The Bloodshedverse :: Spuffy with Bite


The Ritual of Healing Hearts by UncagedMuse
Chapter: Chap 1 thru 10

jl1980	06/04/2006 05:01 pm
10: such a passionate update..the giles/ethan bit doesn't really surprise me lol excellent chapter
I'm a Gethan girl as well. hehe
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:58 pm
9: yeah, can't really hide cheating when your girlfriends psychic, spike...lol...excellent update ;)
And again huge thanks for going over and above to review all these insane chps. LOL
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:56 pm
8: excellent chapter...love how angel's loyal to his childer in this story...
Thank you.
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:48 pm
7: wow, that was majorly hot...love that first meeting between the slayer and spike...excellent chapter
That is one part of the fic I did like.
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:45 pm
6: I like the encounter between Angel and Spike...i like how you made spike understand how badly angel would have been hurting...excellent chapter
I wanted to have a little understanding for some strange reason when I wrote this so dang long ago. LOL
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:30 pm
5: I usually like Giles, but gotta say he totally deserved that.. excellent chapter
Yeah, I thought he deserved it. LOL
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:16 pm
4: and the actions keeps building and building awesome chapter, raising the tension and anticipation
Thank you.
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:13 pm
3: this should get interesting; can't wait for slayer and vampire to meet
You do realize how fluffy and out of character this fic was, right? LOL It was my first.
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:10 pm
2: well, yeah, dru, of course he's gonna leave you when you break his heart like that! beautiful chapter, poor spike! can't wait to see what happens next
THanks!
jl1980	06/04/2006 04:07 pm
1: how very very sad poor buffy...you have led us into a dark, sad world, very well-written and engaging..off to read chapter two
Thanks you completely crazy woman, you! You know you really didn't have to review every chp!
Athenewolfe	02/08/2006 05:59 pm
excellant chapter and great beginning (what? I didn't see that I left a review and wanted to make sure I did :-)
You're crazy! But I loves ya anyway.
Erin	09/22/2005 01:44 am
03/11/2005 @ 01:34 am Email Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Tasha	09/22/2005 01:44 am
03/11/2005 @ 01:35 am Email Great start to this story. I like the background information that ties her original watcher, Merrick, to this story. Good lead in with Lothos as well, showing that she isn't exactly all peaches and cream. She has some bite to her. I look forward to updates.
Starshine	09/22/2005 01:43 am
03/11/2005 @ 02:54 am Email Awesome beginning I think I am getting all misty eyed. Beautiful!!!
AmyB	09/22/2005 01:42 am
03/11/2005 @ 03:06 am Email Such a lovely start you've got here! I really like the Buffy that you've created, the broken girl I think the writers were hinting at when they had her mention that she'd been in an asylum. They went back on that pretty fast, but I thought it was an intriguing idea, and you're doing very well with a broken and isolated Buffy. And having Merrick as her only friend only to have her lose him so painfully, much like Gunn lost Alonna on Angel--very effective! I like the way your verse is taking shape. Wonderful beginning! More soon?
Kari Mouke	09/22/2005 01:41 am
03/11/2005 @ 09:12 am Email Lovely, Rae. I really enjoy the way you take us back to the begining and give us an entirely different 'what if' Buffy. It makes everything to come fresh and exciting!
Jesse	09/22/2005 01:41 am
03/11/2005 @ 02:14 pm Wonderful Rae! The walls you are building around Buffy are going to be intresting to watch evolve, bend, and shatter. The pain and desperation of her is clouded by hints of longing and reluctant acceptance. The result is a papalible pain that is heart breaking. Her world is full of darkness and sadness; thus leaving her in a state of flux. Its going to be an intresting ride once other characters are thrown into the mix. I can hardly wait to read your Spike and whatever other characters you give us. More Please!!
Stephanie	09/22/2005 01:40 am
03/11/2005 @ 02:36 pm Email Wonderful beginning! I cannot wait for more! This looks to be a very good story and I like what you have done with Buffy. Please, please can I have some more?
SpikesDeb	09/22/2005 01:40 am
03/12/2005 @ 05:53 pm Email Rae this is a wonderful start. You've really given the reader the feeling of isolation that Buffy has allowed to take over her life. Nice to see you take it back to her beginning and fill in some gaps. Looking forward to the next bit.
redwulf50	09/22/2005 01:39 am
03/12/2005 @ 06:05 pm Email Great chappie looking foward to more.
romero	09/22/2005 01:38 am
03/13/2005 @ 02:07 am This is a great story. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thanks
PassionFish	09/22/2005 01:38 am
03/15/2005 @ 08:04 pm Looking fab babes! Nice way to start it all off - get all that Joss stuff ingored; perfect spuffy fodder! Can't wait for more
Adriana	09/22/2005 01:37 am
03/17/2005 @ 05:37 pm Email Love it. More please and soon!
Jesse	09/22/2005 01:37 am
03/17/2005 @ 06:01 pm Lovin' it. But I thought that you were only going to update on fridays. Not that i'm complaining. Chapter 2 was great, I can't wait for more.
Tasha	09/22/2005 01:36 am
03/17/2005 @ 07:15 pm Email Excellent ... excellent update. You are setting this up really nicely. I liked Chapter One with the lead in on Merrick and Lothos. I like Chapter 2 with the introduction of Spike and Drusilla. Very nice all around. I look forward to more of this story.
Jeni	09/22/2005 01:36 am
03/17/2005 @ 08:08 pm Email URL Rae, I'm so glad you told me uncagedmuse was you! Your story is well written and plotted. Can't wait for the update! Anti.flame.squad I'm so with you!
opalenergy	09/22/2005 01:35 am
03/17/2005 @ 09:25 pm Email This is a great plot twist. Interesting to see how the soddin' poof comes into the picture. Great Job!
Esther	09/22/2005 01:34 am
03/18/2005 @ 01:09 am Email Boy howdy!! Just started reading this and I already love it!! I like the twist with Buffy, and Spike's unrequited love for Dru was so sad. I can't wait to read more of this!!
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:34 am
03/18/2005 @ 11:27 am Email URL more soon huni cant wait cya x
Erin	09/22/2005 01:33 am
03/18/2005 @ 05:32 pm Email Awww, poor Spike! You are off to a great start. I can't wait for more.
Mandi	09/22/2005 01:33 am
03/22/2005 @ 01:11 am Email URL Great start! Can't wait to read more. (hint, hint! lol) ;)
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:32 am
03/25/2005 @ 03:53 am Email URL Luving it huni, cant wait for them to meet everyone else more soon cya xxx
Stephanie	09/22/2005 01:32 am
03/25/2005 @ 02:02 pm Email What a clever way to get Buffy to Sunnydale. I can't wait to see what happens when all the characters meet for the first time. And what has happened with the Master? If Buffy wasn't there did he rise? Did they defeat him? And what will happen when Giles meets Buffy - he seems harder in this one - oh and what about Willow and Xander - did Giles save them - are they vampires? Oh tell, tell all!
Tasha	09/22/2005 01:31 am
03/25/2005 @ 03:18 pm Email Another interesting chapter. I like how the players are moving into place. Giles is a different man because of the two year wait for Buffy. What will happen next? Will Buffy still be enamored with Angel (Goodness I hope not)? Will she see Spike first and feel for him? I'll keep hoping.
Mandi	09/22/2005 01:31 am
03/25/2005 @ 11:03 pm Email URL Loved the update! Can't wait to see what happens when Buffy and Spike meet.
Esther	09/22/2005 01:30 am
03/26/2005 @ 12:45 am Email Boy howdy!! Great chappy!!! The elements have come together and now we'll get to see Buffy and Spike in the same place....oh I can't wait for the UST!! Hm, it had to be Ethan, huh? I kinda had a small (very small) feeling it was him, so thanks for answering that little question. Can't wait for the battle to begin!!!
Demonica Mills	09/22/2005 01:30 am
04/06/2005 @ 08:28 pm Email URL Good update. Curious to know what Buffy is doing during this. Hope things are going better in RL.
Esther	09/22/2005 01:29 am
04/07/2005 @ 12:20 am Email OOhhhh...and the plot thickens!! I love it!! I can't wait for the first meeting between Spike and Buffy, and I'm especially loving that Angel never met her, therefore doesn't love her...oh man, I really can't wait for more!!!
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:28 am
04/07/2005 @ 05:48 am Email URL "The soul was a moron" - i hink Angels a moron full stop LOL. more soon great update... come on Buffy get a move on xx
Franchesca	09/22/2005 01:28 am
04/07/2005 @ 07:42 am Great chapter. I can't wait to see what direction this will take once Angel, Dru and Spike are together again. They will get together again, right? I just really like Dru and Angel as a couple.... which obviously leaves Spike and Buffy free to discover what they were truly meant to be.
~~Tasha~~	09/22/2005 01:27 am
04/11/2005 @ 05:23 pm Email URL Excellent update, Rae!! Bravo! Hope to see more of RHH soon.
Bloodshedbaby	09/22/2005 01:26 am
04/11/2005 @ 09:26 pm so very cool. hugs Rae
Franchesca	09/22/2005 01:25 am
04/11/2005 @ 10:40 pm Good for Buffy. Although I really like Giles and the development of his character on the show, I also like where he started from... Wesly-like sour-puss who thought Buffy was too much. You brought this character back to the beginning, which is something a lot of fanfic fails to do. I really like it.
Esther	09/22/2005 01:24 am
04/12/2005 @ 02:19 am Email Whoa, I'm liking this Buffy! She's much stronger than her tv persona, and def. not gonna take crap from anyone....love it!! Great job!!
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:23 am
04/12/2005 @ 12:04 pm Email URL oooh scary!Buffy yay! more soon huni cya xxx
Esther	09/22/2005 01:23 am
04/24/2005 @ 12:54 am Email What an intro for Spike and Buffy!!! HOT...HOT...HOT!!! Don't blame her either...I would have jumped his sexy body too...drool...that was awesome!! I love their instant attraction to each other....and Spike's inability to kill her....just wow!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:22 am
04/24/2005 @ 03:42 am Email great chappy.. luved their first meeting LOL wonder what will happen when Buffy realises Spikes the one she's after cya xx
Opal	09/22/2005 01:21 am
05/02/2005 @ 09:21 pm Email Loved the fic when I first read it...continuing to like it.. i'm saddened someone sent you a negative email..this fic is a lovely gift from your mind...and I appreciate it! keep writing!
Esther	09/22/2005 01:21 am
05/03/2005 @ 02:54 am Email SQUEE!! Seems that their meeting has left both Spike and Buffy aroused, interested, and pissed...I love it!! And Buffy's reaction to Angel? PRICELESS!!! I was laughing with her, especially the comment about the hair gel, and it pleases me to no end that you've written her to hate Angel and lust over Spike...finally...blondie gets her first!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Aisling	09/22/2005 01:20 am
05/05/2005 @ 01:41 pm Email URL ooh... more soon Buffy will be angry wen she finds shes been played! lol cya x
Esther	09/22/2005 01:19 am
05/11/2005 @ 11:28 pm Email Boy howdy, someone's in TROUBLE!!! Hehehe....I loved it!!! Buffy's musings about Angel are freaking hilarious!! (too bad she didn't feel the same during the show) And Ethan's just one evil little bug, isn't he? Oh, and the question about Giles/Ethan's friendship...very interesting...and with whole Angel/Dru thing too...Spike...what can I say...he's got it bad....can't wait for more!!!
oracleholly	09/22/2005 12:48 am
08/24/2005 @ 11:09 pm Email up to 17 Rae- great fic so far! Love the Ethan/Giles angle that you've played. Getting Buffy reunited with Joyce in Sunnydale; Angel irritated with Dru; Buffy & Dru having tea (lol); and then Spike asking to turn Buffy -- really great. looking forward to seeing what's next up your sleeve.
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/22/2005 12:47 am
08/30/2005 @ 12:45 am Email Great chapter. Update soon!
ComedyofErrors	09/22/2005 12:47 am
09/04/2005 @ 12:00 pm Nice update. I'm glad that Buffy isn't rushing into anything. Handy of Ethan to be around.
BloodyTearsOfLife	09/22/2005 12:46 am
09/04/2005 @ 03:03 pm Email Awesome chapter. I can't wait to see what Buffy decides to do. Update soon!