Return to You by Thianna
Chapter: 12 - I Don't Want to Lose You
 
~*~Tasha~*~11/21/2005 03:40 pm
Nothing wrong with the chapter. Set up needs to be done at times. You still moved things along either way. It was funny seeing Spike squirm over Collin's mother. I was a bit upset about Buffy's little talk with Spike about not being able to be with him ... after all the pining she did for him ... not it seems like she is just letting go. I look forward to more to see where you go with it and how it is all explained.
MarzBar11/21/2005 02:46 am
I'm still in a holding pattern. Doesn't Buffy know that Collin wanted her too? Hard to take advantage of someone who wants that advantage.