Overcome by flibble
Chapter: Chapter One
 
MarzBar12/16/2005 05:53 pm
She better figure it out quickly if she wants to avoid lots of unnecessary angst. Riley is a dufus and not worth her time or energy. Nice start, more please.
vladt12/16/2005 05:35 am
love the start. thanks
idk574322812/16/2005 04:46 am
I've always loved pre-chipped Spike best. I think you nailed him beautifully. If the first chapter was any indication of what's to come, I can't wait. Thanks for great new story!
~*~Tasha~*~12/15/2005 07:01 am
Great start. Loved the beginning of this story here, and I look forward to more. {Smiles}
Always_jbj12/15/2005 03:48 am
Nice start... I look forward to reading more! And *yay* another Aussie... we are slowly taking over. LOL
Panta_Rei12/14/2005 09:53 pm
Interesting beginning...can't wait to see where you take this =)