In The Midnight Light by Holly
Chapter: Part II
 
Vwalk06/12/2006 05:03 pm
This is probably going to sound strange, but I like the fact that Spike beat Buffy around a bit. In so many stories Spike becomes Buffy's personal whipping boy whenever she's in a bad mood and he just takes it. Though I'm a true Spuffy fan, its nice to see him get a bit of his own for once.
~*~Tasha~*~04/24/2006 09:32 pm
ooooooo ... very good chapter. The emotions are pretty high and tightly wrapped right now. Excellent releases all around. Well written.
Soul of the Rose03/31/2006 03:16 pm
Chapter 2 doesn't dissapoint - same strong story & characters. I love how you've put such depth into the backstory - really giving us insights into Buffy's feelings & motivations. This is incredibly well written - you've made me a fan
jl198003/11/2006 03:19 pm
you played that scene out perfectly...the way it happened was very realistic and believable...you write both of their emotions so welll... on to the next chapter now!!!
outforawalk02/05/2006 07:27 pm
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see where you take it. I especially liked this about Giles:
"Granted, the bloke was human and therefore fallible, but he’d had a front row seat to the beating of Angelus. If prompted, the Slayer’s Watcher could be downright frightening."
Fantabulous.
Athenewolfe02/05/2006 01:05 pm
good update!
lilmamaday02/05/2006 11:41 am
Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
Elisa02/05/2006 09:32 am
more please
gaillee02/05/2006 01:39 am
Really great! I can hardly wait to see how Spike handles this confusion. And, what does Buffy do? Thanks, fine start.
MarzBar02/04/2006 03:34 pm
Good AU! Where will he take her and what will happen when they get there? Will Spike get into her heart sooner than she can become the blockhead?
vladt02/04/2006 02:27 pm
wonderful beginning. thanks
vladt02/04/2006 02:26 pm
wonderful beginning. thanks
pfeifferpack02/04/2006 10:27 am
He can't wait for daybreak and I can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent and believable. Spike is season 2 Spike with that soft underbelly showing when it comes to love and to Buffy attractions.

redwulf5002/04/2006 08:45 am
Damn you writer good. I am loving this fic already Poor Spike Buffy used her evil femine wiles on hm
spike_spetslayer02/04/2006 08:25 am
Guh! Write more, like quick!

Sorry, was overwhelmed...excellent! Both Spike and Buffy are wonderful in their inconsolable states, and you have the mood of season 2 perfect...Spike deflating after Buffy said sorry, just priceless...and comforting the Slayer? perfect...so, please write more? Please?