Sympathy for the Devil by ComedyofErrors
Chapter: Chapter 1
 
angelic_amy03/12/2006 11:26 pm
Wow, wonderful suspense you’ve created in the beginning of this chapter with Dawn visiting Spike. Excellent observations about William from Joyce, she really is a very observant woman! And I loved that she pulled the Mom card and is making Buffy help Spike.
Pierrie03/05/2006 10:08 am
So far, I have read the two first parts of Sympathy for the Devil and I am so impressed.
You are right into the heart of the feelings.
I have read many fanfiction so far.
Several of them are very good.
But you are amongst the best.
Your insights are brilliant.
Please, keep writing
Pierrie03/05/2006 10:07 am
So far, I have read the two first parts of Sympathy for the Devil and I am so impressed.
You are right into the heart of the feelings.
I have read many fanfiction so far.
Several of them are very good.
But you are amongst the best.
Your insights are brilliant.
Please, keep writing
jl198002/21/2006 10:21 pm
i love joyce *silly grin*...i love your voices of the characters in this story...i'm especially impressed with dawn... on to the next chapter now !!
Athenewolfe02/19/2006 07:58 am
excellant chapter - I loved Joyce in this chapter - very perceptive of her on both views of her daughter and spike. I really enjoyed it and can't wait to read what happens next
Oracleholly12/04/2005 04:54 pm
Go Joyce with the insight and telling Buffy to basically stuff it (without doing so).
Bridget11/02/2005 10:15 pm
Great chapter. Joyce was very insightful about Spike. Buffy is her usual stubborn self. Can't see the forest for the trees.
Spikeschilde11/01/2005 01:51 am
Just finish reading both chapters. Fantastic start, i am hooked already Update soon please!
Kristen10/28/2005 09:27 pm
Great story so far! I love the idea of Buffy having to go into Spike's brain. Cant wait for that! Update soon!
Karyn10/28/2005 04:48 pm
oh ! very good i like this very much, can't wait to see where you take it.! ;-)
jane10/26/2005 11:51 pm
I'm definately interested so far. I loved the Joyce pov that women can do no wrong.
Steph10/26/2005 09:48 pm
I would say that this story is awesome so far , but you MUST already know that! *L* I'm teasing but seriously, it's two chapters in and you already have me hooked..I can't wait for the next chapter! I REALLY can't wait for buffy to be in spike's mind...
bloodshedbaby10/26/2005 07:00 pm
Love it!! I loved Joyce's self-reflection over William and she is so deadon too! PLEASE update soon, i am completely hooked on this fic!!
Confused Muse10/26/2005 06:59 pm
I loved Dawn and Joyce's thoughts and relationship int his fic. And poor Spike - you can really feel the loneliness. The man needs a hug!
MarzBar10/26/2005 06:44 pm
Poor Spike. His only friends are Dawn and Joyce. The rest of the people who should know better, don't know him at all and feel they don't have to lower themselves.
SpaceLord10/26/2005 05:44 pm
Great start and I love Joyce, she is always good. Hope to see the next chapter soon
Max10/26/2005 05:42 pm
I love how Joyce has Spike all figured out and is sticking up for him.
spike_spetslayer10/26/2005 05:29 pm
This is an excellent start--I've looked at this challenge more than once, thinking to do it, but couldn't find a satisfactory beginning. You've done so well, makes me glad that I didn't. Wonderful....
Pulchra Nex10/26/2005 03:56 pm
Love it! I hope you update again soon! :-D