Welcome to The Hellmouth? by Schehrezade
Chapter: Chapter Eight
 
jl198005/13/2006 08:40 pm
you know...i really believe that...angelus is going down...awesome awesome story...poor cordy, though....more story now
fallen_angel05/04/2006 06:52 am
i seem to have missed 6 updates. how i don't know but i'm catching up?
Niamh05/03/2006 03:06 pm
I would be afraid of a brassed off Cordy. . . .
Richard03/31/2006 01:20 pm
Ooooh, I like this Cordelia.
~*~Tasha~*~03/23/2006 01:21 am
Dang ... vicious and cruel. Excellent written.
Athenewolfe02/02/2006 06:33 am
OMG - Cordy staked hr parents - that was brilliant! I especially loved the entire getting all thier money first part. Go cordy!
icemink01/27/2006 06:31 pm
I love what you've done with Cordelia. You can see the strength that made her a champion, but also that she hasn't had the experiences to make her a truely good person yet. She still high school Cordelia, but also a strong warrior. I can't wait to see what happeens next.
vladt01/19/2006 05:48 am
enjoy the story, angel true to form. love the new improved cordelia. thanks for the updates
Karyn01/19/2006 04:14 am
wow great chapter, kinda skimmed the squeaky part...lol...very powerful visuals on all the chapters!
MarzBar01/18/2006 10:47 pm
WOW! What a yarn you are spinning here! Darla and the triplets was pretty icky and I have to worry about Queen C and her new, even worse attitude. Nice to see Spike and Buffy together already. How many years before there can be Spuffy smut? More story please.
dihcar01/18/2006 09:53 pm
very good chapter, dark but good. Now this (the triplets) is something i could believe that the sickest most disgusting fucking vampire(angelus) would do. As for Cordelia, well she's really hard now, i hope that she will build a trusting friendship with Spike or Buffy. Cus other whise she would become too bitter and hatefull at the world. seeya
Bernardette01/18/2006 06:49 pm
Great story . Great twist on the origingal episodes. Please continue to write and update soon and often
jane01/18/2006 06:38 pm
Wow Cordy has really toughened up, looks like Angels in for a big surprise. Looking forward to more.
Pin01/18/2006 05:36 pm
Excellent chapter! I love how you've reinvented Cordelia. Thank you!
AthenaHahn01/18/2006 04:51 pm
Whoa... that's just... whoa.... Can I just bow down before you now? Please? Damn, Cordy's turned into a righteous bitch, ain't she? You are BEYOND good at writing this stuff!!! I wish I could write that good. *chuckles* Please update soon!! And would another chapter of Tempus be too much to ask? I'll beg; don't think I won't! :-D