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| Stars in Bright Sky by Lilachigh |
| Chapter: Chp 1 Christmas is Coming |
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| vladt | 12/24/2005 06:33 am |
| fun read. thank you for the christmas present. merry christmas |
| Peyton | 12/23/2005 06:34 pm |
| and of course I meant to write throw, not through... |
| Peyton | 12/23/2005 06:33 pm |
| I enjoyed chapter one but I would recommend an American beta as you have the gang speaking and thinking in words a California teenager *never* would. Scotch tape instead of sticky tape...ads instead of adverts... store bought instead of shop bought...
Small nitpicks but they'd through your fic over into the realm of excellent! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 12/22/2005 03:16 am |
| What a way to start a new story. Nice hook, line and sinker there to reel us all in. Heading to read the other two chapters that I see are posted. |
| vladt | 12/20/2005 08:32 am |
| really know how to hook readers early. excellent. thanks |
| Karyn | 12/18/2005 10:31 pm |
| ohh, wow, can't wait to see where this leads....and who the girl is...lol |
| Thanks for review and all will be revealed in next chp. |
| Richard | 12/18/2005 09:27 pm |
| Heh, knew it all along. I was sortof hoping I was wrong and Spike was torturing that escaped convict but that wouldn't have made any sense what with the food and painkillers. |
| Well, it’s a sort of torture, Richard. Read on - I’m posting more tonight. And thank you for the review. Much appreciated. |
| redwulf50 | 12/18/2005 09:12 pm |
HUH??? damn, need more right now gosh darn it  damn good chappie |
| Thanks for your review. Glad you enjoyed the story so far. Posting more tonight. |
| MarzBar | 12/18/2005 06:28 pm |
| Who is the pregnant girl that Spike is helping? Will this girl help Buffy get a few brain cells working? Maybe get her heart to start? More story please. |
| Posting more of this story tonight. Hope it will answer some of your questions. Buffy’s brain - now there’s a difficult subject! |
