Origins: Revelations by Niamh
Chapter: Shadows of the world appear
 
Verda07/02/2006 03:05 pm
You hit another one out of the ballpark. Really great chapter,
the emotional turmoil that you gave to Spike was intense. Knowing him the way that we do, he needed a release that only sex or violence can give him. Glad you showed how strong the magics were by making Faith pass out, makes it more believeable, dramatic.
Richard12/31/2005 09:23 am
Lawson defecting, oh that's delicious. The hounds are getting close, I thought they were off-track before....