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| Prodigal by Confused Muse |
| Chapter: Chapter Eleven |
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| gaillee | 01/09/2006 05:34 am |
| THAT was just hot! This story is so well written. Love the cliff hanger end to this chapter. |
| Always_jbj | 01/07/2006 10:32 am |
| Wow! Fabulous chapter, nice hot spuffy action followed by the wonderfully intriguing phone call at the end! Can't wait to see what that was all about... and to see Buffy's post-coital reaction and her treatment of Spike. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 01/07/2006 06:26 am |
| Awesome chapter!! This was a good one. Those two are playing a dangerous game with each other. I wonder who will win. |
| megs | 01/07/2006 04:40 am |
| wow-ie!
I'm just now catching up(I had to ask Daisy tha name of this story!) on all the fics I was reading befor school started getting heavy.
Fantastic story!!! Is Buffy/Bethmara some type of vengence demon now?!?!?
and was that phone call telling Giles that a slayer died?
Keep it up!!!! can't wait for more!!!
on another note...ch 7 - 2nd paragraph...is 'Miss Lucy' supposed to be Miss Edith? or did I miss something along the way...?
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Thank you Megs  And I'm afraid I'm not letting anyone know the plot till the characters are ready to reveal it - I know I'm bad! And no, it was supposed to be Miss Lucy - if you recall, Dru has lots and lots of dolls, all of whom speak to her, but she doesn't always like what they say ;) |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 01/07/2006 04:07 am |
| Mmmmm yummy smut *purrs* |
| Esther | 01/07/2006 02:07 am |
| Boy howdy, that was....yummy!!! Spike in all his sexy, primalness....Buffy being all aggresso-girl.....hot damn!!!! And now that little cliffy in the end...I can't wait for more!!! |
| Lou | 01/06/2006 08:58 pm |
| Bethmara's a right little raver, isn't she? |
| sue | 01/06/2006 08:19 pm |
| OMG! Off to have soothing shower - that was so bloody hot! Has the wench no shame (I'm hoping not 'cos it don't 'alf make for good reading!). The chappie? OK *grins my head off* Loving it and so looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
| neo_trinityknot | 01/06/2006 08:14 pm |
| Great story, cant wait to read more of it! |
| Pin | 01/06/2006 07:22 pm |
| Another great chapter. I really like this story and look forward to finding out how things got to be where they are. Thanks! |
| Nikkole | 01/06/2006 05:04 pm |
| Now that was hot! You and your evil cliffhangers, I swear, get a person all worked up to get some information, and then leave us hanging again! Bad bad bad! And yet still so good!LOL! Keep it up! |
| Ariel Dawn | 01/06/2006 05:03 pm |
| how, that was a hot chapter. wonder what the phone call was about though...looking forward to the next chapter! |
| UncagedMuse | 01/06/2006 04:58 pm |
| Very good chp and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
