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| Belonging by jl1980 |
| Chapter: Edge of Darkness |
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| vladt | 03/24/2006 08:57 pm |
| finally had the opportunity to devote to your fic. good read. last couple of chapter, exceptionly good. thanks for the read. |
thanx so much, so glad you like it now that you're having the chance to read it  |
| Athenewolfe | 02/09/2006 08:28 am |
| By the way I love the last line in this fic. “Didn’t anyone ever teach you not to touch other people’s things without asking?” OMG that was so funny! |
| thanx...glad you liked it.... Spike probably didn't like it much though ;) |
| Laura Siri | 02/08/2006 11:06 pm |
| Oh, it can't end there! I want to see Riley-torture. I can't wait for another update! Feed my addiction, please... |
| Don't worry Riley will pay soon! |
| Spikez_tart | 02/08/2006 07:05 pm |
| Oh no! More evil cliffhangers! |
| sorry...a little...maybe ;) |
| AthenaHahn | 02/08/2006 06:45 pm |
| Wow... ummm... can I just say that you are EVIL for leaving it right there? I can? Okay great; YOU ARE EVIL!!!! GAH!!! Please please please update soon; I want to see Buffy kick Riley's ass!! |
| lol...one Riley a**-kicking coming up!! |
| pfeifferpack | 02/08/2006 04:23 pm |
Creative torture sequence....lots left to the mental images without writing it all out. Tricky to pull off....kudos.
Not sure who I hate more, Riley or Velvet LOL.
Felt bad that Buffy called Spike a thing, but glad she's there and cares.
I'd say she should feed Velvet to Spike but he deserves something not likely to poison him!
Excellent update to an excellent story.
Kathleen |
| Thanks...I didn't want to be too graphic with that scene for once...glad you noticed the "thing" line at the end...coming at a bad time for Spike, right after Riley's verbal abuse to reinforce it... glad you're enjoying the story |
| Nikkole | 02/08/2006 12:46 pm |
| You just had to end it there didn't you? You are a cruel, cruel person! I LOVE IT!! LOL! VERY good chapter. Can't wait for the next one. |
| yep, i know, i'm as sadistic as Riley... lol... thanx ;) |
| MAGGIE | 02/08/2006 11:16 am |
| AMAZING WONDERFUL STORY STARTED READING COULD NT STOP WAS GREATLY DISSAPPOINTED WHEN THERE WAS NT ANYMORE TO READ I HOPE SOON VERY SOON YOU LL ADD SOME MORE NICE LONG CHAPTERS PLEASE IT WOULD MAKE THIS OLD LADY IN THE MOUNTAINS VERY HAPPY THANK YOU MAGGIE |
| so glad you're enjoying it...don't worry i'll update very soon |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/08/2006 09:49 am |
| noooooooooo..... not the end of the chapter.... |
| sorry...okay not really ;) |
| Dar | 02/08/2006 09:29 am |
| Just tell me he's not just a thing to Buffy. Though Velvet is a thing, Riley is a thing both evil soulless things. Great update. |
| i'm glad so many people caught on to the importance of that line... good Buffy quip, but bad for Spike... thanx for review |
| anon | 02/08/2006 08:57 am |
| its nice that Buffy called him her THING before he passed out |
yep...poor baby, so *not* what he needed to hear  |
| ComedyofErrors | 02/08/2006 08:36 am |
Excellent last two chapters. Riley makes a good sadist with his holy water and whips. Must say I didn't anticipate the spell he'd placed on Buffy, but it makes sense. Great behavior from Velvet.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support. |
| thanx, so glad you're enjoying it |
| ComedyofErrors | 02/08/2006 08:36 am |
Excellent last two chapters. Riley makes a good sadist with his holy water and whips. Must say I didn't anticipate the spell he'd placed on Buffy, but it makes sense. Great behavior from Velvet.
I like Buffy's awakening sense of self and her friends' support. |
| thanx |
| Stacy | 02/08/2006 07:12 am |
| Oh my! That was a horrible place to stop. Now I have to nag... HURRY, Hurry. Post, Post! We really need an update ASAP! Thanks for writing(quickly). |
| okay okay!!!! LOL thanx for kind review, motivates fast writing |
| jacquie | 02/08/2006 05:25 am |
| My sanity may never forgive you...You CAN*T stop there!!!!! That's just cruel! MORE MORE MORE! |
| thanx so much promise update soon |
| Athenewolfe | 02/08/2006 03:55 am |
| starts up a chant for Velvet dustage. never knew I could hate a vampire character so much - excellant update sweetie! I loved this story! *Huggles* |
| i'm so glad you hate her...means I'm doing my job thanx for review |
| Lou | 02/08/2006 03:02 am |
| Yaaay! Buffy's back - and she's mad! Please update asap!! |
| yep...someone's going down |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 02/08/2006 02:29 am |
| SQUEE!!!! arghhh!!! she's there!!!! *does happy dance* |
| hehe thanx |
| Morrigan | 02/08/2006 01:49 am |
| Oh, I hope this is it...the end of that nasty Velvet tramp! You have done a wonderful job of creating a character that I really love to hate! |
| thanx...that was my goal |
| Nemo | 02/08/2006 01:49 am |
| Yes! Here comes Buffy to the rescue! Finally! All that torture made me sick, I can't tell you how mad I am at Riley, and Velvet! F*cking bitch! Sorry, now I'm cursing again... but your story reallly has catched me. Thank you for being so fast with the updates! Great story jl! |
| yeah, they're gonna pay now though thanx for review |
