Possession by icemink
Chapter: The Slave Market
 
redwulf5001/30/2006 08:17 pm
Oh yeah loving this one
Chanel 501/29/2006 03:41 pm
This is an interesting answer to the challenge, can't wait to see more.
daisy01/29/2006 03:27 pm
ohhh great start. can't wait for more
Burnz01/29/2006 03:03 am
I like it! I look forward to your updates.
jl198001/28/2006 11:39 pm
very very good start...i am intrigued by this version of Buffy, and want to know what's gone on in her past...a very unique approach to this challenge... can't wait for your next update!!
Thanks so much. I really like Buffy's character, so I like to play with who she might have been if different things had happened to her. I should have the next update soon.
Jenna01/28/2006 11:33 pm
Very promising start. I especially liked the fight at the end. The hints at Buffy's past are intriguing. Hope you continue this.
Glad you liked it. I'm definitely conintiuing it. Glad you liked the fight, and there will be more of Buffy's past to come.
Piper01/28/2006 09:18 pm
um the story line is a little confusing. if she's a slayer, then why is she surprised at seeing a vampire being dusted?? otherwise it has lots of potential. keep updating.
Sorry about any confusion. Why Buffy's never seen a vampire dusted should become clearer in the next chapter.
bluebird01/28/2006 08:39 pm
interesting start Please write more soon
Typerbabe5701/28/2006 08:09 pm
Great start--this promises to be very interesting and I look forward to the next chapter!
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neo_trinityknot01/28/2006 07:18 pm
*bounces* I love it, more please!
Zoegrace01/28/2006 07:07 pm
very nice start. A lot of people are responding to this particular challenge. I've got an idea brewing myself...a couple actually. don't know if i'll ever get around to them though.
Thanks. It is a nice sort of open ended challenge. The sort of thing that you could do a whole bunch of different ways. My first idea for it was actually cannon, but this is more fun.
Lou01/28/2006 06:51 pm
Great fun - more please.
Yay! My first review. Don't worry I do intend to contiue, I just need to get a bit more organized, but it should be soon.