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| Where Do I Stand? by Thianna |
| Chapter: 1 - My Hope |
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| Verda | 07/07/2006 11:08 pm |
| Very beautifully written story. Can't wait to see what style of writing you chose, because writing in the first is very hard to write. Enjoying it very much. |
| jl1980 | 02/15/2006 10:31 pm |
very good story so far...you make the reader feel Spike's desperate need for Dru, it almost hurts to read it...very engaging, well-written...like this very much  |
| SpaceLord | 01/31/2006 02:58 am |
| Well nice start but I think I prefer a third person perspective. |
| margaret | 01/03/2006 07:18 pm |
| like how the story is starting out, pov is fine interesting actually...please write more and it would be great if "elizabeth " could be sired by spike rather than any of the others(imho) thanks |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 12/26/2005 01:27 am |
| In answer to your POV question ... either way is fine. You're doing a pretty good job of writing from Spike's POV. {Smiles} It gives the story a particular slant and air about it that is nice. Writing third person is often much easier to write, but you can still get things in there about how a character feels etc. So, either way is good. Always up to the writer of what they want to do or accomplish with the fic.
The story itself is awesome. I love it. This is already shaping up to be a very interesting one. I look forward to more chapters. |
| vladt | 12/24/2005 04:43 am |
| love the chapter. spike pov very interesting, and difficult for the writer; third person easier to lead the reader to the mindset you want them to have. from reading other of your works, i know pov doesn't matter, this will be a well written, enjoyable fic. thanks for writting. P.S. this is probably the longest review you will ever receive from me. thanks again |
| Thanks for the review. I know it might be a little difficult but I hope I'll be able to capture Spike's thoughts well. |
| idk5743228 | 12/23/2005 05:27 pm |
| I love the beginning. I think third person does open the story to more possibilities. However, anyway you write it is going to be great. I can't wait to see where you take it. |
| bloodshedbaby | 12/23/2005 03:20 pm |
| I'm lazy and third person is easier to write (at least for me) so I'm going to have to say whatever is easiest for you! |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 12/23/2005 12:54 pm |
| I don't mind the Spike POV. ^.^ Can't wait to read more. |
