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| Sympathy for the Devil by ComedyofErrors |
| Chapter: Chapter 14 |
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| ~*~Tasha~*~ | 03/29/2006 01:12 am |
| Holy Cow and WOW! Excellent chapter update. She saw just how much she was Cecily ... after she hated what Cecily did ... now she realizes that she did it too! I'm so glad I have four more chapters to read before the updates are caught up for me. |
| angelic_amy | 03/12/2006 11:51 pm |
| He listened to them having sex? Poor Spike! But at least it’s opening Buffy’s eyes now. I’m so glad one of the memories was that moment in the alley – Buffy finally got to see how much of a bitch she was and how much her words affected Spike. The vindictive side of me hopes that it is too late for her to make things right, and that Spike will reject her if and when they come out of this cycle of memories. |
| Megan | 02/22/2006 12:57 am |
| Whoot! The scenes I've been waiting for and how excellent are you for how you've written them? I am so hooked into this fic. Love it completely and you, you stunner. More I say, more! |
| jl1980 | 02/22/2006 12:18 am |
perfect last line...love this story...  |
| Gail | 02/20/2006 06:45 pm |
| Fantastic story, I search eagerly for the latest update. |
| Athenewolfe | 02/19/2006 08:49 am |
| AHHH no more story - looks pathetics and begs ... I hope you update soon this is a captivating fic! |
| Athenewolfe | 02/19/2006 08:49 am |
| bingo - give the girl a medal - hope she feels miserable .. hehe I love spuffy i really do.. I just like her to realuze she was a first blass *itch at times. hehe I love this story you are weaving fantastic! |
| MARGARET | 02/16/2006 06:22 pm |
| THIS IS GREAT...I'M SO GLAD TO SEE BUFFY FEELING BADLY ABOUT USING THOSE WORDS TO SPIKE HOPE THINGS PROGESS TO THE PIONT WHERE SHE CAN APOLOGISE TO HIM! LOVE THE STORY |
| Pulchra Nex | 02/16/2006 11:59 am |
| Finally! *does happy dance* sorry but come on! Finally she sees it! :-D you're doing great with this story! please update soon? |
| Bridget | 02/16/2006 09:08 am |
| Nicely done. I am glad you took her to those scenes. I hope it opened Buffy's eyes. It will be interesting to see how you will get Spike to come out of his catatonia. |
| Lou | 02/16/2006 04:49 am |
| At last she has seen the true Spike - can't wait for him to take the antidote! |
| Dirktavian | 02/16/2006 02:17 am |
| Awesome chapter, and what I've been waiting for all along. Wonderful, and I was so thrilled to see you had posted. I love this story; please keep those updates coming! |
| Rose | 02/15/2006 09:12 pm |
| Great story. |
| gaillee | 02/15/2006 08:10 pm |
| Wonderful chapter! "And then. She. Said. It. "You're beneath me.'" That was powerful! Thanks for an excellent update. |
| Nikkole | 02/15/2006 07:56 pm |
| I was waiting for this memory! I knew it would be in here! GREAT update! I love how you incorporate things we know into the story. I think I have said it before, but it makes it a very smooth read. |
| slaymesoftly | 02/15/2006 06:40 pm |
| Still loving this story - Buffy needed that shot of how big a bitch she was to him. |
| redwulf50 | 02/15/2006 06:10 pm |
Can you like catch her in a feedback loop and make her live through it over and over again  Cause Buffy soooooo needed that one
Damn good chappie |
| Allana | 02/15/2006 06:01 pm |
| Great story more please! |
| kim | 02/15/2006 05:19 pm |
| Oh, that was beautiful. Very powerful. What better insight into herself than to see who she is through other's eyes? |
| MarzBar | 02/15/2006 05:10 pm |
| It's good that Buffy has to be faced with her cruelty. Can Spike awaken from his coma soon now; before she forgets and once again thinks she and her friends know everything about good and bad. |
| Stacy | 02/15/2006 04:50 pm |
| So good. Ya' know, this a been a consistenly good story. I've enjoyed every chapter I've read. I'm so looking forward to seeing what happens when Buffy gets outta' Spike's head. Thanks for writing. |
| Pin | 02/15/2006 04:42 pm |
| Excellent chapter! I can't wait to see what happens when they are finally both conscious! Is Spike in for a surprise. Thanks. |
| akarinacj | 02/15/2006 04:37 pm |
Great chapter as always. But I want him to wake up!!!!
can´t wait to see how their relationship is going to be!!! Please update soon. |
| Kristen | 02/15/2006 04:06 pm |
Okay, love your story! I haven’t reviewed before because I am lazy but it kicks ass. The idea isn’t completely original but you have written it fantastically! I love how her attraction and crush to Spike develop over time. It’s not something that just happens at the snap of someone’s fingers.
The one thing I did notice though that you could fix would be the errors. You left letters of words. Here is an example for you
"The scattered on the ground around him, much like his hopes. "
The "the" should be "they".
But that’s all, I am just really nitpicking about that stuff, grammar can really ruin a ff for me.
Keep it up and update soon!
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Thank you for reading.
I'm sorry for the distraction. My beta and I try, but we do sometimes miss things. |
| Jessica | 02/15/2006 04:05 pm |
| Amazing chapter. I am completely in love with this story. Please update again soon. I really want to see what happens when they get out of Spike's head. |
| Nemo | 02/15/2006 03:51 pm |
| I love it. Very good chapter. Funny how you made Buffy find out about Spike's love for her, guess that was a wakeup call. And she was really a bitch in fool for love wasn't she? I'm glad she realized some things this time around though. I'm looking forward to your next update |
| Taylormaid | 02/15/2006 03:39 pm |
| Wow! An insightful Buffy...now I can't wait until Spike wakes up! |
| Taylormaid | 02/15/2006 03:38 pm |
| Wow! An insightful Buffy...now I can't wait until Spike wakes up! |
| spikeslovebite | 02/15/2006 03:28 pm |
| loved it! wonderful update hun and that last line? just perfect! |
| Steph | 02/15/2006 03:21 pm |
| AAAAAMAZING!!!!!! I love your take on the memories you write so beautifully. wonderfull job can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Jacquie | 02/15/2006 03:04 pm |
Brilliant, as usual, just a question though, didn't the alley scene happen before the Riley stakeage scene?
But yep, Buffy is Cecily!
More soon please |
*shhh!* Nobody was supposed to notice!
But being the intelligent person you are, you did. The order is incorrect, but I chose to write it this way because I felt the effect was worth the inaccuracy.
Thank you for reading. I'm glad you've enjoyed it enough to come this far. |
| Shady | 02/15/2006 03:01 pm |
Absolutely loved this chapter.
Loved Buffy's reaction to the memory of what she did in the alley. Can't wait to see what happens when they surface from his mind. |
| Joyce | 02/15/2006 02:33 pm |
| Wondering how Buffy will Buffy will make it up to Spike now that she know what's going on? |
| Isabel | 02/15/2006 02:02 pm |
| Soooo good! I absolutely loved it. Every word. Seeing Buffy realize exactly what she'd done when saying those words, how hurtful she'd been, that was very satisfying. |
| bloodshedbaby | 02/15/2006 01:56 pm |
| truly spectacular chapter. I LOVE the way you've used canon here and given it new meaning. Fabulous stuff! |
| pfeifferpack | 02/15/2006 01:56 pm |
God how I love this story, sweetie! I get so excited every time I see an update and you never disappoint! Yummy and oh how I wish Buffy HAD taken that walk in Spike's mind.
Kathleen |
| UncagedMuse | 02/15/2006 01:20 pm |
| Absolutely love it! Glad Buffy got to see how hateful her words truly were. Can't wait for more. |
| anon | 02/15/2006 01:18 pm |
::shiver:: OH, oh, oh. Good chapter. I've got chills.
"God. She was Cecily."
::shudder:: |
