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| Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly |
| Chapter: Nine and Ten |
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| Athenewolfe | 02/09/2006 06:08 am |
I really enjoy Buffy's disbelief that she wasn't told about Angel's past. Poor Giles!
Dru thralling Xander was an excallant touch - Xander always is so cocky - he needs to be taken down a few hundred pegs!
Excellant Chapters! |
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| akarinacj | 12/26/2005 07:11 pm |
| I just love the way you write, and like time-traveling stories a lot. I hope you explain how Angelus lost his soul, eventhough I can imagine the reason. he, he. I like this version of Buffy. Young and somehow still innocent. It will be very interesting to see how her relationship with Spike develops... Hope you updat soon. |
| Thanks! I'm glad you like it. It's always interesting to ponder how Buffy might have reacted to Spike had she not already had her heart broken by Angel, isn't it? |
| Confused Muse | 12/26/2005 03:45 pm |
| Tender, touching, innocent... these two chapters left my heart in my mouth and me feeling a bit breathless! |
| left my heart in my mouth and me feeling a bit breathless!
hee! My work here is done.... |
| idk5743228 | 12/26/2005 03:01 pm |
| Ooh, 2 more chapters. I expecially love the line about "..dragging the bitch back..." I do so love a motivated slayer. Thank you for the fast update. But as other people have said, I need more. |
| More soon - although, perhaps only one chapter at a time from now on. |
| SpaceLord | 12/26/2005 11:19 am |
This is a very good story so far, I like the way you made them know each other and there for have a connection before they meet as vampire and slayer. Although the whole meeting between 9 year old william and buffy felt sort of like Anakin and Padme in Star Wars Ep I  |
| Thanks for the kind words, and whoops!on Anakin and Padme - never even thought about that. I just didn't want them to have any kind of romantic relationship because that would be to similar to another fic that I love; so I made them close in age, but not close enough for hanky-panky. |
| vladt | 12/26/2005 08:43 am |
| love the story. lovely end to an otherwise mixed day. thank you |
| Thank you - glad I could help brighten your day, but sorry it was a mixed one. Here's hoping New Years will be better! |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 12/26/2005 06:32 am |
| Yippee! I refreshed the recently added page, and I was rewarded with another chapter of this one!!! Loved the two chapter post. Still hungry for more. I look forward to seeing how Angel lost his soul and what is going to happen next for Buffy and Spike. |
| Thanks for the steady reviews, Tasha - might have to start dragging the chapters out so as not to run out before it's finished. |
