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| The Right Thing by jl1980 |
| Chapter: 9 |
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| WendyJane | 11/01/2005 12:14 pm |
| Man- you gotta hate this Riley. Love this story tho- and I like Darian's character too. |
| slaymesoftly | 10/15/2005 04:48 pm |
| Just spent some time catching up with the chapters I'd been missing on this story and now I'm hooked! Wonderful plotline - can't wait to see how/when Buffy brings them down (she IS going to bring them down, I hope? Tell me now if this is going to a really dark place!) Will be watching for updates. |
Oh don't worry, they're coming down all right...Mr. Finn in particular lol |
| Esther | 10/15/2005 09:56 am |
| My goodness, just read all 9 chapters because there was no way to stop. Very intriguing twist on S5, and (I say this with sincerity) never have I HATED Riley Finn so much in my existence. Hot damn, you've brought an evil out of him that amazes me, yet terrifies me for how well *in character* it is. Damn, just wanna kill the jerk for doing those things to poor Diana....poor Spike, so glad he was able to hear Buffy and agree to help. Oh, can't wait for more of this cause I'm totally in awe of this story. |
Awww...that is one of the nicest reviews I've ever gotten...thanx!! glad you're enjoying it and glad i can spread Riley-hatage everywhere hehehe lol |
| spike_spetslayer | 10/15/2005 04:31 am |
| Awesome update. Excellent chappies. Great Evil Riley. Wonderfully sinfully wicked General Whore-dova. Need more, soon, please! |
Thanks for your review; helps to know i'm doing the general right cause original villains are hard *whew* lol glad you're enjoyin it |
| redwulf50 | 10/14/2005 10:40 pm |
| God can we kill Finn soon?? |
patience, friend, patience...all in good time  |
| MarzBar | 10/14/2005 06:09 pm |
| OMG! It's not possible for me to put into words what I feel about Captain Cardbored and his friends. No torture Spike could inflict would be too horrible. I wish Buffy would get over her stupid deal about humans being all superior because they supposedly have souls. She could have been best friends with Hitler. More story please. |
| Chanel 5 | 10/14/2005 11:13 am |
| another great chapter! |
| Always_jbj | 10/14/2005 09:54 am |
| I love Darian you just want to cuddle him! Poor thing.
Riley Finn really needs to pay!! Pain.. LOTS of pain... and that horrible General too!
I am really enjoying this fic. Thank you! |
| bloodshedbaby | 10/14/2005 09:39 am |
| OOOH! This is a total Riley shitlist fic! You have him such an asshoe in this, I think there will be mucho cheering when they make him feel some pain. Can't wait to find out how they're going to take the initiative down! |
| SpaceLord | 10/14/2005 08:52 am |
| Slowly getting there, really like it and can't wait to continue reading this story. |