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| This Is The Way The World Ends by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: Bangs and Whimpers |
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| Athenewolfe | 04/05/2006 05:44 am |
| Just rereading the story and thought i would mention I really love how you began with this. The tara and spike friendship was/is excellant and I enjoy rereading it and seeing how it all began. I did notice that in the middle the text is all squished together without proper returns in between the paragraph's - you may want to fix that as it is a bit distracting from the wonderful beginning you have |
| kim | 01/23/2006 05:28 pm |
| I think the snobby bitchiness Buffy has goes back to her days of being a popular kid before she was a Slayer. She said herself that she used to be Cordelia, but I think she probably took the cruelty to another level in L.A. when she needed to. I imagine that she was pretty spoiled before her parent's marriage fell apart, too. Then, after Angel hurt her, she never got over/past it, and that bitterness just grew and grew inside because she would never face an intrapersonal problem. She let people run her life and dictate how it would go. Gee, wonder why you're so unhappy, Buffy? She's an emotional coward, and needed therapy at 15. |
| Morrigan | 01/16/2006 11:39 pm |
| Curious to see where this is going. |
| lilkittykat_27 | 01/16/2006 07:47 am |
Very good. I like this approach to a Spuffy fic. BSB rec'd this so I'd thought I'd check it out. I'm sure glad I did.  *runs off to read next chapter* |
| Dreylin | 01/15/2006 05:37 pm |
| Interesting approach to a Spuffy fic. I've always been a sucker for Spike/Tara interaction, and usually only get to enjoy that in Spara fics - which is why I enjoy them. Still, in my mind, part of Spike's character is his love for Buffy. This fic promices to give me both at the same time! Oh, and it's really nicely written too. The characters interactions feel natural, and I'm somehow buying into Spike's quickly shift to non-evil behavior and even mindset. That's something that almost always throws me when fanfic authors try it, but you've made it work for me. I'm looking forward to more from you. |
| ZoeGrace | 01/15/2006 07:54 am |
| oh this is very nice. I hope you write lots of stories. I can already tell this is going to be a good story. |
| Max | 01/14/2006 06:28 pm |
| I really like the whole Spike/Tara interactions - Tara was someone who was definitely overlooked way too much in the show and it's good that Spike has a real friend and can finally break away from Dru once and for all. |
| idk5743228 | 01/14/2006 03:30 pm |
| Ok, I was just over at the tag board. BSB says you are getting discouraged. PLEASE DON'T!. This is a great story. The possibilities are endless. Keep writing |
| idk5743228 | 01/14/2006 03:25 pm |
| I LOVE the interaction of Tara and Spike. I had wished for more on the show. Tara had always seemed like she would make a good friend for Spike. This is a good story. Is there really such a thing as a deep fried Mars bar? |
