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| Gifts by Irishrose |
| Chapter: Six |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 04/01/2006 10:39 am |
| What a whopper that was laid on them. Don't you just love those PTB and Oracles? Nice chapter. |
| Athenewolfe | 02/10/2006 06:58 am |
Noticed a small typo - "Wee were able to take back time"
Nice chapter - anxious to see what happens next! |
| jl1980 | 02/05/2006 07:50 pm |
Wow...that was intense... In a way I understand Angel's reaction, even though it makes me mad because Spike's hurting enough right now!!! Off to the next chappie now!  |
| Lou | 02/02/2006 05:49 am |
| Typical Angel reaction - blame Spike for everything. You've made me really want to smack him! |
| Irina | 02/01/2006 09:14 pm |
| The phophecy is really intriguing. I liked that Willow came to Spike's defense. Good update. |
| kim | 02/01/2006 09:00 pm |
Yeah, that does make a difference...LOL.
Stupid Buffy, not thinking of the baby first. Still childish and selfish. |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/01/2006 07:14 pm |
| Oh! the plot thickens. You realized I laughed about the hospital staff just going back to work. Only because I know that security would have been called, etc etc. Sometimes it doesn't help having that extra bit of inside knowledge. I bet you were snickering when you wrote it, weren't you |
LOL, I was! But I figured that I could get away with it because a) Sunnydale, and b) having security show up and try to toss Angel out seemed to disrupt the flow. You'll really start laughing next chapter or two!
Sometimes it's really hard when you know how things really go, because you want to write it the way it should go, but it's terribly counter-story-productive.
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| MarzBar | 02/01/2006 07:12 pm |
| Foretellings abound around the Slayer. Maybe both babies are need to found the new line. Will Angelus be able to pull himself together enough to be of any use? |
hehe...that sounds a bit...incestuous!
Honestly, I was hedgy about keeping the prophecy in. But decided that I liked it. (Because the sequel can't happen without it, mostly. *g*) |
