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| Welcome to The Hellmouth? by Schehrezade |
| Chapter: Chapter Three |
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| jl1980 | 05/13/2006 05:25 pm |
awwww....that was so sweet...love that...can't wait for them to *really* meet...as in both coherent and conscious sort of meet  lol |
| Niamh | 05/03/2006 10:20 am |
‘Come on, gorgeous. Breathe for Spike, stop bloody scaring the fangs out of me.’
Love that line. . . wish I had written it.
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| fallen_angel | 03/31/2006 03:50 am |
| yup they finally met and what a meeting it was! |
| Athenewolfe | 02/02/2006 06:01 am |
| loved it! |
| icemink | 01/27/2006 05:29 pm |
| Wow. Great chapter. First of all I love how you are writing Angel. You make fun of him, but also make us feel sorry for him. I also loved your explination of how Spike could give mouth to mouth. I don't think it was necessary, the whole vampires can't do CPR from Prophecy Girl was kind of dumb, but still I thought it was funny that Spike could save her because he smoked. And finally I like how Spike leaped into action wihtout thiking while Angel was left wishing he'd done what Spike had. On to the next chapter. |
| bloodshedbaby | 12/23/2005 04:07 am |
| Pretty... I love! Damn fine chapter. I love the moon-eyed Angel. Love this fic! |
| SpaceLord | 12/22/2005 10:56 am |
| Love the way Spike goes after the girl and leaves Angel huffing |
| Max | 12/22/2005 07:19 am |
| Another great update - kudos on the CPR thing, anyone want to let me know how Angel "has no breath" but vampires can talk and exhale smoke. The entire act of speaking involves inhaling air into the lungs and exhaling and creating noise as air passes through the "voicebox." Since vampires don't take oxygen from the air, they technically have "more breath" (oxygen) when performing CPR. Angel's a dumbass. Basic logic and common sense drive me nuts when I watch TV. |
| UncagedMuse | 12/22/2005 05:30 am |
| Excellent meeting! Ready for more. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 12/22/2005 03:05 am |
| What a way to meet! So romantic actually. I know that probably doesn't sound right, but imagine waking up to Spike's beautiful face looking down on you? It would be romantic to me. Good explanation about him being able to give her mouth to mouth. I always thought it was kind of funny that Angel couldn't do that in Prophecy Girl. He can force air into and out of his lungs if he wanted to, even if he didn't have to breathe. Nice touch Look forward to more. |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 12/22/2005 02:48 am |
| “Behind you! Oh bollocks…” - LMAO!! So adorable! |
