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| Poppycock (formerly Dead Things fic) by slaymesoftly |
| Chapter: Two |
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| jane | 11/19/2005 09:34 am |
| I really like it more please. |
| Thanks - more coming up. |
| sam | 11/19/2005 05:02 am |
| okay, i like your stories and everything, but i have to say that i don't really care for this one. first of all, this chapter was basically the same thing that happened in the episode. i was hoping you would have changed it more and not have him get beat up, i can't even watch this episode at all because of that part. it gets me so pissed off. buffy is still a bitch here and i was really hoping you would have made her better. |
| I'm sorry you're not liking it. I tried to give a little insight into Buffy's emotions and give Spike a little more sympathy for her internal termoil, but perhaps it isn't working the way I'd hoped. Not having him get beat up just wasn't an option -it is a very important event in their relationship. But I think/hope I give it a better outcome than on the show. Please read the next couple of chapters and let me know what you think. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 11/19/2005 02:09 am |
| Yep, definitely grim. Hope it gets Spuffy again soon. I mean yeah the balcony scene was always an awesome one in my book, but what followed what awful. I look forward to seeing where you take it. |
| It will get better. I promise! |
