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| Overcome by flibble |
| Chapter: Chapter One |
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| MarzBar | 12/16/2005 05:53 pm |
| She better figure it out quickly if she wants to avoid lots of unnecessary angst. Riley is a dufus and not worth her time or energy. Nice start, more please. |
| vladt | 12/16/2005 05:35 am |
| love the start. thanks |
| idk5743228 | 12/16/2005 04:46 am |
| I've always loved pre-chipped Spike best. I think you nailed him beautifully. If the first chapter was any indication of what's to come, I can't wait. Thanks for great new story! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 12/15/2005 07:01 am |
| Great start. Loved the beginning of this story here, and I look forward to more. {Smiles} |
| Always_jbj | 12/15/2005 03:48 am |
| Nice start... I look forward to reading more!
And *yay* another Aussie... we are slowly taking over. LOL |
| Panta_Rei | 12/14/2005 09:53 pm |
| Interesting beginning...can't wait to see where you take this =) |