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| This Is The Way The World Ends by Dark Eyed Seer |
| Chapter: Between the Motion and the Act |
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| Morrigan | 02/10/2006 12:44 am |
| Hehehe Marry me? I liked the way you had Buffy all nervous, but curious in this one. Can't wait too see what's next. |
| Karyn | 02/09/2006 10:25 pm |
| lol, love the last bit..great update as always! |
| Esther | 02/09/2006 08:36 pm |
| Ooh, I'm all giddy with the Spuffy loving. Hot, hot, HOT!!! And him making breakfast for her....ooh, I echo her statement. Can't wait for more!! |
| vladt | 02/09/2006 12:22 pm |
| sweet, sexy chapter. follow with another and i will have to reread from the beginningto get the storyline back. like that would be a hardship. thanks |
| MarzBar | 02/09/2006 11:07 am |
| Teeheehee! Very cute and sexy chapter. |
| Chanel 5 | 02/09/2006 08:54 am |
| Thankyou for letting us read this wonderful heartwarming story. I've added it to my favourites. |
| Dar | 02/09/2006 08:04 am |
"Things I Want to Make Spike Do with My Feminine Wiles' list and she pressed on." What a book that would make.
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| lilmamaday | 02/09/2006 07:34 am |
Buffy whimpered, “Marry me?” to which Spike responded "Marry you? Nahhhh, lets just have some more hot sex and we can claim each other, it has a much better sucess rate than marriage."
Ok, so that isn't what he will say, you'll have him say something much better and it won't be something that will have Buffy running for the hills. I loved the interaction b/n the two of them and can't wait for the next update! |
| neo_trinityknot | 02/09/2006 07:19 am |
| loving the yummy Spuffy! |
| jl1980 | 02/09/2006 07:18 am |
| I love that last line!! this chapter was so sexy and sweet, I love Buffy's shyness and boldness, and this Spike is incredible...no,Buffy, he *can't* marry you...he has to marry ME!!! LOL great update! |
| Lou | 02/09/2006 05:05 am |
| Nicely done - and no hassle from any 'friends'. Yum |
| Athenewolfe | 02/09/2006 04:34 am |
| I LOVED the orgasm with her on top... oh my god what a wonderfully delicious sex scene. Makes me all tingly... thought it was hilarious that she could give him a blowjob but not tell him she needed to go to the bathroom - LOL that is so true of young girls *giggles* LOL and "Marry me" Oh yeah - you have buffy as a young woman written perfectly. I think many authors forget that she is quite young when they are writing her character and often overlook the actions or reactions that someone would do/say. Perfect characterization here. *hugs! |
