Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly
Chapter: Seventeen
 
Esther01/07/2006 09:50 am
Oh, sweetie, you've got me to fall in love with another of your stories!!! Have read it all, caught up with new chapters, and am totally in tears with that cliffy!! Gorgeous story so far, and I can't wait for more!!!
Well, it could have just ended like that you know...but it didn't. Just waiting for chapters to come back from the beta.
Cewcew01/07/2006 05:41 am
Loving it, Loveing it, Loveing it!
Thank you.
~*~Tasha~*~01/06/2006 03:22 am
I'm with Spike on the fact that the demon only allowed thw tight rein to be let go. Xander wanted Buffy long before being a vampire. Why can't Buffy see that even after all Spike went through, he was still so much William. If he didn't have William he wouldn't have given a rat's ass about her. Instead Willow and Buffy do the whole soul is good scenario while Angel and Xander get a get out of jail free card for getting one. {sighs} So sad. I hope you are able to update soon.
I hope so too. Just waiting for Amy to get the next chapters back to me.
gaillee01/05/2006 05:16 am
How poignant..There are tears in my eyes. Hope things get better soon...
Thank you.
SpaceLord01/04/2006 10:32 pm
Sad chapter, I love it tho....I'm a sucker for this sad stuff
Wouldn't be Spike and Buffy if it all went smoothly, would it?
Lou01/04/2006 09:18 pm
Yummy angst.
LOL, my sentiments exactly!
Stacy01/04/2006 09:09 pm
Wow! I'm in love with this story. I loved little William and I love vampy Spike. Can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing.
thanks for reading and reviewing!
maryperk01/04/2006 04:26 pm
Well, I hope we are still gonna have a happy ending going. LOL. Great chappy though.
Corrina requested a happy Spuffy ending, so I couldn't end it here. Sigh.
Dirktavian01/04/2006 03:51 pm
Sniff...how very sad. I'm sure Buffy's naivete will quickly be gone once she realizes how cold Angel and Xander can be, even with their souls, since they know the truth about her and Spike. Great update-- You did a wonderful job!
Thanks - I don't think she's all the fooled.....
Irina01/04/2006 03:40 pm
I just caught up with the chapters I hadn't read before and i'm really enjoying the story. Can't wait to read more!
Thanks - more will have to wait until I get it back from the beta, I'm afraid.
dihcar01/04/2006 03:12 pm
Dumbass willow and buffy really DON'T get it. Their thinken their friend is gonna come back, but the problem is that the demon shows you how vile the human is inside. Xander didn't want to kill a slayer, he wanted to fuck and rape. That fucker should be dusted, the only reason angel isn't is becuse he's supposdly a champion for the powers to be.
um - tell us how you really feel! LOL Hang with the story for awhile and see what happens.