Disillusioned by Megan
Chapter: Seven
 
jl198002/19/2006 08:09 am
okay this whole darla and jesse thing is not looking good...and poor lovestruck Spike...lol...loving this story so much
Athenewolfe02/14/2006 06:52 pm
I love how you write Darla. Excellant characterizaation! I love how you give Jessie the choice of wether or not to go with her or not, the choice to live or die - excallnt writing sweetie.

Gah Okay Jessie and Darla is amazing - you are a writing goddess!
angelic_amy02/05/2006 10:06 pm
Wow... At the beginning I was shaking my head at Jesse's stupidity, but by the end of the chapter I found myself lost for words. He was disappointed when he woke still needing to breathe - the boy is just asking for trouble.

And the bit with Buffy and Spike was awesome. Very cute. I love how bad Spike has it.
Spikez_tart01/29/2006 04:27 pm
This is great. Buffy before she became a bitch. Buffy the way we loved her - chicken of the sea hairdos, skin-tight pants with giraffe spots on them, white go-go boots - and full of love and sweetness. Have to say the apple pie thing was way gross.
daisy01/29/2006 03:18 pm
wow. more please soon. love the story
MarzBar01/29/2006 01:24 pm
So, Jesse was even stupider than Xander. I guess if they had wanted to keep him alive they would have told him the truth. What silly thing is Spike going to do next?
steph01/29/2006 12:30 pm
yikers! stupid jesse! I love how lost you portray spike...well done!
gaillee01/29/2006 10:08 am
Thanks for another interesting chapter. What is Darla up to?
SpaceLord01/29/2006 06:46 am
So jesse is going to be the new butt monkey