it didn't distract thought you might want to know - really lovely story so far! |
| Athenewolfe | 06/04/2006 08:36 am |
Chapter two was powerfully written - I love the set up, the despration, the madness that is seeping in. Chills running up and down my arms as I sprint for the next chapter!
Chapter three - I love the faint edge of madness to Buffy - very nicely done. i loved the line thought you would be tired. Great update! |
| Athenewolfe | 06/04/2006 08:27 am |
My computer keeps crashing so i will probably leave multiple reviews - I enjoyed chapter one and the killing of Lydia - poor Lydia but i think she enjoyed it. Vry intrigiunging beginning and can't wait to see what happens next!
*hugs* |
| fallen_angel | 05/10/2006 06:08 am |
| wow! This story is so good! |
| gaillee | 10/28/2005 08:48 am |
| Wow!!! I absolutely love this story. the interaction between Spike and Buffy is stupendously funny in the last chapter.
I am really looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for a lot of fun! |
| jane | 10/26/2005 11:27 pm |
| I was expecting Buffy to have more trouble controlling her demon, but she seems to be a strong childe. I can't wait to see where Spikes taken her. |
| Rider | 10/21/2005 09:40 pm |
| Really liked the story but,,,, NASTY cruel liffhanger end to the last chapter. PLEASE continue!!! |
