Needy by icemink
Chapter: Dominance
 
Maddy01/27/2006 03:12 am
Errr... I really enjoyed the story until now. Two of the chapters are the same chapter. "Putting it back together" and "Dominance" .And I think something is missing becouse there is big gap in the story line between chapter 10/11 and 12.
Will you check it up? I would like to read further but with this missing chapter - not so much fun.
Hey, thanks for letting me know that the chapters got messed up. I've fixed it now, and the correct chapter 11 is now posted so the story should make more sense.