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| Hearts Breaking Even by slaymesoftly |
| Chapter: Twenty-two, twenty-three and twenty-four |
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| Oracleholly | 04/03/2006 04:19 pm |
| Just finished reading the entire story. Wonderful from start to finish. I love that Buffy taught William how to fight... it would explain why they tended to fight so similarily. It was a beautifully crafted tale. |
| Thank you, Holly. I'm glad you liked it. Probably as close as I'm ever going to come to a Buffy/William fic. |
| Kelly | 03/20/2006 12:44 am |
Hi ~ This is the first story of yours that I have read.... Wow!! I am now a loyal reader - that was amazing! Wonderfully written with great characterization and touching insight! I *loved* that all it took was a threat from Xander at the end for Buffy to become posessive of her mate! (Because she is soooo claiming him back!) Perfect! I was hooked from start to finish! Now I'm off to read the rest!!  Thanks so much! ~ Kelly |
| Hi Kelly - I'm glad you liked it. I hope you enjoy some of the others too. |
| MarzBar | 02/11/2006 03:48 am |
| I don't know where my previous review for this story is but I wanted to be sure you knew how much I loved the story about The Slayer of Slayers and his Warrior Elf Queen. |
| thanks - I'm glad you liked it. |
| Athenewolfe | 02/09/2006 06:17 am |
Chapter 21- 24
Awesome chapters and conclusion Patti. This story was fantastic! (Sorry for the delay in reviewing it) I loved Vamp Xander and I loved reading you dust him. *happy sigh* fab fab ficcy! |
| Thank you! Loved having you review it. LOL |
| Niamh | 01/31/2006 07:03 pm |
| took me all damn day, but I finally read this. And oohhh, how jealous am I of Always that she got a fic written specifically for her. . . . *sniffs* And how glad I am that she did. I liked this one, and I'm glad Xander finally got what was coming. Too bad she didn't dust the poofter too. . . nicely done, pet. |
| Thank you, Niamh. I'm so glad you liked it. Maybe next Christmas? |
| MaidenRo | 01/29/2006 05:34 pm |
Finally, a story that makes me want to read Spuffy again.
Thank you |
| Thank you! What a lovely compliment. |
| spikeskat | 01/27/2006 06:35 pm |
| Another of your stories that I thoroughly enjoyed. Especially the conclusion. *grin*(Can you tell I'm slowly working my way through all your completed fics?) |
| Gonna take you a while..... |
| Stephanie | 01/15/2006 07:58 pm |
| OMG! My heart is in my throat. I didn't see that coming at all. I loved how the story went in all its various twists and turns. Xander as a character, first sulky schoolboy, then vampire convinced HE had a shot as Buffy now was marvolous writing. It was super fab. I could feel the pain, and loved how the ending played out, |
| Thank you - so glad you liked! |
| CutieSaiyajin | 01/15/2006 08:35 am |
Amazing story! Little surprised at the end with Xander's dusting, but he totally deserved it.  Great work. |
| Thanks! I hope the Xander dusting didn't freak you out too much. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 01/15/2006 02:54 am |
| Very gratifying ending with Xander dust when he just wouldn't keep his mouth shut. Stupid idiot. Excellent three final chapters with the apartment and the confrontations all around. I enjoyed this story, and I look forward to your next one. Also to let you know, it isn't listed as completed. {smiles} |
| Oops! Thanks! *runs off to fix status* |
| gaillee | 01/13/2006 06:31 pm |
| Yah! I love this story. The ending is wonderfully surprising and gratifying. A threat to Spike bringing out her lethal qualities, superb! Thanks for an interesting tale, well told. |
| thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it! |
| pfeifferpack | 01/13/2006 01:26 am |
| Could not stop reading until complete! Great story, wonderfully told. Love your characterizations and voices were perfect. Printed it to read to my hubby (also a Spuffy fic fan). Kathleen |
| Thanks. I'm so glad you liked it. Praise from another author is always just a tiny bit sweeter. |
| lOU | 01/12/2006 02:54 pm |
| This story was an absolute blast. The way they met, became reacquainted, the characterisations - it all had me hooked from the first chapter. And what a bonus - Xander got dusted! Many thanks. |
| I'm glad you liked it! |
| SpaceLord | 01/12/2006 11:29 am |
| I read the last few postings in one go and I must say I loved the story. I'm kinda hoping for a sequel. That would be good. I guess Xander let his mouth get the better of him one too many times |
| Thank you. No plans for a sequel at this time, though. I'm more about the getting them together than following what happens after that. But thanks for asking! |
| Esther | 01/12/2006 07:50 am |
| Whoa, talk about a freaking great ending!! Would go through everything, but then it'd be a very long post. Love that acceptance from Giles/Joyce (and Giles getting beat up by Joyce) for the Spuffy relationship. Kudos to you for that!!
Ah, Spuffy loving.....what can I say? HOT!!! Still drooling, as a matter of fact.
The ending is still going through my mind, with spots of naked Spike, of course. Man, never expected it, but Xander did threaten Spike. Dang, wish it wasn't over, but I still loved it. It's going on my faves. Wonderful job, sweetie!!! |
| Hee! Xander was a surprise, huh? Thanks for all the kind words. *hugs* |
| maryperk | 01/12/2006 05:25 am |
| Nice ending. As with all your other stories, I am sad it's over. So... when are you gonna start the next story? |
| Thank you - some others already in the works, but they are for LJ communities, so it will be a while before they find their way up here. |
| Irina | 01/12/2006 04:45 am |
| Fantastic story! Very entertaining and very well written. I started reading the story and reviewing it on another site before it went bye-bye, i'm so glad I found it here and got a chance to finish it. It was a joy to read! |
| Thank you - I'm so glad you found it and continued reading and reviewing, and I'm glad you enjoyed it. |
