Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Five and Six
 
Athenewolfe02/09/2006 06:03 am
Chapter One through Six - I really enjoyed this story Patti. Going back in time, meeting Spike as a boy, teaching him to fight and defend himself them meeting him as Spike was perfect. What a brilliant concept!
:-)
~*~Tasha~*~12/26/2005 05:44 am
Wow. I'm choked up over the end of this last post. {sighs with a heavy heart} Excellent writing. You always handle the emotions and character interactions so well and so descriptively. Heading to the next post. I think it is the last you have up so far. {sniffles}
Thanks - wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if all went well, would it?
vladt12/24/2005 08:45 am
love the storyline. keep it going. (was going to phrase that differently but the pun was too obviouse) thanks for the great read.
Thanks for reading and commenting. More soon.
Carol12/24/2005 07:16 am
What a great new story! Such a good idea. I loved it when Buffy used the "cheating" line and Spike remembered her. I'm looking forward to more of this one.
Thanks - more going up soon.
Ariel Dawn12/24/2005 02:45 am
Have finally caught up with this one....OMG it's fantastic! Love it to pieces! Looking forward to the next update!
Hee, Thanks, AD. Glad you like it.
Confused Muse12/23/2005 09:22 pm
Hot, heartbreaking, and so terribly addictive... I'm so thoroughly loving this.
Thank you!
desertrose12/23/2005 08:48 pm
Wow I really like this story. Good twist on the meeting him when he was human thing. definately brings out the horror of him being turned when she knew him as an innocent child.
Thanks. I'm glad you picked up on that.
ZoeGrace12/23/2005 06:40 pm
this is just so wonderful patti. Truly this is one of the most original storylines I've seen, thanks for the speedy update!
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Updates to follow later.
Peyton12/23/2005 06:10 pm
OMG! I love you! I'd offer to have your children if I wasn't QUITE sure I never want to be pregnant again! More please!
ROFL - I already have four. Quite enough, thank you! More soon.
idk574322812/23/2005 05:51 pm
This just keeps getting better. I'm loving the conflict. I know the holidays are coming but I hope you will be able to post more. Thanks for a great story
Not to worry - I'll be posting as much as is written so far.Won't be able to go beyond that for awhile, though.
maryperk12/23/2005 04:56 pm
Good chappies!
Thanks!