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| Sympathy for the Devil by ComedyofErrors |
| Chapter: Chapter 4 |
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| angelic_amy | 03/12/2006 11:47 pm |
| OMG! My eyes misted at the beginning of this chapter. Poor William! The scene with his sister’s death was well written and very believable. And the scene at the ball was great also. Cecily was such a bitch, and those men who made fun of him deserved what they had coming to them in my opinion. And Buffy feels sorry for Spike too, excellent! |
| jl1980 | 02/21/2006 11:17 pm |
| i like how she's becoming protective of him toward the end...very sweet...this is really the only way she ever would have come to understand...on to the next chapter now... |
| Athenewolfe | 02/19/2006 08:09 am |
i really would like to slap Buffy ... you think it is so ct and dry demon and sould. I look forward to her learning that it isn't
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| Oracleholly | 12/04/2005 05:12 pm |
| (chaps 3-4) Loved your William flashbacks -- with his sisters, then his mom, then of course the dreadful night of Cecily. |
| Opal | 11/19/2005 10:57 pm |
More please!  |
| Steph | 11/19/2005 09:36 pm |
| OH wow that was awesome You did a wonderful job in depicting Buffy watching everything play out, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next!I LOVE IT! |
| Karyn | 11/18/2005 03:00 am |
| ohhhh! have a feeling vamp spike isn't going to be what buffy expects either!...lol...great update! |
| Taylormaid | 11/17/2005 10:18 pm |
| Another wonderful chapter. I have to say I was all choked up with the death of William's sister. I love that Buffy is having to witness all of this first hand. I can't wait to see if she will witness the 'turning of his mother'. Will this let her see Spike in another light or will she think 'William' is gone entirely? I am begging for more updates soon........I check every day. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 11/17/2005 09:35 pm |
| Excellent story update. I really do like how you are revealing William's life to Buffy. I hope that she sees that even though William was turned, he still wasn't quite the demon Spike that she has seen. The poet is still within him, and it would have been apparant for quite some time after he was turned. Look forward to more, eagerly. |
| bloodshedbaby | 11/17/2005 07:45 pm |
| I LOVE how you are rewriting Spike's history through Buffy's eyes. This is some seriously good ficage you got going on here and it's making me want MORE! And I usually don't do that begging thing but *whines* I wanna know what happens! |
| jane | 11/17/2005 07:42 pm |
| Very moving chapter felt a bit tearful reading the death bed scenes. Looking forward to more. |
| UncagedMuse | 11/17/2005 07:32 pm |
| Loved all these memories you have written in this chp! I can't wait for her to see his first memories after his turning!
She felt sad now that William was gone, and that Spike was all that was left of the poor, lovesick poet.
I love that line because I am sure she is going to be shocked to find William is still there! |
| spike_spetslayer | 11/17/2005 06:32 pm |
| Oh, how wonderful--just read all the chapters that I missed somehow, and you have captured scenes from his life perfectly...can't wait to read more...at least, perhaps, this will give Buffy some insight into the man inside what she believes a monster... |
| Angie | 11/17/2005 05:44 pm |
| This was a great chapter, it made me want to pimp smack Cecily. Poor William... |
| Pulchra Nex | 11/17/2005 05:40 pm |
| Awwww! I always thought it was soo sad when I read it or saw it on the show but you actually got me here with tears in my eyes! love it! please update soon? |
| SpaceLord | 11/17/2005 04:42 pm |
| I'm always a sucker for the sad things and this was just great in a sad way. |
