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| Legacy by Kyra Storm |
| Chapter: Chap 11: Quenching the Desire |
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| Athenewolfe | 06/07/2006 07:07 am |
| LMAO - the last line was absolutly perfect - great update - great story! I am really enjoying this and can't wait to see where youtake it! |
| redwulf50 | 05/14/2006 09:39 pm |
“Man, I sure need to get me one of them mortal enemies.”
Everyone does man, every one  |
| vladt | 03/12/2006 12:23 am |
| excellent chapter. plot can be somewhat overrated. thanks for the fun. |
| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/03/2006 01:13 am |
| ROFLMAO ! That last line was hilarious. This whole chapter was steaming hot. {fanning herself} Darn fine writing. Let the plot stay hidden. LOL. Although I still felt it was plot building and character building in the chapter. {Smiles} |
| Cewcew | 02/10/2006 08:18 pm |
| One mortal enemie for me to please, Oh and Super Size it! |
| just sue | 02/10/2006 05:33 am |
Yikes! Have just caught up with this again and am loving it! For someone who thinks they don't write good sex scenes, well, I just wanna be around when you have one you're happy with 'cos that was way good enough for me!
So looking forward to more. Thanks ever so. |
| Elizabeth Anne Summers | 02/09/2006 11:10 pm |
| lol! loved that last line! and omg, that was hot! *fans herself and passes out as well* |
| Randi Giles | 02/09/2006 11:10 pm |
| Oh Hot Dang! That was just...I need a smoke and I don't smoke. I blame you...excuse me because i musnt now go awaken my mortal enemy... |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/09/2006 10:36 pm |
| god damn that was funny!! that last line, I mean. I love this fic!! feel free to not find your plot for a while because you do good work without it. But, if you should happen to come across my brain in your search, please send it home. It's been missed. |
| ruby redgurl | 02/09/2006 09:45 pm |
| That was way HOT!!! if you cant find your plot, then pray continue and write another sexy hot chapter instead. |
| slaymesoftly | 02/09/2006 09:08 pm |
| Great chapter -hot,hot sex and finishing with a funny. |
| neo_trinityknot | 02/09/2006 07:31 pm |
| I thought it was hot... |
| Irishrose | 02/09/2006 07:03 pm |
LOL! I love Solum.
Nice scene. Very detailed. And your transitions in Buffy's thinking were very good, particularly in the first part of the chapter. |
| SpaceLord | 02/09/2006 06:46 pm |
Yeah I'm with Solum....sure could do with a mortal enemy ;)
So when the plot gets lost just go with the smut, well I'm not complaining  |
| Ella | 02/09/2006 04:54 pm |
wow. that was so amazing. just absolutely amazing.
keep up the great work! |
| MarzBar | 02/09/2006 03:18 pm |
| WHEW!! We all need mortal enemies like that. Gotta go smoke now. |
| maryperk | 02/09/2006 03:15 pm |
| Kyra, dear, if that was disjointed and unsmooth.... All I can say is MORE MORE MORE!!!!!! Here's a carrot to lure the plot bunny out. Maybe you should wing them back to Sunnyhell and write some Scooby reaction to Buffy being missing. Might help the other bunnies come together. |
