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| Belonging by jl1980 |
| Chapter: Ownership |
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| Lou | 02/13/2006 05:07 am |
| At least she's saved Spike - but Buffy's got a long way to go before she'll be back in my good books!! |
| i agree...she has a lot to make up for... |
| Laura Siri | 02/10/2006 01:08 pm |
Ah! So good! Poor Spike... are we going to see his chip removed anytime soon so he return some of the damage to Riley? Sweet vengance!!! ::rubs her hands in evil glee::
And the final line, "You were never mine at all," that so sums up the abuse Buffy's been suffering, because that's what it comes down to. Spike is hers, even as a slave. Fantasticly beautiful! Thank you! |
| thanx...glad you are enjoying it.. Riley definitely will be getting more damage done...de-chippage not any time soon...but we'll see ;) |
| Avalon'sMysteries | 02/10/2006 10:03 am |
| Wonderful chapter! I hope there will be some more Riley kicking, he really deserves it. I love this story even though the previous chapters made me nervous and almost sick. |
| oh yeah, Riley deserves a lot worse than one little butt-kicking for all the damage he did to Spike |
| Athenewolfe | 02/10/2006 04:15 am |
| Wow fab chapter *does happy dance that Velvet is dust! That was wonderful *grin* I LOVE this story! hehehe runs off to update it to website! *hugs* |
| hehe thanx so much ;) |
| akarinacj | 02/10/2006 04:09 am |
| I love this story. The chapter was great. although Velvet "died" too easily. She should have suffered more, he,he. The only thing Iīm sad about is that under all this, Spike was unconsious and didnīt see Buffy saving him. Well, but at least heīs in for a surprise when he wakes up again. Well you know the drill...: Please update soon!!!! |
everyone seems to be of that opinion about Velvet lol  hmmm... yeah Spike's gonna get a surprise for sure thanx for review |
| Jenna | 02/10/2006 12:39 am |
| Absolutely wonderful chapter. This is what I've been waiting for. Go, Buffy, go! Now she needs to take poor Spike out of there and take care of him. |
| tlc for Spike, coming up ;) |
| Nemo | 02/09/2006 11:44 pm |
YES! *does snoopy dance* She's out of there! Yay! No more Mrs Riley Finn! That was so powerful, I loved it! Finally Buffy shows her true self, and doesn't let that jerk put her down!
And I loved hur you portraied Xander, it's so typical of him to go up agaist soemone bigger just to protect Buffy. Gotta love himfor that!
Thanks for the updaet jl! I can't wait to see wat happens next!
~Nina |
| thanx, glad you like it Xander is actually one of my favorite characters, until season six when they turned him into a jealous bigot...i like to write xander like he originally was...loyal and brave and a genuinely good friend |
| Nikkole | 02/09/2006 10:29 pm |
| VERY GOOD! Riley kickage, YAY!!! I can't wait to see how this ends, and the reunion with Buffy and Giles! |
| oh not the end...not yet |
| Spikes Slayer2 | 02/09/2006 08:20 pm |
YAY she beat his ass all the way to the moon and back!!! WHOO HOO!! poor spike...  |
| yeah, poor spikey needs some tlc, dontcha think? ;) |
| AthenaHahn | 02/09/2006 08:06 pm |
| YES!!! RILEY BASHING!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! WRITE MORE, SOON!!!! VERY SOON!!! *coughs* Ahem... umm... sorry about the caps... I get a little emotional when I'm tired. *sheepish grin* |
| lol...thanx...glad you liked the update...there will be more riley bashage...promise |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/09/2006 08:02 pm |
| wow. powerful stuff! fantastic chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing what happens when they get spike out of there. |
| thanx so much...i got a little misty writing this chap lol |
| Irishrose | 02/09/2006 07:23 pm |
| awwww....what a wonderful chapter. And yay! Velvet is dust. Too bad Riley couldn't join her. Thanks for the update! |
| no, riley deserves worse than she got... ;) thanx for review |
| Morrigan | 02/09/2006 07:20 pm |
| Oh yeah! Riley SO deserved to be beat down. And that nasty Velvet is dust. Whoo-hoo!... I might have prefered a beating for her too, but at least she's dead, and that's a good thing! Can't wait for the next update. |
| yeah...in my opinion riley's the real evil one here...in a way, velvet was a victim too... thanx for review |
| pfeifferpack | 02/09/2006 07:14 pm |
OH yeah......Velvet dusting (although it was a bit quick considering all the ways I would have done her in *G*).
Poor Spike will be in for a surprise at the change in his situation methinks.
I am also certain that Riley isn't done yet with either of them and GIles and his organization might just come in handy!
Excellent update (I've been waiting all day hoping for this).
Kathleen |
| you're very perceptive...my villains almost always come back lol...thanx so much for your review |
| Typerbabe57 | 02/09/2006 06:43 pm |
| EXCELLENT! Not exactly the holy water enema I envisioned for Velvet, but very satisfying. Loved the Riley bashing (does that make me a bad person?)-- he got what he deserved. Good to see Buffy get her fire back (and friends) back. Just hope poor Spike will recover okay. |
| wow,everybody really hated velvet, huh? and she started off to be a victim!! LOL...i love the riley bashing too, doesn't make you bad person...or does it make *me* a bad person...hmmm... ;) thanx so much for review |
| ComedyofErrors | 02/09/2006 06:17 pm |
| Ha! Great chapter. I can't wait to see poor Spike when he wakes. |
| yeah, he's in for a bit of a surprise |
| Jacquie | 02/09/2006 05:43 pm |
I have just discovered that I really hate reading unfinished works! I feel like a junkie who has to beg for their next fix! Truely loving your story, but getting frustrated at the (very short) wait between chapters. This story is a definate 'page turner', but some really EVIL person ripped out the rest of the pages!"
Please feed my addiction soon. |
| lol...thanx so much, glad to know i've got you hooked ;) hope you enjoy the rest just as much and i'll try to keep the updates coming quick |
