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| Re-write of Seeing Red by slaymesoftly |
| Chapter: One |
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| Thursday Next | 05/12/2006 02:26 pm |
| Aw. Definitely better than the actual episode. |
| :-) |
| Bridget | 10/24/2005 03:35 am |
| I loved this. If the writers on BTVS had any compassion for Buffy and Spike this is how this should have been written. It was touching, sweet and funny. |
| Aww, thank you. That's what I intended. |
| Judy | 10/22/2005 05:06 pm |
| Should have gone this way. Loved it. |
| Thanks |
| Lou | 10/17/2005 04:07 pm |
| So scrumptious and exactly how it should have gone. Thank you! |
| Thanks for reading and reviewing |
| linpen | 10/17/2005 11:59 am |
| I hated that episode so much that I even hesitated to read your rewite. I am so glad I did. |
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| linpen | 10/17/2005 08:41 am |
| I hated that episode so much that I even hesitated to read your rewite. I am so glad I did. |
| I'm glad you tried it! |
| Joyful Dayz | 10/16/2005 04:18 pm |
| You wrote, "The way I wish it had gone."--absolutely! So much better than the way it happened. You should have written the episode - I've liked all your re-writes that I've read, much better than the official versions! |
| Too bad Joss didn't consult me,huh? Thanks for the kind words. |
| jane | 10/15/2005 11:59 pm |
| I really liked that, would have been funny if Xander had turned up while they wer in the bath. |
| Ooooh, I don't think Xander would have handled that very well!!! |
| Soul of the Rose | 10/15/2005 11:05 pm |
| That was beautiful. I loved how you turned that horrible episode into something better. *Grumbles* Stupid Joss... Wonderfully written and true to character. Great exploration of their emotional states at that time - dare I say "realistic"? ;) You know what I mean... Looking forward to reading more from you. |
| Thanks! I'm glad you like my take on how it should have gone. Thanks for reading and reviewing. |
| ComedyofErrors | 10/15/2005 09:03 pm |
| Very nice. I'd like to see it continued. |
| Thanks C of E. Nice to hear from you! |
| Esther | 10/15/2005 08:31 am |
| Wow, Patti, you've managed to not make me hate those two eps so much...which is hard because 'Entropy' just KILLED me and 'SR' DEVASTATED me. Once again, you're the voice of reason in a great fic...if only this would have happened on the show instead of what really did. Thanks, sweetie!!! |
| thanks, Esther. They broke my heart too. Just couldn't leave it like that. |
| Ariel Dawn | 10/15/2005 05:33 am |
| awww, I want a Spike tub massage now... I love how you rewrote the bathroom scene. |
| Thanks, AD |
| redwulf50 | 10/15/2005 03:16 am |
| awwwww, sweet Spike, I hate it, I do, quit looking at me like that, ok I love it ok, happy?? |
| OKay, okay, I know you would have preferred him to say "I did it and I'm glad, you bitch!", but, hey that's just not Love's Bitch, is it. (The vamp has enough sense to know he's in deep shit no matter what. lol) |
| spike_spetslayer | 10/15/2005 12:57 am |
| slayme--this was bloody brilliant! Why, oh why couldn't you (and the rest of us, of course) been writing the series? This was such a traumatic episode, and you made it loving and lovely. Thank you for sharing. |
| Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked my alternate way for them to deal with this sad event. |
| vicki | 10/15/2005 12:36 am |
| That would have been the way I wanted it to end too. That was very sweet. Of course if I was Buffy I would have pulled him into bed with me.;) |
| Well, if she made really good decisions about what to do about Spike, she wouldn't be Buffy, would she? |
| MarzBar | 10/15/2005 12:11 am |
| Spike is so wonderful. Love to have a mate like that again. |
| LOl Wouldn't we all! Thanks for reading. |
| Megan | 10/15/2005 12:10 am |
| Patti, that was gorgeous and made so much more sense. I'm all for less devastation, personally! How come I haven't read this before? |
| Um, dunno. I doubt I've posted it anywhere but on my own site, although I thought I put it up on LJ when I wrote it. Maybe not. Much nicer result for our two blonds, huh? |
