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| Belonging by jl1980 |
| Chapter: Consequences |
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| Leilani | 07/13/2006 06:14 pm |
Yeah - I hate how you write Spike - he would never ever in a bazillion years act the way you have him act.
I realize that you have the right to personalize your characters and "own" your story. But I think if you are going to write fanfic - you should at least be true to the canon. As least a little bit.
You're still finishing up that Blood Bound story - try giving Spike his rocks back.
thanks. |
im sorry you hate the way i write spike...i just tend to focus more on spike's vulnerabilities...and personally, you probably already know this, but besides the personalities of the characters, i pretty much throw canon out the window in most of my fics...
which i feel is my right..*my* story, my way of telling it...
if you don't like it, that's fine..no one's forcing you to read it
thanx for the review  |
| ComedyofErrors | 02/05/2006 07:56 pm |
Once again, let me complement you on the characterization of Velvette. Wonderful, vindictive, and unfortunate.
Touching emotion on Spike's part over his rejection. |
| Thanks...I'm trying to make her hate-able, but understandable too... and I was aiming for tears with poor Spike in this chappie glad you're liking it |
| Lou | 02/05/2006 04:49 pm |
| Oooh no!! This isn't going to be pretty. Help him! |
| Don't worry, I will Just be patient |
| icemink | 02/05/2006 12:07 pm |
| Arg. Cruel cliffhanger. What is Riley going to do? I must know. Loved this chapter. Can't wait for your next update. |
| Thanks! Glad you liked it! I won't keep you waiting too long! |
| Nemo | 02/05/2006 11:28 am |
| Wow. Just read through your story and I'm dying to read more! Everything you've written feels so real, so vivid: the reactions, their feelings... I'm in awe. This is an amazing story, keep up the excellent work, I'll be waiting for more. ~Nina |
| Thank you so much for your review! Hope you keep enjoying it as the story progresses...we're about to take an interesting turn...least I hope it's interesting ;) lol |
| Spikez_tart | 02/05/2006 11:01 am |
| Evil evil cliffhanger. Evil JL for not writing more. This gets better and better. Lookinig forward to major torture of Riley and Velvet and Buffy starting to work on those push ups again. |
| Riley-torture coming up!! Dont worry, Buffy's gonna get herself straightened out before long... |
| neo_trinityknot | 02/05/2006 09:09 am |
| NO! Update soon please! |
| Coming up! ;) |
| Athenewolfe | 02/05/2006 07:21 am |
| OMG please update soon. I have to know what is going to happen - will buffy rescue spike... riley said he will kill him... oh no... more please jl more! |
| Thanks for the review...update coming up! |
| Avalon'sMysteries | 02/05/2006 06:31 am |
| Pretty harsh! Riley and Velvet need some major ass kicking! |
| I agree, and they will get it, I promise! |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 02/05/2006 02:41 am |
| *gawk* i thought buffy wasnt going to be a major biatch to spike anymore.. hmm, who's voting that riley gets his ass kicked!?! |
| Me, me!!! LOL Why did you think she wasn't going to be that way again? ;) I mean...this is *Buffy*..LOL...she's gotta have a wake up call before she can accept his love for her |
| Laura Siri | 02/05/2006 12:55 am |
| Noooooo! It cannot end like that! What a cliff-hanger! I am in love with this piece... Please update soon and save my sanity. |
| Thank you so much for your kind review!! I'm glad you're enjoying it...I'll try to update today or tomorrow |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/04/2006 09:58 pm |
| Very good chapter. I hate that Buffy acted like that but I guess she can't just be happily ever. Looking forward to the next part! |
| Yeah...she wouldn't exactly be Buffy if she could just accept happiness when she sees it, would she? But don't worry, she'll see the light before long! |
