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| It's Not Enough by Morrigan |
| Chapter: No one Like Me |
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| angelic_amy | 02/23/2006 06:09 pm |
Poor Dawnie. 
Nice chapter, loved annoying Andrew. |
I love writing Andrew, because he is such a helpless dork! I think he makes chapters fun. There's more Dawn to come, and it's not all bad.  Thanks again, for the review! |
| 02/17/2006 09:29 pm |
| http://community.livejournal.com/riters_r_us/15386.html?nc=18 |
| Ok already, note taken, And problem solved... What can I say... I'm new? *L* |
| bearfacedcheek | 02/17/2006 09:37 am |
| I'm really enjoyng this story so far but I found some of the dialogue a bit difficult to follow later on in this chapter. Maybe if you were to start a new paragraph with every change in speaker it would be clearer who is speaking. INteresting story onward I go to find ou what's afoot |
Thanks for the review!
I know, there are a lot of little things that need changing, in some of the earlier chapters of this fic. I keep saying I'm going to get to fixin' em... then I keep procrastinating. *Bad Morrigan* But, I assure you that it gets a little easier as the story progresses. This has been a stage for me. |
| saffirered | 01/04/2006 05:46 pm |
| Your chapters have a nice flow. Keep writting I can't wait to see more. I feel so sorry for Dawn. |
| Thanks again, for reviewing! Glad you still like it. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 01/04/2006 03:25 am |
| Poor Dawn, neglected. Though Dawn did thoroughly tick me off in Season 7. |
| Yeah. The whole "Sister has got to go" thing ruffled my feathers too. But, I'm glad I got her feelings across, with this chapter. Thanks for reviewing! |
| bloodshedbaby | 01/03/2006 07:36 pm |
| Hey! I just wanted to know if you got my email? Let me know! I can resend it if you didn't. |
| Nope. Just got the E, notifying me of a review. Send it back my way. I'll be online for a while. |
