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| Saving Grace by jl1980 |
| Chapter: No Going Back |
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| btvsfreak@yahoo.com | 03/29/2006 08:41 pm |
| Wow, great start! I can't wait to see where the story goes! |
thanx, hope you continue to like it as it goes along...  let me know what you think |
| cheysma | 01/20/2006 07:32 am |
| I just started this fic today and finished just now. It was great. I don't usually read alot of angst because the show had alot of that already, but this store pulled me in. |
| thanx so much, so glad you enjoyed it in spite of the angst |
| Judy | 01/17/2006 01:56 pm |
| I waited until this one was complete before reading it. Late, late night. Once started, I just had to finish. Great writing, you do the emotion so well. Looking forward to your next one. |
| glad you liked it, thanx for great review |
| Nikkole | 12/04/2005 06:17 am |
| I found this story this morning, and just couldn't stop reading until I was done! I just wanted to say (I am sure it has been said to you before), I think that you wrote about the aftermath of the AR very well. Both blaming themselves. Most authors wouls prefer to skip right to the forgiving, but you wrote about working UP TO the forgiving, which is more realistic. I love Dawn in this story, and I have to say, I am mixed about Xander. He pisses me off most of the time, and I can see him doing what he did to Spike with the controller. BUT, at the same time, after Anya showed him what Spike went through, I really did feel sorry for how naieve (SP?) he had been. I can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great work! |
| so glad you enjoyed it, thanx for the great review...yeah i really wanted to deal with them actually working through what happened, and not just gloss over it...thanx again |
| Cheryl | 11/16/2005 09:23 pm |
| This is a fabulous story! Well written, and even though I usually prefer less angst, it is really progressing well and the frequent updates are most welcome! Please keep it coming, I can't wait to see what happens next. I wish there was a "super liked it" opinion choice! |
| if its written by me, it's full of angst...my curse...lol glad you like it anyway |
| SpaceLord | 11/14/2005 08:05 am |
| Didn't say I didn't like your story, I see your point in him being vulnerable and all. The problem is that I don't really see a belivable happy end to this story. Since he's so totally broken no matter how much revenge he exacts I can't see him being anything but a broken shell of a person after this, someone who would probably beg the slayer just to kill him to put him out of his misery.
I don't mind sad endings, if done properly I think they can be just as beautiful as happy in a way. |
| hopefully i managed to make a happy ending come out of this believably i understand what you're saying though |
| Athenewolfe | 11/10/2005 01:44 pm |
| Please let warren die a slow and painful death. Great story |
| was it slow and painful enough for you? |
| sue | 11/10/2005 09:25 am |
| Oops. Methinks that Warren is gonna be a whole lot nastier to our Spike before long. Nice to see that Xander has inadvertently caused Buffy to understand who the real victim was and why. Looking forward to more. Thanks. |
| methinks you're right, unfortunately...thanx for review |
| Athenewolfe | 11/10/2005 02:01 am |
| Excellant story! I really enjoyed it and cannot wait for more. My heart is bleeding for Spike, he is in such a bad place. I hope that Xander's words woke Buffy up a bit to understand that Spike didnt deserve to be trated like that by her! |
glad that you are enjoying my story, as you know things get a lot worse before it's over  |
| Stephanie | 11/09/2005 04:28 pm |
| Excellant start of the story - I am looking forward to reading more of this fic. |
| thanx |
| MarzBar | 11/07/2005 10:01 am |
| OMG! Warren has captured Spike? Warren deserved being flayed alive. One of the few good justices in the series. I hope Spike gets him. More story please. |
| by the end of this story i'm sure you felt more strongly about that |
| sue | 11/07/2005 09:34 am |
| Ooops! Looks like everyone is in a bad place now except for the nerds. Good start and looking forward to more. Thanks. |
| thanx, glad you like it...yeah things don't look good do they? |
