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| Lying Eyes by jl1980 |
| Chapter: Forgotten |
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| Athenewolfe | 02/07/2006 06:34 pm |
| very sweet - i really enjjoyed this chappie! |
thanx so much  |
| letitia | 02/07/2006 10:23 am |
| I am just glad that they are showing the other just a little glimpse of their souls. Love how they are able to comfort each other and be honest with each other right now. |
| thanx...i thought they needed a little comfort in the middle of all this trouble |
| Morrigan | 02/07/2006 06:26 am |
| Awww... that got me. |
| thanx |
| Lou | 02/07/2006 05:10 am |
| God I love it when they are honest with each other - absolutely yummy! Hopefully it'll give them strength - I think they're going to need it! |
| Um...yeah...cause there's no one who's really gonna be happy about this but them, is there? |
| katakata | 02/06/2006 10:00 pm |
| Oh lovely...a really poignant resolution to the last chapter while still signposting a new phase perhaps in their story. Thing is - what will the Scoobies think about these two and their activities when (or indeed IF) they find out what's been going on? I'm particularly interested in what kind of reaction Xander will have as tolerant-mature-and-understanding-Xander has been a real pleasure to get to know thus far. Please don't send him away *Looks up at you beseechingly from beneath her lashes and offers a timidly encouraging smile* LOL! More soon please 8-) |
| Yes...I always liked Xander and hated it when the show turned him into a bigoted jealous jerk... glad you enjoyed the chapter, I was aiming for poignant ;) thanx |
| vladt | 02/06/2006 09:56 pm |
| wonderful follow to previous chapter. thanks |
| yeah i thought the last chapter needed a bit of exploration |
| pfeifferpack | 02/06/2006 09:28 pm |
Excellent chapter. I still have a feeling Angel is going to be Faith's accomplice though and Buffy will have to reevaluate her forever feelings for him.
You write a tender yet strong Spike....love your stories.
Kathleen |
| thanx, glad you like them, your kind words make my day no telling yet on who the accomplice is ;) |
| MarzBar | 02/06/2006 09:13 pm |
Nice scene. I hope they can keep this insight while pretending to hate each other for the benefit of the "friends." Is Giles a friend? Is
Angelus the bad guy? More story please. |
| you'll have to wait and see thanx |
| ComedyofErrors | 02/06/2006 08:20 pm |
| Truly brilliant dialogue. I can't express how impressed I am wiht the way you balanced the insecurities of both these characters, allowing the comfort needed to flow. |
| thanx for the compliment...that chapter was kinda tough lol... i wanted to give some sort of emotional explanation for the events of the last chapter, and bring out hero and heroine closer... anyway, glad you're enjoying it!! |
| Irishrose | 02/06/2006 06:44 pm |
| awww.....that was absolutely wonderful. A very touching chapter! |
| thanx so much...that's what i was going for! |
| akarinacj | 02/06/2006 06:32 pm |
| Very good chapter. I liked it a lot. Thank you for updating everyday. :-) |
| thanx...not quite every day lately, what with RL and all... lol...but glad you're enjoying it! |
