Down the Road I Go by Megan_Tam
Chapter: Four
 
Irishwoman3904/12/2006 11:41 pm
Spike getting his bits beaten off by buffy,just to funny.
Niamh04/10/2006 07:54 am
I'm not really sure why you thought this chapter was not good -- it's more than fine. Although I understand how you can write something and not be happy with it no matter what you're doing, so yeah, it makes sense in a way that only another writer would understand. But really its fine.
Bite_Me02/25/2006 12:26 am
Poor Spike! He just needs to drop Dru like a rotten apple! And they both need to get a clue! In other words...Lovin' it!
Yzba02/22/2006 10:22 am
One thing to say girl, this was funny. No reason to not be sure of yourself. I laughed out loud all the way;) wasn't so sure about the first 2 chapters but chap.3 and 4, you hooked me!
katakata02/10/2006 01:50 am
OMG this chapter was just tooooo funny 8-P Really good ploy using such stark comic relief considering where you could have taken the hotel scene, especially when you think of the domination/subjugation subtext (actually it wasn't even subtle enough to be SUB text was it) in the previous chapters. Coolness.
Athenewolfe01/24/2006 07:05 pm
Whimpers... you hate me don't you ...seriously .. leaving it there... I need more... more I say ... pleads... LOL good update megan I liked it a lot and cannot wait to see how they get out of this mess. *hugs*
Elizabeth Anne Summers01/24/2006 05:08 pm
Run! Well, wiggle or roll or something!
akarinacj01/24/2006 04:04 pm
Oh..This is so funny. Great chapter and very well written. I could just se the picture of a knocked out and drunk Spike and a pissed off Slayer. I canīt wait for more. Please update soon!!!!
redwulf5001/24/2006 12:41 pm
lol, dfamn good chappie guys, but could you spank Buffy before you kill her???
Nemo01/24/2006 08:09 am
Great story! I'm loving the very evil Spike! Let's just hope that he doesn't go throough with his plans
slinkypsychokit01/24/2006 07:20 am
This is a freaking riot! I love it!
idk574322801/24/2006 06:05 am
sooo. Buffy's pretty much destroyed Spike's car and now has done a lovely job on the motel room. She seems to be doing pretty well for a kidknapped slayer. Great chapter
Karyn01/24/2006 05:49 am
rofl, great chapter, i love it that she kicks rock demon ass even tied up when spike drunk gets knocked out...and look who wants to get back to the road trip with spike..lol...just a couple rock demons and someones singing a whole new tune....*grin*
bloodshedbaby01/24/2006 05:44 am
*giggles* This was damn good stuff! I seriously laughed out loud in places. NOTHING to worry about, this was a well-written, amusing chapter. I love your Buffy in this. I can see and hear her in my head when I'm reading, which doesn't happen often. Can't wait to see what happens next!
jl198001/24/2006 05:40 am
He's not gonna hurt her, is he? He's gonna untie her maybe?? (If he does he must be *really* drunk cause she is sooooo gonna knock the crap out of him!! LOL) Anyway, still absolutely loving this story, it's a really good idea, very funny and intriguing too...can't wait to see what happens when they get to Dru...if they make it that far...